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i was looking for mahabharat fanfic stiry is good but grammer awfull aurthur repeating same paragraph for to make long chap and drama too mutch
i would say this is one of the best fan fic i have ever read as i can say karna was one of the most tragic character in mahabharta and what he got was just unjust as he got abandoned at birth just because she thinks she should try that mantra and even if ant take care of him she should have atleast handed him to a good couple and could have given them support them and see him grow but instead she just threw him into river ganga by saying that she goddess ganga can so she can. he was supposed to be prince but forced to serve as sutas or servant and many other tragic stories about him and what he faced wass injustice
The grammar is kinda off but I have high hopes for this fanfiction, I hope that you can complete this story. best of luck 🙌
have you taken romance idea form Chitra Banerjee Divakaruni's book The Palace of Illusions
Add more chapters a day or please and wri more about the story not how they feel about each other
Use this if you want to.Story is pretty good for now, looking forward to the next chapters
Very good novel of karna please write the chapters longer and update more chapter a day and please don’t stop writing until it finishes a lot of karna story are left after a few chapters hope you are not one of them
hey... i like your book and this new concept.. i also love you story and character development and your style of writing.. when can i expect another update?
i was looking for mahabharat fanfic stiry is good but grammer awfull aurthur repeating same paragraph for to make long chap and drama too mutch
i would say this is one of the best fan fic i have ever read as i can say karna was one of the most tragic character in mahabharta and what he got was just unjust as he got abandoned at birth just because she thinks she should try that mantra and even if ant take care of him she should have atleast handed him to a good couple and could have given them support them and see him grow but instead she just threw him into river ganga by saying that she goddess ganga can so she can. he was supposed to be prince but forced to serve as sutas or servant and many other tragic stories about him and what he faced wass injustice
The grammar is kinda off but I have high hopes for this fanfiction, I hope that you can complete this story. best of luck 🙌
have you taken romance idea form Chitra Banerjee Divakaruni's book The Palace of Illusions
Add more chapters a day or please and wri more about the story not how they feel about each other
Use this if you want to.Story is pretty good for now, looking forward to the next chapters
Very good novel of karna please write the chapters longer and update more chapter a day and please don’t stop writing until it finishes a lot of karna story are left after a few chapters hope you are not one of them
hey... i like your book and this new concept.. i also love you story and character development and your style of writing.. when can i expect another update?