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I’m not even a big fan of one piece of the depiction of Luffy and the interaction with the characters are perfect and super entertaining. Hope all he writes the whole story and keeps updating
I don't know what to say, the way you wrote your characters was good, jokes were funny and everything was fine until you started nerfing Mc so you can keep the cannon storyline hole after 5 min of fighting he didn't have any more haki are you joking, and that wasn't even the worst thing the worst thing is that you know how strong he is and how his abilities work and you still made this abomination of a fight
One of the best fanfics I’ve read honestly. The characters feel alive and the story is great so far from the 23 chapters I’ve read. I feel like Luffy got nerfed a bit but Luffy is Luffy so it works out. Great read!
i love it its so good and it is very intresting that luffy is in mha world and overall i thinks its very good but the main problem is that it takes a long time update so i cant give it a 5/5
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Love the way Luffy is introduced as a character. The fact that he's having some emotional problems kinda go against what I like about the character itself but, its interesting to see that other side of Luffy. Overall: Amazing, just hope the updates would be more constant.
Story structure could use work. I don’t know why, but it reads a little weird. Dialogue needs a lot of improvements. At times it doesn’t seem natural or characters seem out of character. Show don’t tell. Characters read like cardboard cutouts. It feels like dialogue is only there to move the plot. Nevertheless, it’s an ok read to pass the time.
i think i would have prefered an mc with luffy's powers instead of luffy himself to be the mc, i just can't stand how dumb he is! but if you like luffy then you will probably enjoy this fic
Its very good, the only complaint that i have is that the author don’t post new chapters very often but other than that it an amazing novel, by far one of the best I’ve read
This is really good!!! Any recommendations on other fanfics that bring out the luffy character? Luffy in othe worlds ? Him being goofy and the funny captain he is?
this is by far one of the best fanfics I have ever read! it has made me crack up several times IRL. the characterisation of Luffy is perfect, it's almost exactly like odas Luffy. I've bing read all 20 chapters and I can't wait to see what happens next
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OMG MARVELOUS WORK I CAME UPON THIS NOVEL AND BINGED IT ALL FROM BEGINNING TO NOW ALL IN A DAY CAUSE I COULDN’T STOP!!! Amazing work portraying Luffy its so funny and the one for all fight WOW!!! i especially love the long chapters!
I’m not even a big fan of one piece of the depiction of Luffy and the interaction with the characters are perfect and super entertaining. Hope all he writes the whole story and keeps updating
I don't know what to say, the way you wrote your characters was good, jokes were funny and everything was fine until you started nerfing Mc so you can keep the cannon storyline hole after 5 min of fighting he didn't have any more haki are you joking, and that wasn't even the worst thing the worst thing is that you know how strong he is and how his abilities work and you still made this abomination of a fight
One of the best fanfics I’ve read honestly. The characters feel alive and the story is great so far from the 23 chapters I’ve read. I feel like Luffy got nerfed a bit but Luffy is Luffy so it works out. Great read!
i love it its so good and it is very intresting that luffy is in mha world and overall i thinks its very good but the main problem is that it takes a long time update so i cant give it a 5/5
It is an amazing story, I wish it would continue ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Love the way Luffy is introduced as a character. The fact that he's having some emotional problems kinda go against what I like about the character itself but, its interesting to see that other side of Luffy. Overall: Amazing, just hope the updates would be more constant.
Story structure could use work. I don’t know why, but it reads a little weird. Dialogue needs a lot of improvements. At times it doesn’t seem natural or characters seem out of character. Show don’t tell. Characters read like cardboard cutouts. It feels like dialogue is only there to move the plot. Nevertheless, it’s an ok read to pass the time.
i think i would have prefered an mc with luffy's powers instead of luffy himself to be the mc, i just can't stand how dumb he is! but if you like luffy then you will probably enjoy this fic
Its very good, the only complaint that i have is that the author don’t post new chapters very often but other than that it an amazing novel, by far one of the best I’ve read
This is really good!!! Any recommendations on other fanfics that bring out the luffy character? Luffy in othe worlds ? Him being goofy and the funny captain he is?
this is by far one of the best fanfics I have ever read! it has made me crack up several times IRL. the characterisation of Luffy is perfect, it's almost exactly like odas Luffy. I've bing read all 20 chapters and I can't wait to see what happens next
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OMG MARVELOUS WORK I CAME UPON THIS NOVEL AND BINGED IT ALL FROM BEGINNING TO NOW ALL IN A DAY CAUSE I COULDN’T STOP!!! Amazing work portraying Luffy its so funny and the one for all fight WOW!!! i especially love the long chapters!