/ 奇幻言情 / Mafia Baby
4.9 (18 ratings)
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PLEASE RATE MY NOVEL, AND GIVE ME FEED BACK SO I WILL KNOW WHAT TO FIX,AND TO HELP ME WITH MY WRITING. THANK-YOU my linktree. ( ).
(WHEN I COMPLETE THIS STORY I WILL FIX ALL THE MISS/MISS SPELLING) You move to a new town (New York). on your night off you go to a club. you meet this gorgeous man with blue eyes and black hair. he has tattoos every where. and piercing on his eye brow. you guys have a one night stand and you leave in the morning. what happens when you bump into each other 2 years later?.. and you have 2 year old twins. but you already know who he is, but you have a secret that know body knows except 1 person. will he find out who u really/used are. read to find out.to find out.
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Write a reviewThis is my first novel. I spend a lot of time writing it .it has all the genres I love in one book. it has a lot of stuff happening and it not even the begining.
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I was going to write a chapter today, but it wont let me sign in. I hope it will not take for every, but once it does I will upload it. thank you yall for being patient. I can now start getting out chapters out like how I used too.
Reveal SpoilerHello, I have been going through some stuff my great uncle died a week ago. I been taking some time, but i promise that it will have a new chapter in a couple days I am almost done with it. I hope u guys will like it
Reveal SpoilerNEW CHAPTER IS COMING TOMORROW!.. I hope you guys will like it. and I hope you guys like the two special POV I put in there. let me know what u thank of it once it comes out. and I will be having a contest, and who ever wins I will put them in my story. [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Reveal SpoilerI absolutely love your entire plot line😍❤.... I think the story is great, the leads are brilliant, the panning out of chapters is nice.👍 But I have issues with the your writing style. I like that your sentences don't have all the drama and excessive length, and are instead neat and brief.... But you really have to proof-read your work again cause at times your sentences come off as abrupt and hasty. Biggest point, make sure you spell the Lead protagonist name correctly; do spell checks, pronoun placement checks, re-punctuation of phrases as well as tenses. Biggest shock was seeing a beautiful book not being voted for ....Author I think youyour work is amazing ❤😍😘🔥🤩🤤 I hoe this book truly gets all the exposure it deserves 👍
I loved the way story unfolds. The synopsis gets you hooked and once you start reading the book, you can't put it down. Highly recommend.
i love the book so far granddaughter. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I love the plot and how you write the story. As I read the synopsis, I got excited suddenly. Keep it up, miss! You have potential! Keep updating the book.
I just had surgery yesterday on my right leg, and the drs. said im not allowed to go upstairs,and my laptop is up there. I have to wait for somebody to get it for me. I hope yall understands but I will keep yall updated.
Reveal Spoilerwell when i was about to start writing my mom told me that we are going on vacation, and im not allowed to bring my laptop. so I promise when I get back I will put out 2 chapters..............[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Reveal SpoilerGreat book to read! The author has done a great job writing this book...even though it's her first book she has written well...I loved the characters and the plot line. great job! and best of luck.
I know im taking for ever but im going though some stuff right now, but a new chapter should be out in the next day or two. I will keep yall updated.[img=recommend]
Reveal SpoilerI love it. It is as per readers' point of view, which is to my view, extremely satisfying. I don't know what's with me and powerful evil mafia boy, but I like him, a character that will be sure to get a grip in your heart.
After reading the synopsis, I had to know more of the story. The author has done an amazing job piecing this together and I can't wait to read the rest. Loved it author, keep up the good work. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Good use of words that complement the subject of the story as a whole. The plot develops well throughout the chapters and the picture created is beautiful. A good read.