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Make Me Yours Forever

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Author: veramiles240

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Her only mistake, was loving the wrong person.
She's an orphan, lost her mom at birth and dad five years later. Her aunt became her guardian and got her into modeling school, where she met Jackson. He not only became her manager, he won her heart and they got married in the space of three months against her aunt’s wish. Jackson gave her love, beauty, money... but little did she know it was only a façade. A bait to lure her and hide his arrogant and obsessive heart. Their marriage lasted four years and she endured his abuse until one night when she finally got a chance to escape.
Moving into Atlanta seemed like a fresh start until she crossed paths with Jake Robbins, the handsome billionaire heir.
"Make me, yours, marry me, Laura." Jake let out. "What?!" Laura opened her eyes wide, staring at the man smirking at her. Saying the most sacred words, using the most casual tone.
“We are in the middle of nowhere for goodness sake!” she added “The next minute is not guaranteed, so why wait?” He shrugged.
Never in a million years did she ever imagine talking about marriage with the grumpy and arrogant billionaire heir, not after the hell she went through in her traumatic former life. However, with Jake, there was something different, but what happens when her past comes to light?
Find out in this story!

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datafrikie

I am enjoying the story so far. The characters are interesting and plot twist is so amazing and intriguing. A must read for everyone. Great piece of art from the author.

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S_Wolfe

I loved this plot everything was perfect so far everything is nice I like the way you wrote the story[img=Loving it] [img=update] Also please can you try to checkout my novel the Alpha is cursed and mated to a stubborn weak Lycan as well as survival of the fittest: Rise of the Phoenix,please check it out and maybe give advice on how to improve .

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Adewole_Tinuade

The story is really intriguing and captivating Nice character play and storyline, it’s really engrossing Nice job author on your book!! Keep it up!

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aaron_joshua

This is amazing, the suspense is gripping, good one Author.

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datafrikie

An interesting story with exciting characters. I love the captivating plot twist. I am so hooked from the beginning. Kudos to the author . ,😍👍🔥

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Victoria_Umukoro

Great job author 👍. Very relatable story line and I would recommend this to every reader . I love this story so much adding to my favorite . From the blurb of the story I got hooked

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ogunsuyigrace87

This is a nice write up author. I'm officially hooked to thsis

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Kelvin_Croaker

Adding to my library ASAP . I recommend to very reader. It was worth my time. Amazing job author 👍

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Jake_2345

very interesting storyline, can't wait see how Laura's life will become better

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panmayelkopba

Great job! Author. The plot twist in your story is Wow! I'm anticipating like 500 chapters to this story. Keep updating. The story is really intriguing ❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Osarumwense_Osakue

So far so good. I'm enjoying this story and I've become invested. Already added to my library. Please keep up the good work because you've gotten a new fan😊😏✨💯❤️

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DaoistQMwTuV

I'm so in love with this story🥰 I think I know how this is going to end though, Jake and Laura will end up together but I think they're going to face a lot of obstacles, I'm in for the ride though🥰

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Gabbieyy

I'm so in love with this story... Jake is such an hypocrite... I mean, why be intimate with her when he knows he doesn't want to be with her... I hope Laura stands up for herself soon.

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DaoistQMwTuV

Laura is just too gentle for my liking 😑 she should stand up to Jake already and put him in his place... I love her though, she's been through a lot and shouldn't be hooked in the same mistake again...

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panmayelkopba

I'm loving every bit of this story. Nice one author. The plot twist made me stay glued to the whole thing. Please, Kee updating, we your followers can't wait to see what happens next❤️

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rheatobi

I really love this story🥰 Jake is really getting on my nerves though 😏 and I wish Laura would just stop being so nice and loving blindly

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Toria_Brighton

Totally a beautiful sailing 🥰🥰.. Thumbs up writer 👍

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blaj_lord

This story is going as it should, the author placed every scene on point and Arlene is a good friend here. let's see how the story unfolds! Good one Author!

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Zarat_Opeyemi

Jake, the grumpy and arrogant billionaire heir doesn’t seem like someone that could stand up for Laura when the time comes for Jackson to take back his woman. He might be serious though 🤭

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KBKayboy

this story is interesting. captivating and interesting plot, story line and descriptions. although, I noticed some writing errors. author if you can double-check your chapter before publishing then that will be nice. i can't wait to see how Laura's life will change for the better.

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