Jitsuwa, watashi wa zen pawafuru kunai

It's only the beginning but your chapter 8 convinced me because it shows a possibility of reflection for the use of magic that I had not really considered before. I hope that the side full of thoughtful thought and strategy will be introduced in more detail in your webnovel ;) I offer you my encouragement so don't disappoint us

Well, now that you have released around ten chapters I think I can give you an opinion.... I really like the story, I would have thought it was basic but I don't get the impression. You have a writing style of your own that I find great (you push your style very far in the last chapters that I read, I love it) The characters are very endearing and they have a personality of their own (even if I have impression that you are hiding a lot from us) and your author's notes are very funny. That's why I give you 5 stars for everything EXCEPT for the stability of updates... Indeed, you come out too randomly. However, you told us that you are trying to stabilize your posts and I am sure that you will succeed, so if you succeed I will really give you 5 stars! good luck, I can't wait for real, to read more!!

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5tEYPI8r6b

いつも楽しませてもらってます。私はこの小説の世界観が好きです。まだ明らかにされていない設定がこれから明らかにされていくのが楽しみです。

Well , I give you a very good rating because I think that there is great potential in your webnovel and that it hides a lot of things in my opinion... I should not be able to give such a good rating because there are not enough chapters but truly, if you continue like this I think I can say without fear that you will be able to keep this perfect note, we will see at the end of the 1st arc

I'm going to start directly: I read all your chapters already out at once because I really appreciated your idea. You have a really good writing style that improves throughout your writing. I have no negative criticism to make of you apart from that your characters are not described enough... But... I wonder if you are not doing it on purpose... Because, we notice in your last chapter that your character is very think about it so I'm almost sure that you're deliberately not describing certain characters too much to do it later (that's why I'm giving you 5 stars, hoping I'm not wrong). Anyway, Bravo, I'm happy to support a small novel creator, I hope he becomes popular!

首先，大家好，我可能會稍微劇透，所以如果不想被劇透的話，建議跳過這篇評論，謝謝。現在，對你說幾句話，作者。我真的非常喜歡你的網絡小說，對於一個開頭來說，有很多優點，但也有一些小缺點。先談談問題。其實唯一的問題就是你更新的不穩定性。你提到你正在經歷考試和假期的時期，所以我完全理解，但這也是我不能給你滿分的原因。我本來想說有時候翻譯有點問題，但這很可能是我的翻譯工具從英文到中文時翻譯不太準確的緣故。 現在來談談優點，這些優點確實不少。首先，你的小說故事有一定的獨特性，並且在戰略方面有著重要的角色，我非常欣賞這一點！此外，角色數量不少，我希望今後會有越來越多的新角色出現。而且，我注意到一些伏筆，但我不會說出來，以免劇透（也因為如果猜錯了會很尷尬）。還有，城市以及世界的設定看起來非常周全，我也希望未來能繼續保持這樣的水準。 總之，繼續說下去吧。我非常喜歡 Ume 這個角色，她的成長表現得很好。而且 Naboru 很快理解了自己的力量，我真的很喜歡！我甚至在想他是否故意輸掉比賽，讓 Ume 展示她的能力，哈哈！另外，Lysandros 似乎是一個非常出色的主角！ 好了，抱歉我寫得有點多了！未來我會繼續在其他章節留言，期待你能按照我所期望的那樣繼續發展你的小說！ P.S. : 哦對了，拜託快換一下小說的封面吧！每次看到它我都差點以為點錯小說了，哈哈！我開玩笑的，其實封面挺符合故事的，不過我個人不是很喜歡。另外，我希望封面上能加上書名和作者名字，先謝謝啦!

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Lamp_adhere

It's only the beginning, but that's a promising beginning, I love the characters and start of this journey I'm eager to read more and witness what will surely be one of my favorite novel !