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The story runs around Jackcy, who betrayed her only love of life, and he came back for revenge on her, his love turns into hate, and he came to break her, but he could not, the story is full of romance, drama, tragedy, and suspense.
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I want to rate this after i finished reading chapter 1, and I found this story interesting, i really look forward on the upcoming chaps, hoping i won't be disappointed, i know i may felt stress but that is normal for me since all stories will really bring you stress as a matter of fact๐. So yeah I'm wishing the author a good luck on making this mysterious piece.... Fightin'๐ช
A respectable attempt. Nice take on sexual fidelity. Written in first person past tense (limited perspective). Pros: The characters have great integrity and loyalty towards eachother. Cons: Grammatical and punctuation errors in some chapters while others are good (perhaps some are yet to be edited), constant switching between POVs (I feel it is inconsistent; you might like it). I am at chapter 24 now and the while the characters have their strong points, they are rather irrational something (is love truly blind?) and the side characters show excessive care for the FL and ML alike. Perhaps the author wanted too keep the focus of the story intact but that made the side characters start to feel inanimate after some time. Overall, give it a chance. With some editing, it can turn out to be a great work.
Wel done author keep writing like this stories I really like this novel... ๐๐ป ๐๐ป ๐๐ป Great jobโค๏ธ this story is commendable ๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป You are such a great writer โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
Good job! Well done! Fantastic! Perfect! Thatโs great! Nice work! Excellent! Thatโs really remarkable. Good grades! This story is praiseworthy ๐๐๐ Very interesting โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ Keep writing ๐ ๐ ๐
I am just in love with this novel, the characters are amazing and the storyline is so interesting, and the way the story is described is so beautiful, I feel like I can imagine every sceneโฅโฅโฅ๐๐๐ , awesome work author, keep writing ๐๐
As I have read many chapters already, i notice that some grammar are wrong; however, I like the story, full of mystery and very confusing. Wishing a good luck for the author ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
The translation isnโt good. It make it very confusing. But I love the story. Iโve felt every emotion the characters have. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
The story is very great. I loved it. And the story is so interesting, cute and beautiful. I Advise everyone to read it because it is just amazing. โค๏ธ๐งก๐๐๐๐๐คโฅ๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โฃ๏ธ โค๏ธ๐งก๐๐๐๐๐คโฅ๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โฃ๏ธ
Hats off to the writer of this story. I mean, how a person can write such an amazing story. I'vs read the story, but mentally I'm still in the story. Everyone should read it once and experience a worth reading story.