Maken-ki fanfic

LV 11

Dark19

Está muy buena tu novela Man. 😆😆Seguí así que lo haces muy bien😆😆 PDT:Espero más capitulos😣😣😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅☺☺☺☺😅😅😅😅😅😅😅

The story is pretty good so far you should not done a time skip in the first chapter. It got me hooked on how he got woman at such a young age.

LV 4

mow

Well from what i've read so far it just looks its building up for smut, i mean the dude has 30 females that have been conquered by him at the age of 1-2(can't remember). The chapters are really short, there's no development at all since the author want's to timeskip every chapter or every two chapters. The grammar is bad, it needs work, they are sentences where you don't even know what the author is trying to say towards his readers, so it got to the point where i just ignored it instead of waiting my time trying to comprehend whatever that said sentence meant. Overall this is really eh, too rushed, chapters too short, no developed, while i don't recommend reading this if you wan't a good story or w/e, feel free to try it out if you just want to kill time if you don't mind the grammar mistakes and everything i pointed out above.

LV 13

Tonyorobsky

The 1st chapter is more like a synopsis than a real chapter. The 2nd one is rushed and focus straight on sex without proper prior build-up. I didn’t even bother reading the 3rd chapter. It’s a poor quality rushed work.