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needs to be redone. can't follow the story line at all. everything is going in multiple directions and has no flow. word placement and Grammer is all wrong and some one needs to redo everything about this book.
Bad grammar (Bye the way english is my 2.language ı am not so knowledgeable) ı only read first chapter ı didnt manage read rest let me give some examples: he his phone interface turned into together the battery of twinkle. system why will ı naked turning baby appear in trash can'' Zhang Lang needs to understand own situtation. anyways there is a lot grammar mistakes it will be good if they are corrected Its not readable for now
It will take a special kind of mind to read this and extract the story buried within this horrific machine translation. What follows now is just filler so I hit the minimum character count. I literally have nothing more to say about this story.
needs to be redone. can't follow the story line at all. everything is going in multiple directions and has no flow. word placement and Grammer is all wrong and some one needs to redo everything about this book.
Bad grammar (Bye the way english is my 2.language ı am not so knowledgeable) ı only read first chapter ı didnt manage read rest let me give some examples: he his phone interface turned into together the battery of twinkle. system why will ı naked turning baby appear in trash can'' Zhang Lang needs to understand own situtation. anyways there is a lot grammar mistakes it will be good if they are corrected Its not readable for now
It will take a special kind of mind to read this and extract the story buried within this horrific machine translation. What follows now is just filler so I hit the minimum character count. I literally have nothing more to say about this story.