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"Help me..."
"If you want my help…" Domhall, in his demonic form, squatted in front of Louisanna as his long, dirty nails lightly caressed her neck, creating a shallow wound in it. "Beg for it."
Domhall Palmer was living his life to the fullest as a multi-billionaire CEO, not until something strange happened after the last eclipse of the year. In the middle of the night, when everyone was intoxicated and insane, he suddenly vanished into the world… and without his consent and consciousness, he became the demon king.
When he found out that Luna, the one he had the last connection with can bring his old life back, he forced her to bound a contract with him as he wanted to make his plans achievable by keeping his prey closer… not knowing that he was the one being trapped.
Would he fall in love with her for another time? Or decide to end all his suffering by killing the woman who started it all?
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I am the author of the story, and sorry for the shameless rating hahahaha. I wanted to support my own work. It may not be the best, but I exerted effort and brain cells to write this. I wanna pat myself on the back for a job well done! Haha 😆💖
Another review from the author because the first one was a mess 😂 This story was set on different timelines, with the modern world as the most recent one. Domhall wanted to be a human and go back to his previous life, while Louisanna wanted to heal her mother. Being desperate with their wishes, they helped each other, without knowing that it should be the opposite. In this lifetime, where Domhall already has his power as the demon king of Inferno, read on how everything unfolds as Louisanna, a woman he has connection with in the past, would be a part of his life again. This story will have mystery, action-adventure, lots of plot twists, and slow burn romance in it. I hope you can give this story a shot! 💕 I also hope that you'll enjoy reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it! 🥰
This is a great book. With a good and well detailed narration except it might be needing a little bit of editing which isn't glaring, something that can be overlooked. I love the book except it has long chapters that almost got me bored. A good book
I love everything about the story. I just read the first two chapter and here are my reviews. * I love the description. The author make it seem real. * The book have a great plot
Wow you are a smart brilliant writer with good quality skills and knowledge in writing. I really love this book there are many imaginary scene which made me feel good about it.
So far, I like the main part of the story... It's written so beautifully that I want more chapters... After reading 13 chapter I thought to wrote a review to let you know you did well. Keep it up ❣️
[Reviewed on: 12-09-22] [Reading status: 3 chapters] [Reviewer: aysel inara] -*-*-*-*- REMARKS: - Cover is so pretty, title is direct and catchy. I see no reason why no one wouldn't click on the book. The synopsis is pretty decent too. - Talking about chapter 1, I personally and honestly had mixed remarks seeing first paragraph but then right after passing through the para it was just 'wow.' Not saying that the opening para was bad, it's just me. I'm certain. - Now let me praise the naming scheme, Domhall is a catchy name. Although i don't really have an explanation of why it intrigued me. Haha. - The eclipse and being transmigrated or teleported [still ain't sure] was a unique element i'd say. I have never seen anyone using eclipse as plot progression. 10 points from me here. - The character of Domhall resembled Lucifer in many ways, and i think he was inspiration of crafting Domhall. Not sure. But it's a good thing, at least for me. Not to forget females were/are crazy about that show. - Chapter 1 was well paced, not so fast, not so slow. i liked how it ended and how the foreshadowing was done with that feet frozen scene. Loved it. - The character of FL is another good thing I loved, it was crafted with a homework i'd say. It was great and the way she was shown with two different aspect was a good thing. It is still unclear whether she knows Domhall or not, as per the last words in chapter 3. - The imagery is another strong point of author, every scene can be visualized without any obstruction. The inferno and where Domhall wakes up, the bar, the freezing feet scene, the mysterious voice etc. - I personally loved the book and have well wishes for the contract and the earning. The book deserves attention.
Hello! Do I still have readers here? I hope I do. 🥺 I haven't updated this story for the past two months. I am not abandoning it. I just needed to tackle on other stories first. I'll edit this story first before I update again (Delete uneccessary scenes, make the story fast-pace, or maybe add some scenes and such). I hope more readers will add this story to their library by then. 😁 Please support with your power stones, everyone! Thank you for reading Domhall and Louisanna's story! 💛💛💛