It’s alrightttt….the problems I see rn out of the few chaps it has is the Grammar, it’s a problem here and it needs some editing. The Mc and the Robs talk was messy and that’s all for now, I’ll change it later on.
it is good but there is not enough chapters to truly decide that well other than that I am happy there is more yugioh stuff and I hope that this story will get tons more chapters
It’s alrightttt….the problems I see rn out of the few chaps it has is the Grammar, it’s a problem here and it needs some editing. The Mc and the Robs talk was messy and that’s all for now, I’ll change it later on.