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Malia knew she was different but not the different she hoped. She was drawn to darkness and shunned the light. After a night out turned bloody, she finally felt alive in a place she probably shouldn't.
" Tell me you don't feel that," he said while clenching his jaw.
" Maybe I do, Maybe I don't, " she said walking away with an elegant badass walk.
" Maila!"
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This story so far, in essence, seems to be coming along ok. however, it is far too descriptive. for example, the first chapter was merely the MC meeting an old lady and going home. the whole dialogue was her talking to an old lady! please don't take offense, I like the book but the over descriptiveness and bad grammatical errors make it hard to read. I will continue though because I want to see you improve upon these areas. With that said, keep up the good work!
This is unique and amazing!!!!! It is very descriptive and I like it. Though there are some mistakes here and there but it is understandable! As there will be more chapters, it will become more interesting. Keep writing! :D
So far this is a straightforward story of a girl who suddenly learns that dark supernatural creatures exist. The writing is clear and direct but the heroine is not very realistic IMHO. Let’s see where it goes ....
I enjoy reading this novel. I think it is interesting and unique . I will like if the author continued to produce more content in the future at a constant pace.
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I REALLY LIKE TRHIS BOOK, it is a gem I've been trying to find for a while. the only problem is the stability of updates. I know the author has a life but I'd really like to see more updates in the future.
Good book. Could be improved in a lot of aspects. LIttle grammatical errors. multiple Pov's. Magical elements. Seems like my type of book. However, I'd like less romance more action. And please do an update.
pretty good so far but please upload more chapters so we can progress through the story more lol, I like the concept its actually amazing hehe
Intriguing plot. This novel has its own story. Modern world setting paired with ancient creatures. Forbidden love (I guess, if I'm not wrong. Haha) Yup, grammar errors were visible, but the writing was already readable... A little more proofread will do. (Hopefully) You have the story, just keep writing. Keep up the good work.
I normally review after reading 10 chapters, but since there's only 6 Chapters at the moment ... heh. Anyway. Few plus point for me: it's descriptive (which I like) yet not too heavy. So long as the chapter does have other things to it, the descriptive nature makes the characters more believable. Except for Chapter 1, the flow is good (Chapter 1 was really just TOO short for my taste). The writing improved from Ch1 - Ch6, which is a plus. The plot got really interesting after a few chapters - then again, I'm a fan of the supernatural. So I may be biased. Overall, a good read. Far better grammar and storyline than some originals tht seem to be at the top yet have so little content. I'm just flabbergasted at that. Carry on writing, Author! All the best!