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A really good LOTM fanfic, i honestly have never read any other lotm fanfic so i cannot knwo whether this is the best or not, but judging by how good it is, it should be among the best. There are two things i like the most about this fanfic. The first being the fact that you threw canon by the window unlike other fanfics that just tell the same story and change very little. The second is the romance. I love mc's relationship with his lady wife A LOT, i believe you managed to write a really good relationship between the two of them.
Oye espera, me acabo de dar cuenta, el inglΓ©s no es tu lengua materna no?, en ese caso, cual es tu idioma natal?
it was a good read until mc advanced to sequence 7 at this stage the whole idea of acting and digestion was thrown out of the window also it took too long to advance next step it doesn't even compare to klein who at least advance in every two hundred chapters it good read but in later stages you ruined it
Hey witness, I'm going to make some videos of novels and fics narrated in Spanish, and I wanted to know if you would mind if I uploaded your novel? Of course I'll give the respective credits and everything.
Pretty good but it is a bit boring at many points. The fights and character interactions but it just feels like it is missing something, original lotm had the tarot club meetings that made you want to keep reading despite all the exposition, explanations and boring things, this story has all that that but lacks that βtarot clubβ aspect (doesnβt need to be an actual tarot club, but I feel a fanfic of lotm needs something similiar)
For me,this is my Best lotm fanfic so far. Character building is my favorite part ,I like the way adrayn acted, More like scammer than a clown. In part of writting that is good ,Even my bad english could read it smoothly. Downside of this novel?.. The named of Adrayn's beyonder items are so hard to remember When author came back to compose this story. Something tell me that i should write the review. Sorry for my bad english. I cant wait to read next chapter.π
I have to say it's one of the best fanfics out there based on LOTM. The journey of the MC from the start to what he has become recently is a joy to watch. Thank you so much for the storyπ
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Awesome, why didn't I find this fanfic earlier?. Each chapter makes me enter the story, the author also doesn't forget the mystery in it Saya dari indonesia! Ayo baca buku ini, menyenangkan melihat fanfic LOTM memiliki banyak bab seperti ini. Ah! Saya juga sudah mendukung penulis.
an interesting read if you have patience, I know it's a lotm fanfic but it's still a fanfic, the author dumps a lot of useless stuff at the beginning and forces many situations that shouldn't happen, besides making the mc be very stupid and putting elements that they are not from lotm, in fact sometimes it doesn't even feel like I'm reading a lotm fanfic since the way the author makes the characters interact is nothing like, really it's victorian england and all the characters are called by their first name name without even knowing each other, the mc should have continued at sea, there was no reason for him to go backlund.
Aku sangat menyukai ini, sangat bagus. Dari chapter awal hingga sampai saat ini tidak ada yang membuatku merasa ini ff yang buruk. Aku hanya berharap MC tidak menjadi genderbender, dan tetap menjadi pria.
Review: Writing Quality: 4 stars, it starts off okay with a few errors a chapter but it gradually improves to at most 1 error a chapter or 2 rarely. Stability of Updates: 5 stars, the author is consistent with when he updates his chapters. Story Development: 4 stars it starts off a little confusing but maybe that's because I finished LOTM 1 ages ago and am reading LOTM 2 right now. Character Design: 4 stars the author is great in how he expresses characters but sometimes he can have trouble expressing character's emotions, though he develops his character's amazing especially the MC. World Background: 5 stars (Its Lord of The Mysteries what ya expect?) Overall Rating: 4.4 stars out of 5, would reccomend.
Easily the best lotm fanfic I've ever read. It's originally in english too meaning that there aren't any wierd translations and no machine translation. The MC is very interesting and his hax are all in-universe. There's no such cheat the MC has that feels unfair or like it doesn't fit in the verse
I am in chapter 197 It is good, but the progression is slow he rushed Hunter and Provoker but his drug in Pyromaniac for a while when he will promote to Conspirer.
Hahahahahahahahah Chapter 198 is my favorite chapter gahahagahahahahaa This is one of the best lotm fanfic Kudos for you
I really like this fanfiction, it's a pity that the powers of the MC and the plot itself are a little slow, but I think that I'm just used to a faster pace, I hope you (the author) will be fine and you will continue to write this fanfic
very good fanfic. but I've noticed that it's slowly turning into one of those books that claim to be non harem but have almost all female characters it's ruining the LoTM feel of the book
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You should have stated if the character is gay or not, is sexuality really that plot relevant that you would not reveal it? I respect the wrting but reading gay characters makes me puke. Please put a tag if this is guys some people cant stomach gay protagonist, gay scences. As a straight male reading gays scenes really makes us guys puke. I reached chapter 300 before i had enough.
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A really good LOTM fanfic, i honestly have never read any other lotm fanfic so i cannot knwo whether this is the best or not, but judging by how good it is, it should be among the best. There are two things i like the most about this fanfic. The first being the fact that you threw canon by the window unlike other fanfics that just tell the same story and change very little. The second is the romance. I love mc's relationship with his lady wife A LOT, i believe you managed to write a really good relationship between the two of them.
Oye espera, me acabo de dar cuenta, el inglΓ©s no es tu lengua materna no?, en ese caso, cual es tu idioma natal?
it was a good read until mc advanced to sequence 7 at this stage the whole idea of acting and digestion was thrown out of the window also it took too long to advance next step it doesn't even compare to klein who at least advance in every two hundred chapters it good read but in later stages you ruined it
Hey witness, I'm going to make some videos of novels and fics narrated in Spanish, and I wanted to know if you would mind if I uploaded your novel? Of course I'll give the respective credits and everything.
Pretty good but it is a bit boring at many points. The fights and character interactions but it just feels like it is missing something, original lotm had the tarot club meetings that made you want to keep reading despite all the exposition, explanations and boring things, this story has all that that but lacks that βtarot clubβ aspect (doesnβt need to be an actual tarot club, but I feel a fanfic of lotm needs something similiar)
For me,this is my Best lotm fanfic so far. Character building is my favorite part ,I like the way adrayn acted, More like scammer than a clown. In part of writting that is good ,Even my bad english could read it smoothly. Downside of this novel?.. The named of Adrayn's beyonder items are so hard to remember When author came back to compose this story. Something tell me that i should write the review. Sorry for my bad english. I cant wait to read next chapter.π
I have to say it's one of the best fanfics out there based on LOTM. The journey of the MC from the start to what he has become recently is a joy to watch. Thank you so much for the storyπ
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Awesome, why didn't I find this fanfic earlier?. Each chapter makes me enter the story, the author also doesn't forget the mystery in it Saya dari indonesia! Ayo baca buku ini, menyenangkan melihat fanfic LOTM memiliki banyak bab seperti ini. Ah! Saya juga sudah mendukung penulis.
an interesting read if you have patience, I know it's a lotm fanfic but it's still a fanfic, the author dumps a lot of useless stuff at the beginning and forces many situations that shouldn't happen, besides making the mc be very stupid and putting elements that they are not from lotm, in fact sometimes it doesn't even feel like I'm reading a lotm fanfic since the way the author makes the characters interact is nothing like, really it's victorian england and all the characters are called by their first name name without even knowing each other, the mc should have continued at sea, there was no reason for him to go backlund.
Aku sangat menyukai ini, sangat bagus. Dari chapter awal hingga sampai saat ini tidak ada yang membuatku merasa ini ff yang buruk. Aku hanya berharap MC tidak menjadi genderbender, dan tetap menjadi pria.
Review: Writing Quality: 4 stars, it starts off okay with a few errors a chapter but it gradually improves to at most 1 error a chapter or 2 rarely. Stability of Updates: 5 stars, the author is consistent with when he updates his chapters. Story Development: 4 stars it starts off a little confusing but maybe that's because I finished LOTM 1 ages ago and am reading LOTM 2 right now. Character Design: 4 stars the author is great in how he expresses characters but sometimes he can have trouble expressing character's emotions, though he develops his character's amazing especially the MC. World Background: 5 stars (Its Lord of The Mysteries what ya expect?) Overall Rating: 4.4 stars out of 5, would reccomend.
Easily the best lotm fanfic I've ever read. It's originally in english too meaning that there aren't any wierd translations and no machine translation. The MC is very interesting and his hax are all in-universe. There's no such cheat the MC has that feels unfair or like it doesn't fit in the verse
I am in chapter 197 It is good, but the progression is slow he rushed Hunter and Provoker but his drug in Pyromaniac for a while when he will promote to Conspirer.
Hahahahahahahahah Chapter 198 is my favorite chapter gahahagahahahahaa This is one of the best lotm fanfic Kudos for you
I really like this fanfiction, it's a pity that the powers of the MC and the plot itself are a little slow, but I think that I'm just used to a faster pace, I hope you (the author) will be fine and you will continue to write this fanfic
very good fanfic. but I've noticed that it's slowly turning into one of those books that claim to be non harem but have almost all female characters it's ruining the LoTM feel of the book
Good fan-fiction. Please continue, there are too few lord of Mysteries fan-fiction. Keep writing.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
You should have stated if the character is gay or not, is sexuality really that plot relevant that you would not reveal it? I respect the wrting but reading gay characters makes me puke. Please put a tag if this is guys some people cant stomach gay protagonist, gay scences. As a straight male reading gays scenes really makes us guys puke. I reached chapter 300 before i had enough.