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Many problems in this story. Biggest one is the MC. He isn’t really a “character” by that I mean that his personality depends on what the author needs for the plot. The only constant personality trait I’ve seen of the MC is that he’s a creep towards women, and being a complete coward that can’t tell love interests that he is already in a relationship with other girls, he’d rather sleep with them and lead them on first. Author also doesn’t know what makes a protagonist charming. So he has the MC deliver the worst lines imaginable to flirt with the love interests and yet the author paints those lines as if they were the most poetic words ever uttered. There are many more issues with the MC but it’d take too long to list every example. Second biggest issue with the story is inconsistency. From changing a characters age many times Like Shizuka suddenly being aged up multiple times despite being younger in earlier chapters. To bigger more ridiculous inconsistencies. Honestly, it’s crazy how bad it can get. I’ll give a made up example but there are very similar instances just like this throughout the story. If the author says the MC woke up, put his clothes on, then headed to school; in the next paragraph the author will say that the MC had to return to his house once he left because he had forgotten to put his clothes on. It took 1 paragraph for the author to forget what they just wrote. Sometimes the inconsistency happens in the same literal paragraph, so in the span of a sentence the author will write that the complete opposite had happened than what he had literally just written. No proofreading I guess. Third issue, wanting to keep the canon even if it has to be shamelessly forced. Author explains it as them not wanting to slow down the release rate so when they are feeling down they just copy whatever events happen in the original story and forces the plot no matter how much doing so will create massive inconsistencies. The author will act as if certain things in the past never happened if it means being able to force canon. The time skips are handled incredibly poorly. It’s a turn your brain off fanfic, if the inconsistencies could be fixed, and the author could learn what makes a good protagonist then the author would be able to write a fun to read story. I’ve read up to chapter 192 so maybe it happens later but I don’t know if I’ll continue it.
its great, i love the story and love that they have a lot of character from different anime
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It's not a bad story, but it isn't good either. Just a story you read to pass the time until something better catches your fancy. The MC keeps mentioning he is a gentleman, repeatedly, as if trying to convince himself that is the reason he hasn't done anything to progress the relationships he has with the girls, which he constantly jumps to and fro. And from the looks of the fandoms mentioned and the progress of the plot as of chapter 71, this a regressing MC who starts assertive but slowly turns into a coward that doesn't establish a relationship with any girl because he is a gentleman in a world of japanese teenagers where you get to know your partner as you date, not when you first meet. He basically turns into a vegan that believes himself to be a carnivore, or that's the impression I get. There hasn't been any notable plot progression, the impression I get is that somewhere around the first forty to fifty chapters could have been broken down into flashbacks due to how little they bring to the table, it's just training, writing, trying to not come off as creep while talking to girls (even his sister) and, you guessed it, thinking he is a gentleman because he hasn't "taken advantage" of any of the girls "that clearly want him". The heroines are just there as eye candy, they don't show any development as characters just appear as possible future trophies he won't touch but don't want others to have either. But I guess that's all one can expect from such a Pokémon Harem and Wish Fulfilment story.
The harem is getting way out of hand, and while mixing those particular universes together is cool, i think that you should build it more around the main universe. Another thing that I have to say is that he is lagging behind with the main 2 girls and i would think you should pick up the pace in that regard.
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I don't care what anyone says...this is a masterpiece for me...sure it can be better..sure there may be a lot of parts that should have been different..but bringing this awesome fanfic to life deserves a 5 stars and love on its own...keep up the great work author-san.
in the beginning, there are jujutsu kaizen characters like 'Mai zenin', 'Gojo Satoru', And 'Toji zenin'. But where are they now? Also, where are the angles and devils? do we get an action or the multiversal travel like Dxd or something?
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The story of a boy being transmigrated into the body of Hachiman Hikigaya, with the goal of proving his worth and overcoming the negative perceptions around him, offers a captivating and humorous narrative. Combining Hachiman’s cynical nature with the challenges of adapting to a new life, this plot brings both depth and fun. Here’s a 5-star review: The decision to use Hachiman Hikigaya, known for his cynical and detached outlook on society, as the body and mind for the boy’s journey of self-discovery is a great starting point. The protagonist, despite being a stranger in this new skin, is driven by a strong determination to show those who underestimated him that he can “get his life together.” The internal struggle between maintaining Hachiman’s cynical perspective and the boy’s newfound motivation creates an interesting and amusing dynamic, filled with introspective moments. Comedy naturally arises from the absurd situations the protagonist finds himself in, such as being surrounded by girls wielding intimidating objects or dealing with others’ reactions to his new behavior. At the same time, the story also touches on deeper themes of personal growth as the boy tries to navigate the complex social and emotional web of Hachiman’s life. The balance between these two elements is well-executed, with moments of comic relief followed by more serious scenes of reflection. The premise of adapting to an unfamiliar life, especially one as distinct as Hachiman’s at Soubu High School, allows the narrative to explore themes of identity, self-image, and acceptance. The protagonist, now living as Hachiman, faces a complex journey to understand himself and find his place in this new world. At the same time, the story retains a lightheartedness with touches of irony, reinforcing the comedic and philosophical tone that Yahari Ore no Seishun Love Comedy wa Machigatteiru brings. This story is an intelligent mix of comedy, introspection, and drama, with well-crafted characters and a plot that captivates the reader. The protagonist’s journey to change perceptions and earn respect, while dealing with the challenges of being Hachiman, is full of funny, touching, and reflective moments. The combination of self-discovery and humor makes this an engaging and deserving 5-star narrative.
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the author said there is no yuri but I read directly the advanced lemon chapter and Saeko is kissing Alice's thighs and rubbing Alice breasts there 'the hints of future full yuri is dropped' liar author
im sorry but whats the point of this? theres way too many characters for this to be interesting, you just hop from one side story to the next. in the 40 chapters i read, you introduced at least 10 female characters from slice of life animes. assuming the trend, there will probably be way more. it feels as though the character is never doing anything important. just cheating through life while interacting with anime girls, al the while being proud of ill-gotten"achievements".
All good things come to an end. This novel was good until it stopped progressing relationships with other fmc besides yukino. And the dialouge is robotic.
the story was good even when author chose hachiman as MC its all good. the start was before oregairu canon so the author did good job for the développement of hikigaya and the interaction with the girls and with help of the system getting novelist , cooking , kendo... skills everything was good here but there is a probleme in the story everytime everytime when people see him skilled in kendo or cooking even when he is better then them the only thing he say "i just know little" he know he is skilled but he is humble "False modesty can be worse than arrogance". now lets talk when the author did timeskip of 7month around chap 100 to start the plot of oregairu first thing here all the character build all the IQ that he got before the plot is gone everything that was build before the plot is gone when its about oregairu you see the anime/manga ? everything is the same there is no change cuz the author want to follow the plot his relationship with yui zero progression before the plot there was progression but after the plot start there is zero progression even they kissed etc but they didnt sleep , saeko,kotohana,utaha,maki,alice these girls that was appearing before the plot start they disappeared they apeared what for 1 chap or 2 ? from chap 100 ( i think here the plot started) to chap 317 . oh yeah lets say it clearly in this fanfic there is no harem that how i fell just some characters that was getting fked by mc and later you dont hear about them the only FL is yukino the mc simping for here and she is the only girls that the mc really love , the others are just pokemon that you get on the road and basta , oh yeah there is face slapping too if you know the chinese cultivaion but ofc its always when yukino is here . anyways the fanfic was good even after oregairu plot ( orega plot is basic ) if author didnt add other characters from other anime it feel like reading orega and no fanfic
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So far, I’ve only read a handful of chapters. The story is refreshing and unique, blended together with different modern anime’s and no outlandish supernatural elements are visible. MCs personality does feel slightly robotic and can be off putting with his formal speech and slightly creepy thoughts. I will edit this review upon further reading!
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Over all I love this book, I would very much like to see the author finish it through, to me it measures up with the great Akikan! Author finish this book! And my life is yours! (Also hope you keep in good health!)
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Well, at first it was interesting, I even waited for updates. After 150+ chapters, interest waned. I recently decided that such a good ff can’t go downhill - I read it to 250+ and decided to quit and remove it from my bookmarks.
This is a good fanfiction novel, but why is this novel devoid of readers. otherwise, this novel's ranking would not be below 100, but would be at 50 and above. really weird?
The story progresses well, but I wish Mc was more dominant. It would be great if the author released more chapters. I will try to support the story as much as I can, I hope you continue writing. English is not my native language, sorry if there is any mistake.
No se porque a la mayoría de los comentarios no les agrada el fic pero en mi opinión personal me encanta el fic tanto que estoy al día con las actualizaciones solo escribo para que sepas que sí hay gente que aprecia tú tiempo creando el fic y un meme por qué si XD
well it is a great read to pass the time. unfortunately it is still ongoing (currently 400 chapters). it is a decent yet generic harem fan fic. title is a nice bait, but you'll find the mc totally not like the original hachiman. understandably considering the genre and overall world setting. on a side note, i still find the name hachiman very awkward to read (say inside my head). anyway, there are probably a lot more specific points i noticed but i forgot them now since i am following a few more ongoing works and my memory isn't that good. lol.
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Many problems in this story. Biggest one is the MC. He isn’t really a “character” by that I mean that his personality depends on what the author needs for the plot. The only constant personality trait I’ve seen of the MC is that he’s a creep towards women, and being a complete coward that can’t tell love interests that he is already in a relationship with other girls, he’d rather sleep with them and lead them on first. Author also doesn’t know what makes a protagonist charming. So he has the MC deliver the worst lines imaginable to flirt with the love interests and yet the author paints those lines as if they were the most poetic words ever uttered. There are many more issues with the MC but it’d take too long to list every example. Second biggest issue with the story is inconsistency. From changing a characters age many times Like Shizuka suddenly being aged up multiple times despite being younger in earlier chapters. To bigger more ridiculous inconsistencies. Honestly, it’s crazy how bad it can get. I’ll give a made up example but there are very similar instances just like this throughout the story. If the author says the MC woke up, put his clothes on, then headed to school; in the next paragraph the author will say that the MC had to return to his house once he left because he had forgotten to put his clothes on. It took 1 paragraph for the author to forget what they just wrote. Sometimes the inconsistency happens in the same literal paragraph, so in the span of a sentence the author will write that the complete opposite had happened than what he had literally just written. No proofreading I guess. Third issue, wanting to keep the canon even if it has to be shamelessly forced. Author explains it as them not wanting to slow down the release rate so when they are feeling down they just copy whatever events happen in the original story and forces the plot no matter how much doing so will create massive inconsistencies. The author will act as if certain things in the past never happened if it means being able to force canon. The time skips are handled incredibly poorly. It’s a turn your brain off fanfic, if the inconsistencies could be fixed, and the author could learn what makes a good protagonist then the author would be able to write a fun to read story. I’ve read up to chapter 192 so maybe it happens later but I don’t know if I’ll continue it.
its great, i love the story and love that they have a lot of character from different anime
Reveal Spoiler It's not a bad story, but it isn't good either. Just a story you read to pass the time until something better catches your fancy. The MC keeps mentioning he is a gentleman, repeatedly, as if trying to convince himself that is the reason he hasn't done anything to progress the relationships he has with the girls, which he constantly jumps to and fro. And from the looks of the fandoms mentioned and the progress of the plot as of chapter 71, this a regressing MC who starts assertive but slowly turns into a coward that doesn't establish a relationship with any girl because he is a gentleman in a world of japanese teenagers where you get to know your partner as you date, not when you first meet. He basically turns into a vegan that believes himself to be a carnivore, or that's the impression I get. There hasn't been any notable plot progression, the impression I get is that somewhere around the first forty to fifty chapters could have been broken down into flashbacks due to how little they bring to the table, it's just training, writing, trying to not come off as creep while talking to girls (even his sister) and, you guessed it, thinking he is a gentleman because he hasn't "taken advantage" of any of the girls "that clearly want him". The heroines are just there as eye candy, they don't show any development as characters just appear as possible future trophies he won't touch but don't want others to have either. But I guess that's all one can expect from such a Pokémon Harem and Wish Fulfilment story.
The harem is getting way out of hand, and while mixing those particular universes together is cool, i think that you should build it more around the main universe. Another thing that I have to say is that he is lagging behind with the main 2 girls and i would think you should pick up the pace in that regard.
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SUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR Fanfic...keep up the great work...author-san, maybe God bless you.
I don't care what anyone says...this is a masterpiece for me...sure it can be better..sure there may be a lot of parts that should have been different..but bringing this awesome fanfic to life deserves a 5 stars and love on its own...keep up the great work author-san.
in the beginning, there are jujutsu kaizen characters like 'Mai zenin', 'Gojo Satoru', And 'Toji zenin'. But where are they now? Also, where are the angles and devils? do we get an action or the multiversal travel like Dxd or something?
Reveal Spoiler The story of a boy being transmigrated into the body of Hachiman Hikigaya, with the goal of proving his worth and overcoming the negative perceptions around him, offers a captivating and humorous narrative. Combining Hachiman’s cynical nature with the challenges of adapting to a new life, this plot brings both depth and fun. Here’s a 5-star review: The decision to use Hachiman Hikigaya, known for his cynical and detached outlook on society, as the body and mind for the boy’s journey of self-discovery is a great starting point. The protagonist, despite being a stranger in this new skin, is driven by a strong determination to show those who underestimated him that he can “get his life together.” The internal struggle between maintaining Hachiman’s cynical perspective and the boy’s newfound motivation creates an interesting and amusing dynamic, filled with introspective moments. Comedy naturally arises from the absurd situations the protagonist finds himself in, such as being surrounded by girls wielding intimidating objects or dealing with others’ reactions to his new behavior. At the same time, the story also touches on deeper themes of personal growth as the boy tries to navigate the complex social and emotional web of Hachiman’s life. The balance between these two elements is well-executed, with moments of comic relief followed by more serious scenes of reflection. The premise of adapting to an unfamiliar life, especially one as distinct as Hachiman’s at Soubu High School, allows the narrative to explore themes of identity, self-image, and acceptance. The protagonist, now living as Hachiman, faces a complex journey to understand himself and find his place in this new world. At the same time, the story retains a lightheartedness with touches of irony, reinforcing the comedic and philosophical tone that Yahari Ore no Seishun Love Comedy wa Machigatteiru brings. This story is an intelligent mix of comedy, introspection, and drama, with well-crafted characters and a plot that captivates the reader. The protagonist’s journey to change perceptions and earn respect, while dealing with the challenges of being Hachiman, is full of funny, touching, and reflective moments. The combination of self-discovery and humor makes this an engaging and deserving 5-star narrative.
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the author said there is no yuri but I read directly the advanced lemon chapter and Saeko is kissing Alice's thighs and rubbing Alice breasts there 'the hints of future full yuri is dropped' liar author
im sorry but whats the point of this? theres way too many characters for this to be interesting, you just hop from one side story to the next. in the 40 chapters i read, you introduced at least 10 female characters from slice of life animes. assuming the trend, there will probably be way more. it feels as though the character is never doing anything important. just cheating through life while interacting with anime girls, al the while being proud of ill-gotten"achievements".
All good things come to an end. This novel was good until it stopped progressing relationships with other fmc besides yukino. And the dialouge is robotic.
the story was good even when author chose hachiman as MC its all good. the start was before oregairu canon so the author did good job for the développement of hikigaya and the interaction with the girls and with help of the system getting novelist , cooking , kendo... skills everything was good here but there is a probleme in the story everytime everytime when people see him skilled in kendo or cooking even when he is better then them the only thing he say "i just know little" he know he is skilled but he is humble "False modesty can be worse than arrogance". now lets talk when the author did timeskip of 7month around chap 100 to start the plot of oregairu first thing here all the character build all the IQ that he got before the plot is gone everything that was build before the plot is gone when its about oregairu you see the anime/manga ? everything is the same there is no change cuz the author want to follow the plot his relationship with yui zero progression before the plot there was progression but after the plot start there is zero progression even they kissed etc but they didnt sleep , saeko,kotohana,utaha,maki,alice these girls that was appearing before the plot start they disappeared they apeared what for 1 chap or 2 ? from chap 100 ( i think here the plot started) to chap 317 . oh yeah lets say it clearly in this fanfic there is no harem that how i fell just some characters that was getting fked by mc and later you dont hear about them the only FL is yukino the mc simping for here and she is the only girls that the mc really love , the others are just pokemon that you get on the road and basta , oh yeah there is face slapping too if you know the chinese cultivaion but ofc its always when yukino is here . anyways the fanfic was good even after oregairu plot ( orega plot is basic ) if author didnt add other characters from other anime it feel like reading orega and no fanfic
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So far, I’ve only read a handful of chapters. The story is refreshing and unique, blended together with different modern anime’s and no outlandish supernatural elements are visible. MCs personality does feel slightly robotic and can be off putting with his formal speech and slightly creepy thoughts. I will edit this review upon further reading!
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Over all I love this book, I would very much like to see the author finish it through, to me it measures up with the great Akikan! Author finish this book! And my life is yours! (Also hope you keep in good health!)
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Well, at first it was interesting, I even waited for updates. After 150+ chapters, interest waned. I recently decided that such a good ff can’t go downhill - I read it to 250+ and decided to quit and remove it from my bookmarks.
This is a good fanfiction novel, but why is this novel devoid of readers. otherwise, this novel's ranking would not be below 100, but would be at 50 and above. really weird?
The story progresses well, but I wish Mc was more dominant. It would be great if the author released more chapters. I will try to support the story as much as I can, I hope you continue writing. English is not my native language, sorry if there is any mistake.
No se porque a la mayoría de los comentarios no les agrada el fic pero en mi opinión personal me encanta el fic tanto que estoy al día con las actualizaciones solo escribo para que sepas que sí hay gente que aprecia tú tiempo creando el fic y un meme por qué si XD
well it is a great read to pass the time. unfortunately it is still ongoing (currently 400 chapters). it is a decent yet generic harem fan fic. title is a nice bait, but you'll find the mc totally not like the original hachiman. understandably considering the genre and overall world setting. on a side note, i still find the name hachiman very awkward to read (say inside my head). anyway, there are probably a lot more specific points i noticed but i forgot them now since i am following a few more ongoing works and my memory isn't that good. lol.
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