Name: Martial Peak: Transmigration With A System
Rating: 5 (5 reviews)
Author: daoist_153

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daoist_153

Giving myself a 5 star review is mandatory and hoping for the support of the fandom too

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j_k_l

I'm loving it so far, it's the first martial peak fanfic I've enjoyed, keep up the good work. also if you want to make a discord so we can exchange pointers that would be great I'm currently writing a martial peak fanfic myself and would love some help and I'm also willing to help you with yours aswell

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Zarko_15

It looks very promising so keep going.

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Pengamat_Ketiga

I'm not sure what I read, all I know is that this fanfiction only contains lots of MC monologues? or it could also be called a first person point of view, so here the MC explains what happened and what he did, explanations from a third person point of view are almost completely non-existent, and the little dialogue between the characters just makes the characters look like empty shells, and the chance of chance seems too forced, like you haven't found the book until the new student quota rules, it looks like you're too lazy to create a new scenario and just follow the canon event with the MC as the protagonist......I hope the author fixes the part that part, and the update schedule is quite consistent but as I said, conversation is necessary to make the novel fun to read, especially when you see the shocked reactions of other characters seeing the MC's powers....