Reviews of MARVEL: Killswitch's Origin by NightHowl - Webnovel

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NightHowl

Author here, a bit too late and it's not really a review but I will explain here the bad and the good of the story, it's a little bit biased, since it's from my perspective but let's just hear me out. First, let me talk about the MC. It's not a guy getting reincarnated into a body of a child, but a child who recalled his memory of the past, and the memory only contains information about his experience of playing games and watching movies. oh also no harem. Second, the world. This is not your typical story of how the MC getting reincarnated to, let's say, only MCU world and get involved while trying to improve the already good storyline with the characters in that world becoming mobs shouting he's the best and strongest, he will save us! But it's more about the MC trying to survive from the threat of MULTIPLE world that was integrated as ONE. Such as Resident Evil, Devil May Cry, Onimusha, X-Men, and MCU. But that was the premise of the story, how would the world be if all of these were put altogether? And then BAM! this fanfic. There are also several minor world involved but it's for the progress of the plot only. Every novel had plot holes but I will try to minimize it and not letting in gaping wide and stare at you. If it's not your cup of tea, I get it. You can drop it, and come back later when there's more chapter. Third, the writing. English is not my native language so mistakes will be made, but not left unfixed. I will try my best to improve my writing as to not disturb your reading experience. Fourth, the updates schedule, for now I tried to stick at 3-5 chaps per week as to not decrease the quality of both story and writing. I will try to finish this story even though I didn't get paid for it. (mainly because I don't know how the patreon system works) :) A lot of people said the system had sentient, yes, but there's a reason for it. And it's not completely sentient if I may say. you'll find it out why in Raccoon City arc soon. For those complaining, "I came here for the Marvel tag, please delete it if there's no marvel in it." The title is Killswitch's ORIGIN, I want to tell the story of how the MC grew up and had at least some personality. Not just mindlessly wrecking world left and right and saying I'm rich handsome and had some beautiful woman to have coitus with. So the MCU will come but at a later part after a few arc and time skip. so, please be patient. sorry for the long post and the lack of potatoes. You can comment if you have any questions and critique. Thanks

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Darith_Sky

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Hyrka_Sz

this is the first fanfic I read, so I'm a bit biased in giving 5 stars. is the author even alive?

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Daoist825PDv

Good book I loved it and yes yes yes yes yes

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Chill_Guy

I literally almost cried reading this! how can this just be a fanfic!??! i read this a year or two ago. And I gotta say if the update is a bit more stable then it would be perfect.

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Hero_king

Please continue posting this story.............please

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The_Puffer

This is NOT marvel world. This Just a random world that has resident evil, marvel, Devil May cry and other type of games and movies mashed together. Just because you have a shield doesnt means it is marvel. Thats like saying Just because umbrella exist, it is resident evil world But here we have both and more.

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Darith_Sky

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Angry_Reviewer

How to make your novel trash in 1 easy step: Claim your novel is in the MCU and then immediately add random non MCU elements, boom, instant trash story.

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Arthalia

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G1LGAMESH

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Dessadis

The plot is too fast for me, the author didn't even give mc time to grow up, mc 8 years but his actions didn't make sense to me for his first experience in the fight

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butterfly_sunlight

great story.................................................................................................................................

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Eduardo_Castilho

Ótima história, muito profunda e com ótimas ideias good Jon👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

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No_friends_

it is a crossover of like a thousand things its good but mc is kinda stupid ________________________________________________________________________________

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Eduardo_Castilho

Ótima história 👍🏼. Muito profunda e complexa, com ótimos e poderes e mundos, me deu muita inspiração👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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shiva997

Just reread novel. I hope author-sama start posting new chapter again. love it❤ love it❤ love it❤ love it❤ love it❤ love it❤ love it❤ love it❤ love it❤ love it❤ love it❤

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john_loyd

does the mc has a auto k!ll or fight? skill cuz its similar to a manga that i read where the mc has an auto figh skill cuz there no way he had kill the group that attack his family

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Aprox

One of the best fanfics in webnovel, compared to other fanfics this one might be something that will keep me up late at night reading the story. Enjoy the 5 stars author.

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Dreamer_1297

tragedy. this word describes this novel best.. mc life is made so miserable that it's overdone.. his life is played in the hands of strong.. his circumstances are like wherever he goes something bad happens.. atleast make it like mc is able to cntrol his own fate nd life.. well ur story ur choice, there is too much tragedy nd it's not my cup of the tea.. m not going venila but it's really a bit too much..

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DaoistyPKqmt

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KitsuneYuth

It's good, and I'm really looking forward to it. to see what will happen from here. I was wondering why Edward never asked the Crone to use the "Mystic Palm" to remove his soul from his body and see what the other soul would be. But, I know these are small details. The plot of the story is getting better and better.

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Decimation

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Nero_2

WHOEVER HASN'T READ THIS, HAS TO READ THIS!!!! THE STORY IS SO WELL MIXED AND PLANNED OUT, AMAZING!!! THE MC's BACKGROUND AND CHARACTER ARE SO WELL DONE. THE WORLD MAKES YOU WISH IT WAS A REAL THING!!! YOU GOT TO READ THIS!!!

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crinix

You know why people read fanfics and novels....coz they wants to spend some time living a life of fantasy and forgot stress....but if u make the novel same as real life...same problems...not many people will like...Great fanfic...a very good story...but its tooo much drama...i know it's for character development..but what do u want to develop in 8 year old kid bro???... it's just drama

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WoofWoof

awful grammar, i cannot read without getting stopped by the grammar. it is like taking a pee break during a movie The system is stupid, plot makes no sense The system arrived before transmigration

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Daoist721221

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Sexy_Guardian

Honestly, I really love this fanfic so much. The characters are immaculate and the world-building too. Plus I like how it's not strictly marvel and it has other things as well. Very well done author

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Kadish

tl:dr the author needs lots of practice, outlining, and proof reading beyond spell check. in a word, the story feels "discombobulated". the following are personal observations, not personal attacks. it can be used to improve what ive read so far in this fan fiction. everythings feels slapped together, without proper setup, and is lacking in almost ever catagory. It lacks both explanation and basic lead up for almost everything, causing the whole book to feel disjointed and its like im reading a fever dream. there are too many crossovers dumped on you, and it does it almost all at once magnifying the confusion. Its almost a collection of thoughts rather than a fan fiction designed for consumption, as if the author has an unorganized story in his head, and also has difficulty putting it coherently into words on a paper. dont give up on writing, but always move forward with plans to improve.