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Humans?
Vampires?
Mutants?
KILL!!!
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great translation, but the biggest mistake translator made is the MC's name is Bi Xiao.
I have been reading this as a buffer as I've caught up with my main Fics, but was surprisingly interested enough to keep reading for a while. The premise of the novel is quite straightforward, as the name implies: The MC gets stronger, the more he kills. Nothing crazy, but easy to follow. Writing Quality / Stability of Updates: In terms of these two, the FF leaves nothing to be desired. There are already quite a few chapters, and new ones are released on a daily basis. The grammar is also good, and the writing style per se is also high-tier. Development / Characters / World: As I've mentioned, this FF managed to pull me in, and I ended up reading about 100 Chapters within a few days, but ultimately decided to drop it, as minor and later on also major annoyances kept stacking up. Decide for yourself if u can look past these, but I'll just mention some of the problems I had with this. This is a Chinese FF translation, which really shows throughout almost all chapters through the constant subtle racism (albeit not as strong as in other Chinese Fics), racial stereotypes, Chinese propaganda and last but not least, the MC, who is simply called Bi Xiao. Quite catchy right. The second problem is that, for me, the Character development doesn't match the story development. By chapter 100, the MC can almost somewhat match powerhouses like The Ancient One, yet the only significant characters he has met are Black Widow and some of the X-Men. And even with them, he has spoken no more than maybe 20 sentences. Of course, he meets others like Characters from the Blade Movie and various Demons and Demi-Gods, but I personally don't want to read through hundreds of chapters for the MC to finally encounter the "Main Cast", especially when he, at that point, will already will be at the level of Odin or above. That will just lead to our Boy Bi Xiao one-shotting any and all villains, the "Heroes" are bound to encounter. As a sidenote I also see signs of Bella (from Twilight) being chosen as the FL, and I just want to ask: Why? I mean, it comes down to preference, but ... Why? In a world where there are Characters like Black Widow, Scarlet Witch, Storm, Jean Grey or Emma Frost, just to name a few, Bella severely underwhelmed me as a choice, dunno. Nevertheless, these are things that stood out to me, but I still have to admit that if u want something of decent quality to read, this FF could definitely be for you. I just couldn't see
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Great writing main character isn't braindead and they actually focus on the story and make progress no harem just power hunting and a few day to day great start fr
Raw name? Very interesting story!........................................................................................................................................
I have finished reading this fanficial chapter 277 and I can say that till chapter 200 I really loved this fanfic. The translation was done perfectly with nearly no mistakes that I could find, and I could also see that the translator also edited some parts to remove some Chinese elements from the fanfic. Though I really don't understand why the author insisted on inserting Bella from Twilight universe as a love interest in a Marvel fanfic out of nowhere... That was really unrelated to anything, the MC and Bella also somehow and weirdly got together from nowhere.... Anyway, from chapter 200 the original author made an arc so boring and unrelated to the MC I really just found myself skipping chapters. The ending of the arc was so disappointing that there wasn't any progress or any major character appearing or dying or improving etc... That was till chapter 250~ From chapter 250 there was a brief 15 chapters that I enjoyed with the MC finally appearing it again, and then once again the boring stuff resumed till the end of chapter 277 where the author put a label of "completed" but honestly you can consider this fanfic dropped. There was no ending whatsoever, the MC goals were never reached, the various love interest were never married or had children and many other issues were left open. So to sum it all up, if you are looking for a fanfic to pass time and enjoy, then this can be for you as long as you don't expect an ending or anything like that.
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This is the best translated fanfic I've ever read Writing quality 5 stars Updating stability 5 stars Story development 5 stars Character design 5 stars World background 5 stars
the pacing feels a bit uneven, and some scenes could use a bit more description to really capture the mood. There are a few grammar issues here and there, but overall, it's an okay read. If you like Wanda, it's worth checking out to see if it picks up in later chapters.
Отличный перевод, жаль концовка оборвана, но читать было интересно .👍>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>👍
Great novel is there no sequel? I just hate one thing about this novel if you reincarnated as a american use english name John Shaw not Bi Xiao call him John Shaw in every chapter till the end. Dumb translator not bothering fixing this simple mistake.
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Seems promising. The MC is quite the ruthless guy, no trauma/disconfort whatsoever after killing for the first time (even if they were thugs). 5 Chapters and Coulson is here XD [img=recommend]
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Some chinese nationalism and acquiring peak human fitness with possible super human senses by killing some cockroaches all in the first chapter.