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the plot hole in this novel is deep as abyss, it;s so deep that even abyss won't bother to look back at you. this is how the story goes 1. MC: I need STRENGTH! 2. got a little bit strength 3. act cocky, because he got cheat to fight higher lvl 4. beaten up badly 5. breakthrough in the middle of battle, and win 6. someone he kill have strong backer etc. 7. defeat his enemies 8. regret how much he lost 9. back to number 1
No good..feng lei is better than him.. Feng lei should just be the mc, wat a irritating author.... waste of time....................................... ................................
I have read 500+ chapters and based on that you can expect 10% Story 90% Trash talking and face slapping + later MC will become Overpowered with a lot of plot Armour
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Author says mc leveling speed is insane but there are always people who beat him with cultivation in same age range. I mean mc is trying so hard to battle against powerful monsters to earn exp[in a stupid way] but there are people who still easily powerful than him by using resources. I don't get the point of the system. He can unlock bloodlines by killing people and earning undefeatable points, but he always looks for powerful demon beasts who are way out of his league instead of looking for murderers and rapists to finish them off to easily get the bloodline and become much more powerful.
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I enjoy reading it.. The mc is slowly evolve from weak to powerfull.. But the enemy is always way to stronger than him.. 😅😅 And is there no new update?
cant wait the mc to make his body holds the full power he have.. 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😂😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎👍👍😎😎👍👍👍😎😎😎😎😎
So cliche mc is fucking annoying weak!! And I'm sick because all I see every chapter there is a fucking trash word. If mc get stronger then theres an enemy will pop up randomly that will try killing mc. WTF. This is just so annoying. No wonder there's too little fucking review on this SHITTY fanfic!
Better then most Good job And most amazing the patern is really good i mean u could enjoy 100 episodes a day easily I mean i do haha Just bit expensive
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One question WHYYYYYYYY would you do this I'll give it 5 stars just because I like the story and why haven't you posted all of the chapters there are like 200ish if I remember correctly and if you could put the authors name in the description (I'm used to YouTube)
Read up till 100+ and it sucks. I find the "this daddy" so irritating that it ruins the story for me. The plot seems so pointless that he is fighting almost everyone he meets and somehow ends up defeating them. The only thing that makes him "defeat" everyone he encounters is his plot armor. Without it he'd be nothing but a noisy young master who's so weak he can't even defeat his enemies while their number keeps increasing.
the plot hole in this novel is deep as abyss, it;s so deep that even abyss won't bother to look back at you. this is how the story goes 1. MC: I need STRENGTH! 2. got a little bit strength 3. act cocky, because he got cheat to fight higher lvl 4. beaten up badly 5. breakthrough in the middle of battle, and win 6. someone he kill have strong backer etc. 7. defeat his enemies 8. regret how much he lost 9. back to number 1
No good..feng lei is better than him.. Feng lei should just be the mc, wat a irritating author.... waste of time....................................... ................................
I have read 500+ chapters and based on that you can expect 10% Story 90% Trash talking and face slapping + later MC will become Overpowered with a lot of plot Armour
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact zekiringdom@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Author says mc leveling speed is insane but there are always people who beat him with cultivation in same age range. I mean mc is trying so hard to battle against powerful monsters to earn exp[in a stupid way] but there are people who still easily powerful than him by using resources. I don't get the point of the system. He can unlock bloodlines by killing people and earning undefeatable points, but he always looks for powerful demon beasts who are way out of his league instead of looking for murderers and rapists to finish them off to easily get the bloodline and become much more powerful.
Reveal Spoiler I enjoy reading it.. The mc is slowly evolve from weak to powerfull.. But the enemy is always way to stronger than him.. 😅😅 And is there no new update?
cant wait the mc to make his body holds the full power he have.. 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😂😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎👍👍😎😎👍👍👍😎😎😎😎😎
So cliche mc is fucking annoying weak!! And I'm sick because all I see every chapter there is a fucking trash word. If mc get stronger then theres an enemy will pop up randomly that will try killing mc. WTF. This is just so annoying. No wonder there's too little fucking review on this SHITTY fanfic!
Better then most Good job And most amazing the patern is really good i mean u could enjoy 100 episodes a day easily I mean i do haha Just bit expensive
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One question WHYYYYYYYY would you do this I'll give it 5 stars just because I like the story and why haven't you posted all of the chapters there are like 200ish if I remember correctly and if you could put the authors name in the description (I'm used to YouTube)
Read up till 100+ and it sucks. I find the "this daddy" so irritating that it ruins the story for me. The plot seems so pointless that he is fighting almost everyone he meets and somehow ends up defeating them. The only thing that makes him "defeat" everyone he encounters is his plot armor. Without it he'd be nothing but a noisy young master who's so weak he can't even defeat his enemies while their number keeps increasing.