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A good fanfic actually. Would recommend for those who are looking for a dark tone verse of peter parker. A fiction where as usual the world dealt him the wrong cards and this time, he had enough. TLDR: he is batman with a gun.Shame the author stopped updating this work though.
This is an au with a mind numbing mishmash of characters and events. It takes from the mcu, pre mcu, spiderverse, insomniac spiderman, netflix marvel and more. As one would expect this results a whole slew of issues with a coherent setting being the lest of them. Spiderman and his posse are meant to be city-level threat heroes, hence his very popular saying 'just your friendly neughbourhood spiderman'. Any time he's elevated above that level, the story loses its charm, and this fic suffers from that same problem. Why do I care what peter personal struggles and life are when reality bending beings have their eyes on him. Lastly, this mc is not a villain, just a violent antihero and it seems like its going to turn into a harem. Wish the tags made that clear.
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Wow just wow each chapter the story just gets better keep up the good work author💯💯👏........................................................................................................................
Muy bueno, me encanta, solo tengo cosas buenas para decir sobre está novela y recién me acuerdo de que no la califique.........................
If you're looking for a good story this is for you, this is dark story about peter parker. It has issues mainly the update stability , but it can easily be ignored. it's good give it a try
Other than updates this story is fire, the author does a great job in taking it slow but not too much it bores people.
So there will be that business involving the heirs ..............................................................................................................................
Too many confusing powers. And if you wanted a Evil MC, You could have chosen Carnage or Venem. Not pityful Peter. When peter is like this, it doesn't feel like peter anymore.
So far I’m loving this fic so much To bad I came to this fic so early, I would rather binged it since the chapters are so good
Its very confusing to read. Author need a clear mind to make the story work.
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bro r u gonna continue the story...dont listen to the haters we would live for you to continue
So apparently this is a thing now, I've been seeing it everywhere so I decided to join the trend of shameless authors. Don't mind me here another shameless author reviewing his own work. tbh tis my first fic so It's confusing at the start but stick around and you might just enjoy it. Feel free to leave a review or a comment, am actively trying to improve my writing as the story goes on and reader feedback helps a lot.
Bruh, can someone tell me if he ever gets his revenge? Cause all I see is him getting stopped over and over again and getting beat up…..at this point the fanfic is just making me angry🤨
I like this novel very much this is one of the best Peter parker/spider-man fanfics have ever read even though it is confusing at first but in the later chapters u will understand everything I can't wait for the interaction with him & gwen & the rest so please 🙏🏿 author San don't drop
Man I'm loving this hot really a fan of fics where they either posses Peter Parker's body or an altered Peter but this is by far one of the greater fics I've read only bad thing is the update schedule but beyond that great
Este muy bueno el fanfic lo más interesante que este Peter es más diferente qué otros Peter de otros fanfic 10/10 .
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This is an excellent fic, with minor errors in the writing being the only thing bad I can say about it. The only worry I have for the future is how many more abilities he will get, as the ones he has now already make him op with anymore may end up being pointless.
author you were making demons do you know this s*** Peter Parker could have done with just his spider abilities you just gave him the strength of gouro and depression looking forward to it 👍
Muy buen fic de Spiderman, ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Comenzando muy bien, gran desarrollo de personajes, el mundo no se ha abierto aún pero da unos indicios de que sera suave. Esperando lo mejor para este fic y su autor.
If you're looking for a mysterious, dark story about peter parker, then you found it. It has a few issues ranging from the update stability and the system being wonky cuz of its placed in the story, but it can easily be ignored. In summary, would recommend.
A good fanfic actually. Would recommend for those who are looking for a dark tone verse of peter parker. A fiction where as usual the world dealt him the wrong cards and this time, he had enough. TLDR: he is batman with a gun.Shame the author stopped updating this work though.
This is an au with a mind numbing mishmash of characters and events. It takes from the mcu, pre mcu, spiderverse, insomniac spiderman, netflix marvel and more. As one would expect this results a whole slew of issues with a coherent setting being the lest of them. Spiderman and his posse are meant to be city-level threat heroes, hence his very popular saying 'just your friendly neughbourhood spiderman'. Any time he's elevated above that level, the story loses its charm, and this fic suffers from that same problem. Why do I care what peter personal struggles and life are when reality bending beings have their eyes on him. Lastly, this mc is not a villain, just a violent antihero and it seems like its going to turn into a harem. Wish the tags made that clear.
Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update? Update?
Wow just wow each chapter the story just gets better keep up the good work author💯💯👏........................................................................................................................
Muy bueno, me encanta, solo tengo cosas buenas para decir sobre está novela y recién me acuerdo de que no la califique.........................
If you're looking for a good story this is for you, this is dark story about peter parker. It has issues mainly the update stability , but it can easily be ignored. it's good give it a try
Other than updates this story is fire, the author does a great job in taking it slow but not too much it bores people.
So there will be that business involving the heirs ..............................................................................................................................
Too many confusing powers. And if you wanted a Evil MC, You could have chosen Carnage or Venem. Not pityful Peter. When peter is like this, it doesn't feel like peter anymore.
So far I’m loving this fic so much To bad I came to this fic so early, I would rather binged it since the chapters are so good
Its very confusing to read. Author need a clear mind to make the story work.
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bro r u gonna continue the story...dont listen to the haters we would live for you to continue
So apparently this is a thing now, I've been seeing it everywhere so I decided to join the trend of shameless authors. Don't mind me here another shameless author reviewing his own work. tbh tis my first fic so It's confusing at the start but stick around and you might just enjoy it. Feel free to leave a review or a comment, am actively trying to improve my writing as the story goes on and reader feedback helps a lot.
Bruh, can someone tell me if he ever gets his revenge? Cause all I see is him getting stopped over and over again and getting beat up…..at this point the fanfic is just making me angry🤨
I like this novel very much this is one of the best Peter parker/spider-man fanfics have ever read even though it is confusing at first but in the later chapters u will understand everything I can't wait for the interaction with him & gwen & the rest so please 🙏🏿 author San don't drop
Man I'm loving this hot really a fan of fics where they either posses Peter Parker's body or an altered Peter but this is by far one of the greater fics I've read only bad thing is the update schedule but beyond that great
Este muy bueno el fanfic lo más interesante que este Peter es más diferente qué otros Peter de otros fanfic 10/10 .
Reveal Spoiler This is an excellent fic, with minor errors in the writing being the only thing bad I can say about it. The only worry I have for the future is how many more abilities he will get, as the ones he has now already make him op with anymore may end up being pointless.
author you were making demons do you know this s*** Peter Parker could have done with just his spider abilities you just gave him the strength of gouro and depression looking forward to it 👍
Muy buen fic de Spiderman, ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Comenzando muy bien, gran desarrollo de personajes, el mundo no se ha abierto aún pero da unos indicios de que sera suave. Esperando lo mejor para este fic y su autor.
If you're looking for a mysterious, dark story about peter parker, then you found it. It has a few issues ranging from the update stability and the system being wonky cuz of its placed in the story, but it can easily be ignored. In summary, would recommend.