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The book is very well written with no errors in spelling. The system itself isn't sentient, at least we believe it isn't. The mc hasn't done anything stupid like cliche Chinese mc's that act like they have lost all braincells infront of women. Overall its a fantastic book and I have hope that it will be updated more based on the fact the author came back to write another chapter even though a month had passed. Good luck on your journey Author and Readers
Since the author of this book wants people to move on, I will move on.I'm making this comment because some authors put asinine statements in their synopsis.I don't understand the purpose of riding a fan fiction if you're not gonna be involved with the fiction it's based on.
The book is very well written with no errors in spelling. The system itself isn't sentient, at least we believe it isn't. The mc hasn't done anything stupid like cliche Chinese mc's that act like they have lost all braincells infront of women. Overall its a fantastic book and I have hope that it will be updated more based on the fact the author came back to write another chapter even though a month had passed. Good luck on your journey Author and Readers
Since the author of this book wants people to move on, I will move on.I'm making this comment because some authors put asinine statements in their synopsis.I don't understand the purpose of riding a fan fiction if you're not gonna be involved with the fiction it's based on.