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WHERE AUTHOR!???πππ author got good story and good harem and why author missing!!??
This is a good Naruto Fanfic with an interesting MC who used his wishes to become OP and live a good life in Naruto world. The MC is logical and acts like is expected of someone to act in certain situations. The grammar is excellent without too many mistakes, which for me is a must when reading. It is just a shame that I reached chapter of 59 and the author didn't publish any new chapter for over a year, so I guess this fanfic was dropped... But I will still give this a five-star review.
She was more like a beauty queen from a movie scene I said don't mind, but what do you mean, I am the one Who will dance on the floor in the round? She said I am the one, who will dance on the floor in the round She told me her name was Billie Jean, as she caused a scene Then every head turned with eyes that dreamed of being the one Who will dance on the floor in the round
Will there be new chapters of this novel here on the webnovel? or maybe several chapters have been uploaded elsewhere, and that's where the author continued writing his novel? or was it just thrown away?
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I am honestly speechless at how bad some fanfics can be like wow I'm just blown away this story was okay then I got to the mother part and it was just bad like incredibly bad. I wasted a bit of my time reading this story it's bad like "this young master or this old lady bad" trust me you don't wanna read this story.
make the story more unpredictable . kurekurekurekure I'm back I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
Can you post this on scribblehub, now computer users can't read any fanfiction on webnovel it seems.........................................
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Why did you decide that the story needs to be finished ? in 1 , he did not unite the world . 2 he didn 't get rid of the Kaguya clan . 3 we don't know if their clan has a god there ? for other worlds , you need to finish this world normally .
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Hmm,thanks for writing even you are busy as I learned from your authors thoughts...and character design is little quick ...and last have you decided which world he is going to travel next...
I 've read 48 chapters ! I like gg and his actions)) Few people try to change Naruto's world by their minds, he also came up with a good idea with gravity to train all tokens)) In short, the author is well done and gg is also much more interesting than other Naruto fanfics here , gg really works with his head and does not kill everyone in a row !
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~~As of Chapter 5~~ There was just to many comments about the same and it just ruin my.mood to continue read this today I normally finish my reads from chapter1 to up to date in one go through but of course it a awesome read so I'll continue but I'll come back tomorrow Guys do not forget he is only 5 how much sunlight could he have absorbed so far. If watch the TV show of when superman was born and his team age year you should have an average understanding of his power level excluding the chakra aspects. The mother is totally correct it may be nothing for his future self to be hit, but his current self isn't at that level. He isn't just planning to go out and kill some random people. He goes to fight a village level who knows what power scale of an enemy he may run into is it wrong for a mother to want her son to have the highest chance of survival especially when it who be extremely easy and useful to learn at his talent level. I do not know why when people hear superman like abilities the think Instanta invisibility yes, now must stuff cannot harm him, but you seen Naruto there are still plenty that can and with normal MC luck the chance of running into them is at least 90% and that only because I do not know the authors writing style yet otherwise it could easily hit 100%. So I think everyone should chill and enjoy the read and see how it goes, it make no since to he has this and that ability since some of you may know some much about superman and his race, but need I remind you this a fan fiction a AU does you knowledge really matter here no it give better contextual understanding on some skill but in the end of the this is the author world for all I care his heat vision could be replaced to bubble machine. It's a good read so far just felt irritated by others rants so here is mine, you can ignore it if you want but it's out there.
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One of the best Naruto fanfictions on this website. It is featuring an OP MC that is pretty much unrivaled by the time he becomes ten years old. But the writing quality is very good , plot is entertaining ,world building makes sense without overt plot holes.
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Now that I've finally hit the 15,000 word mark, I think I can leave a comment on my own FIC. In my opinion, this has always been a way to pass the time, so please don't take the story too seriously. This fic is just about an OP MC having fun in the world of Naruto and possibly other anime worlds. This is basically the first thing I write besides schoolwork, so don't expect any kind of super well done character development or super well built love relationship. This is just a wish-fulfillment story, so don't expect too many complicated dramas or overly complex plots. Also, I'm really not literate when it comes to English, so the story will probably be grammatically wrong... I'm sorry about that. Much of the content of the story will be unique and exclusive to my head, so if anything like the powers and timeline of a particular verse differs from the original works, don't mind... just enjoy the ride. With that said, I thank each and every one of you who took the time to read this poorly written FIC, hahaha.[img=recommend]
WHERE AUTHOR!???πππ author got good story and good harem and why author missing!!??
This is a good Naruto Fanfic with an interesting MC who used his wishes to become OP and live a good life in Naruto world. The MC is logical and acts like is expected of someone to act in certain situations. The grammar is excellent without too many mistakes, which for me is a must when reading. It is just a shame that I reached chapter of 59 and the author didn't publish any new chapter for over a year, so I guess this fanfic was dropped... But I will still give this a five-star review.
She was more like a beauty queen from a movie scene I said don't mind, but what do you mean, I am the one Who will dance on the floor in the round? She said I am the one, who will dance on the floor in the round She told me her name was Billie Jean, as she caused a scene Then every head turned with eyes that dreamed of being the one Who will dance on the floor in the round
Will there be new chapters of this novel here on the webnovel? or maybe several chapters have been uploaded elsewhere, and that's where the author continued writing his novel? or was it just thrown away?
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Saya suka cerita ini... Saya menantikan bab selanjutnya, Dan apakah masih berlanjut..? ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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I am honestly speechless at how bad some fanfics can be like wow I'm just blown away this story was okay then I got to the mother part and it was just bad like incredibly bad. I wasted a bit of my time reading this story it's bad like "this young master or this old lady bad" trust me you don't wanna read this story.
make the story more unpredictable . kurekurekurekure I'm back I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
Can you post this on scribblehub, now computer users can't read any fanfiction on webnovel it seems.........................................
Π·Π°Π²Π΄ΡΠΊΠΈ Π΄ΠΎΠ΄Π°ΡΠΊΡ webnovel Ρ Π½Π΅ ΠΌΠΎΠΆΡ ΠΏΡΠΎΡΠΈΡΠ°ΡΠΈ ΡΠ΅ΠΉ ΡΠ°Π½ΡΡΠΊ. Π½Π°ΡΠΎΠ»ΠΎΠ΄ΠΆΡΠΉΡΠ΅ΡΡ 1 Ρ ΡΠΎ Π± ΡΠ΅ Π½Π΅ Π·ΡΠΎΠ±ΠΈΠ² π€¬π€¬π€¬π€¬π€¬π€¬π€¬π€¬π€¬π€¬π€¬π€¬π€¬π€¬π€¬π€¬π€¬π€¬π€¬π€¬π€¬
Why did you decide that the story needs to be finished ? in 1 , he did not unite the world . 2 he didn 't get rid of the Kaguya clan . 3 we don't know if their clan has a god there ? for other worlds , you need to finish this world normally .
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Hmm,thanks for writing even you are busy as I learned from your authors thoughts...and character design is little quick ...and last have you decided which world he is going to travel next...
I 've read 48 chapters ! I like gg and his actions)) Few people try to change Naruto's world by their minds, he also came up with a good idea with gravity to train all tokens)) In short, the author is well done and gg is also much more interesting than other Naruto fanfics here , gg really works with his head and does not kill everyone in a row !
Reveal Spoiler ~~As of Chapter 5~~ There was just to many comments about the same and it just ruin my.mood to continue read this today I normally finish my reads from chapter1 to up to date in one go through but of course it a awesome read so I'll continue but I'll come back tomorrow Guys do not forget he is only 5 how much sunlight could he have absorbed so far. If watch the TV show of when superman was born and his team age year you should have an average understanding of his power level excluding the chakra aspects. The mother is totally correct it may be nothing for his future self to be hit, but his current self isn't at that level. He isn't just planning to go out and kill some random people. He goes to fight a village level who knows what power scale of an enemy he may run into is it wrong for a mother to want her son to have the highest chance of survival especially when it who be extremely easy and useful to learn at his talent level. I do not know why when people hear superman like abilities the think Instanta invisibility yes, now must stuff cannot harm him, but you seen Naruto there are still plenty that can and with normal MC luck the chance of running into them is at least 90% and that only because I do not know the authors writing style yet otherwise it could easily hit 100%. So I think everyone should chill and enjoy the read and see how it goes, it make no since to he has this and that ability since some of you may know some much about superman and his race, but need I remind you this a fan fiction a AU does you knowledge really matter here no it give better contextual understanding on some skill but in the end of the this is the author world for all I care his heat vision could be replaced to bubble machine. It's a good read so far just felt irritated by others rants so here is mine, you can ignore it if you want but it's out there.
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One of the best Naruto fanfictions on this website. It is featuring an OP MC that is pretty much unrivaled by the time he becomes ten years old. But the writing quality is very good , plot is entertaining ,world building makes sense without overt plot holes.
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Now that I've finally hit the 15,000 word mark, I think I can leave a comment on my own FIC. In my opinion, this has always been a way to pass the time, so please don't take the story too seriously. This fic is just about an OP MC having fun in the world of Naruto and possibly other anime worlds. This is basically the first thing I write besides schoolwork, so don't expect any kind of super well done character development or super well built love relationship. This is just a wish-fulfillment story, so don't expect too many complicated dramas or overly complex plots. Also, I'm really not literate when it comes to English, so the story will probably be grammatically wrong... I'm sorry about that. Much of the content of the story will be unique and exclusive to my head, so if anything like the powers and timeline of a particular verse differs from the original works, don't mind... just enjoy the ride. With that said, I thank each and every one of you who took the time to read this poorly written FIC, hahaha.[img=recommend]