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my main problem is is the chapters are too short you could have put two or three even four of these chapters together to make one whole chapter instead of all this piddling short chapters to people I didn't see you got a patreon I would not pay to read 10 chapters ahead or 20 chapters at it would feel like I'm reading three or four chapters of a normal story
Wow....!!!! Goooooooooodddd.....!!!!!!! Veeeeeerrrrrrrrryyyyy gooooooooooooooddddddd.......!!!!!! Writing quality goooooddd! Story telling goood! Character design gooooddd! World background gooooddd!
Good story quality, Interesting story development to continue following, character design is quite classic, but good! world background like the previous novel, but worth following, overall average can be described as a very good and interesting novel!
This novel is good, quite worthy of being read, with an interesting concept. I once read a One Piece novel with a similar card theme, but the One Piece novel I read had many more card options to choose from, like cards from Bleach, Yu Yu Hakusho, and others, while this novel only takes the theme from Naruto. I quite like this novel, even though it takes the form of fanfiction with a System theme, the System doesn't appear too often in the story, except at the beginning. In the end, the System rarely shows up, especially since the novel has an interesting concept. In this story, the main character (MC) can take cards that contain abilities from characters in the Naruto world, but the MC tries to use different identities to explore the world, like Kakashi, Obito, and Kakuzu. The MC is more like cosplaying, with the appearance of various Naruto anime characters, but not actually being those characters themselves. What’s the term? Role-playing, yes! The MC is just role-playing, creating a false identity as a disguise to gather information from the outside world. Since the MC cannot go out every day, they are forced to use clones and change their original identity, adopting the aliases of Kakashi, Obito, and Kakuzu. It’s an interesting and unique concept, but I wonder why some people don’t like this novel, and some say there are too many metaphors. Others say that the personalities of Kakashi, Obito, and Kakuzu are not like the originals. Hahaha, the MC is just role-playing! And pretending to be them. However, it seems that the System can actually summon other characters from the Naruto world, but for now, I guess it’s not confirmed when and who will be summoned. I’m curious about what will happen next. People are too focused on the fact that the author didn’t write the personalities of Kakashi, Obito, and Kakuzu correctly, but they don’t realize that what the MC is doing is just role-playing. The MC’s personality isn’t that bad either. At first, the MC was indeed timid and relied on clones to gather information from the outside world because they were afraid of dying in a dangerous world. However, the MC’s mentality gradually improves. Although the MC isn’t a character that many people can like, overall, the MC is a person who is acceptable and comfortable to read about. For me, this is a good novel, even though, well... the chapters are written very briefly. I wonder if this is because the author chose to follow other writers who only write a little in each chapter? I don’t know, but it’s clear that this is an interesting novel and worth reading.
Reveal Spoiler my main problem is is the chapters are too short you could have put two or three even four of these chapters together to make one whole chapter instead of all this piddling short chapters to people I didn't see you got a patreon I would not pay to read 10 chapters ahead or 20 chapters at it would feel like I'm reading three or four chapters of a normal story
Wow....!!!! Goooooooooodddd.....!!!!!!! Veeeeeerrrrrrrrryyyyy gooooooooooooooddddddd.......!!!!!! Writing quality goooooddd! Story telling goood! Character design gooooddd! World background gooooddd!
Good story quality, Interesting story development to continue following, character design is quite classic, but good! world background like the previous novel, but worth following, overall average can be described as a very good and interesting novel!
This novel is good, quite worthy of being read, with an interesting concept. I once read a One Piece novel with a similar card theme, but the One Piece novel I read had many more card options to choose from, like cards from Bleach, Yu Yu Hakusho, and others, while this novel only takes the theme from Naruto. I quite like this novel, even though it takes the form of fanfiction with a System theme, the System doesn't appear too often in the story, except at the beginning. In the end, the System rarely shows up, especially since the novel has an interesting concept. In this story, the main character (MC) can take cards that contain abilities from characters in the Naruto world, but the MC tries to use different identities to explore the world, like Kakashi, Obito, and Kakuzu. The MC is more like cosplaying, with the appearance of various Naruto anime characters, but not actually being those characters themselves. What’s the term? Role-playing, yes! The MC is just role-playing, creating a false identity as a disguise to gather information from the outside world. Since the MC cannot go out every day, they are forced to use clones and change their original identity, adopting the aliases of Kakashi, Obito, and Kakuzu. It’s an interesting and unique concept, but I wonder why some people don’t like this novel, and some say there are too many metaphors. Others say that the personalities of Kakashi, Obito, and Kakuzu are not like the originals. Hahaha, the MC is just role-playing! And pretending to be them. However, it seems that the System can actually summon other characters from the Naruto world, but for now, I guess it’s not confirmed when and who will be summoned. I’m curious about what will happen next. People are too focused on the fact that the author didn’t write the personalities of Kakashi, Obito, and Kakuzu correctly, but they don’t realize that what the MC is doing is just role-playing. The MC’s personality isn’t that bad either. At first, the MC was indeed timid and relied on clones to gather information from the outside world because they were afraid of dying in a dangerous world. However, the MC’s mentality gradually improves. Although the MC isn’t a character that many people can like, overall, the MC is a person who is acceptable and comfortable to read about. For me, this is a good novel, even though, well... the chapters are written very briefly. I wonder if this is because the author chose to follow other writers who only write a little in each chapter? I don’t know, but it’s clear that this is an interesting novel and worth reading.
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