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So our MC Nahora Takuya (he is Rin's brother apparently) got self-inserted after the original kicked the bucket during the Nine Tails incident as an ANBU, which is something I have never seen before so kudos for that. Not that he got away unscathed as he was hospitalized for 3 years, during which he steadily abused his system to gain more powa! Now about his golden finger, he gets 'orbs of power' that he can collect via osmosis that grants him jutsus, chakra, bloodlines, etc. which is nice, but he can only gain points in specific jutsus or chakra natures when they are actively being used near the MC. Not a bad attempt at balancing things out, right? Wrong! The MC is a typical opportunistic self-centered cultivator so he does his best to generate conflict or extend existing fights so he can get more loot! Well, okay that seem like smart choice, right? Fine, I can't argue with that strategy, but aside from his system he was never shown to actually be able to raise his stats via training or any other way really. Which is where my frustration comes from and it just grows with each additional chapter of this anti-shounen phenomena! That's right this entire fan fic is an affront to Naruto's theme of hardwork and perseverance to overcome overwhelming odds! There is no feeling of catharsis after a victory because its never earned and he could have at any point won but just doesn't make a move to get more drops from every random encounter so far. The whole not being able to train and honestly grind for points is also a rather direct hard limit to his skill cap. For example without anyone being able to use the Flying Thunder God to farm points from and not being able to train the he can never achieve mastery with this jutsu since there also seems to be some type of diminishing returns mechanic, meaning he can't just harrass the old Fourth Hokage's bodyguards to continously milk more Hiraishin points. Overall, okay enough to pass time if you don't mind your blood pressure from skyrocketing out of sheer frustration but definitely not something I recommend to any serious Naruto fan. There are literally thousands of better fanfics out there in other platforms and dozens of really good ones just in Webnovel alone. Trust me you can easily find better alternative reads with minimal effort.
Great book first one to have my full attention from start to finish. I was afraid he would get too op to fast but it didnβt feel too rushed.
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Is he really an Anbu captain ?. I haven't read anyone mentioning their anbu nn. Even when the literal Raikage in front they still screams his real name. Also the mask! Is he wearing one!?
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ignored review I just wanted to say, Bruh these gotta be the most botted comments I've ever seen in history.Oh lord you're all saying a whole lot of nothing.Please I need each and every one of you to stop reviewing cause you all suck.Noe I gotta waste my time and read this shi hopefully it's good.
awesome book! but heads up, it's a repost of a translation fanfic, the og one only posted until Chapter 84.
just imagine . mc its a idiot but like all chinese ff, lets make everyone more stupid than the mc to make it seens that the mc is smart i have nothing against chinese ff , sometimes is good, but too much is anoying , if only mc was speaking in chinese way , and everyone else in character its barely ok , but a japanese anime turn in almost cultivator ff ( without the meditation part and cultivating to become immortal ) . if thats not a turn off for you then is a good novel
Good even though the system is too strong [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
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I like the story, but the system is badly implemented in the story. Rewards are heavily reliant upon authors mood - meaning there are a lot of inconsistencies. The fact that orbs are dropped after executing technique and not after defeating or killing opponents is weird. It's too late to fix that.
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good novel to kill time but very shallow, lacks a lot of depth. good luck authorπͺ
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Excellent fic! Since it's a drop system and Mc is already an Anbu, it's alright if he becomes as op as Madara in the next 50 chapters. I won't have any complaints. Right, I'm waiting for romantic development though. anyways, keep up the good work, Translator-kun!
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The translation is good but that's really all I can say about this that I like. Mc is another lazy Chinese protag who replies on his system and never does anything, yet everyone sucks him off regardless. Also the story is inconsistent with information all the time to the point it's frustrating to read, I have no good impression of this novel. Truly the good translation is wasted on this
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So our MC Nahora Takuya (he is Rin's brother apparently) got self-inserted after the original kicked the bucket during the Nine Tails incident as an ANBU, which is something I have never seen before so kudos for that. Not that he got away unscathed as he was hospitalized for 3 years, during which he steadily abused his system to gain more powa! Now about his golden finger, he gets 'orbs of power' that he can collect via osmosis that grants him jutsus, chakra, bloodlines, etc. which is nice, but he can only gain points in specific jutsus or chakra natures when they are actively being used near the MC. Not a bad attempt at balancing things out, right? Wrong! The MC is a typical opportunistic self-centered cultivator so he does his best to generate conflict or extend existing fights so he can get more loot! Well, okay that seem like smart choice, right? Fine, I can't argue with that strategy, but aside from his system he was never shown to actually be able to raise his stats via training or any other way really. Which is where my frustration comes from and it just grows with each additional chapter of this anti-shounen phenomena! That's right this entire fan fic is an affront to Naruto's theme of hardwork and perseverance to overcome overwhelming odds! There is no feeling of catharsis after a victory because its never earned and he could have at any point won but just doesn't make a move to get more drops from every random encounter so far. The whole not being able to train and honestly grind for points is also a rather direct hard limit to his skill cap. For example without anyone being able to use the Flying Thunder God to farm points from and not being able to train the he can never achieve mastery with this jutsu since there also seems to be some type of diminishing returns mechanic, meaning he can't just harrass the old Fourth Hokage's bodyguards to continously milk more Hiraishin points. Overall, okay enough to pass time if you don't mind your blood pressure from skyrocketing out of sheer frustration but definitely not something I recommend to any serious Naruto fan. There are literally thousands of better fanfics out there in other platforms and dozens of really good ones just in Webnovel alone. Trust me you can easily find better alternative reads with minimal effort.
Great book first one to have my full attention from start to finish. I was afraid he would get too op to fast but it didnβt feel too rushed.
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Is he really an Anbu captain ?. I haven't read anyone mentioning their anbu nn. Even when the literal Raikage in front they still screams his real name. Also the mask! Is he wearing one!?
Reveal Spoiler ignored review I just wanted to say, Bruh these gotta be the most botted comments I've ever seen in history.Oh lord you're all saying a whole lot of nothing.Please I need each and every one of you to stop reviewing cause you all suck.Noe I gotta waste my time and read this shi hopefully it's good.
awesome book! but heads up, it's a repost of a translation fanfic, the og one only posted until Chapter 84.
just imagine . mc its a idiot but like all chinese ff, lets make everyone more stupid than the mc to make it seens that the mc is smart i have nothing against chinese ff , sometimes is good, but too much is anoying , if only mc was speaking in chinese way , and everyone else in character its barely ok , but a japanese anime turn in almost cultivator ff ( without the meditation part and cultivating to become immortal ) . if thats not a turn off for you then is a good novel
Good even though the system is too strong [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
Reveal Spoiler I like the story, but the system is badly implemented in the story. Rewards are heavily reliant upon authors mood - meaning there are a lot of inconsistencies. The fact that orbs are dropped after executing technique and not after defeating or killing opponents is weird. It's too late to fix that.
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good novel to kill time but very shallow, lacks a lot of depth. good luck authorπͺ
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Excellent fic! Since it's a drop system and Mc is already an Anbu, it's alright if he becomes as op as Madara in the next 50 chapters. I won't have any complaints. Right, I'm waiting for romantic development though. anyways, keep up the good work, Translator-kun!
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The translation is good but that's really all I can say about this that I like. Mc is another lazy Chinese protag who replies on his system and never does anything, yet everyone sucks him off regardless. Also the story is inconsistent with information all the time to the point it's frustrating to read, I have no good impression of this novel. Truly the good translation is wasted on this