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If you like fantasy isekai adventure type novel then its a must read... I personally like the story and the way it's developing yet (chapter 36). Its better then many simillar novel out there(i am saing its the best). There are some Pronoun problem(everything else alright) but I think its because the author is not living of it, so he has no editor(maybe). And updates miss some times( but the updates are still regular.Don't know about the future though) Well so far so good. Hope the author will keep this up. Best of Luck[img=recommend] [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It is an excellent novel, it has a good development of characters, world and the ways in which it obtains the girls from the harem is going well in comparison to other novels, what I would add would be more slices of life adding dates or moments with the heroines or some moments training with the heroines or alone, it doesn't have to be dating or outside the academy, it could be moments of the mc chatting with the girls he already has or joking with them, just extend a few moments, that would add more life to the characters. This has potential, it would only lack those small details and a more frequent update and it would easily scale Story development 10/10 Character development: 10/10 World Development 10/10 Romance 8/10
I liked the story. I hope the author starts posting chapters more often. There's still a lot of story to go, and I hope the author doesn't lose his rhythm and creativity and gives us something good.
I liked the story, idk about the update so gave it a 5, the grammar is not bad but you could barely understand it. The background was good ig. *Spoiler* The novel got me mad when the mc decided to become the Empresses slave.. bruh i thought he was gonna conquer her but.. well i left
did you drop the story, because i liked it very much and hoped it would continue. please don't drop it
If you like fantasy isekai adventure type novel then its a must read... I personally like the story and the way it's developing yet (chapter 36). Its better then many simillar novel out there(i am saing its the best). There are some Pronoun problem(everything else alright) but I think its because the author is not living of it, so he has no editor(maybe). And updates miss some times( but the updates are still regular.Don't know about the future though) Well so far so good. Hope the author will keep this up. Best of Luck[img=recommend] [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It is an excellent novel, it has a good development of characters, world and the ways in which it obtains the girls from the harem is going well in comparison to other novels, what I would add would be more slices of life adding dates or moments with the heroines or some moments training with the heroines or alone, it doesn't have to be dating or outside the academy, it could be moments of the mc chatting with the girls he already has or joking with them, just extend a few moments, that would add more life to the characters. This has potential, it would only lack those small details and a more frequent update and it would easily scale Story development 10/10 Character development: 10/10 World Development 10/10 Romance 8/10
I liked the story. I hope the author starts posting chapters more often. There's still a lot of story to go, and I hope the author doesn't lose his rhythm and creativity and gives us something good.
I liked the story, idk about the update so gave it a 5, the grammar is not bad but you could barely understand it. The background was good ig. *Spoiler* The novel got me mad when the mc decided to become the Empresses slave.. bruh i thought he was gonna conquer her but.. well i left
did you drop the story, because i liked it very much and hoped it would continue. please don't drop it