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Incluso después de haber leído está historia hasta hace ya más de un año no puedo imaginarme el como el autor hubiera desarrollado la historia teniendo a tantos personajes principales.
Very disappointed. Got past the info dump only to find further disappointment. Writing style is all over the place leading to confusion. The only reason this isn’t high on the list of “oh hell no” is bc the story didn’t manage to hold my attention long enough for it to really sink in. Good idea but execution was terrible.
Por favor no dejen caer está novela, más capitulos completos por favor ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Story is good, just need someone to edit the grammar. The only problem is when explaining every new thing it’s very long and I just end up reading a little of the necessary information and skip through the rest. The other problem is when explaining things it ruins the flow of the story it is up to such as when a character show up with a new weapon, the story is flowing then that whole chapter is just a full on description of the grade, type of material and other thing that are just being unnecessarily introduced at the wrong time. Well that my rant.
I need more Please come back We are waiting for you Pleaseeeeeee And thank you 😘😘😘😘😘😘 I want to read more We need more ; I want a happy ending
I liked the concept that they gave to the novel, it is regularly put to OFL as if it disappeared from the plot and then replaced by mc, but in this case they gave it another body, besides that most of the main characters managed to recover their memories , which will help them avoid their tragedies and give a better development to the story.
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More please.. 🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅More please.. 🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅More please.. 🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅
😍😚😙😘♠♥♣Love the character, the system not so much. The question is thou why is she acting so naive, she was an older woman with a child when she died.
Best..😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘🤗🤗🤗😘😘🤗🤗😘🤗🤗😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
Me encanta, la heroína es muy badass me gusta que tome al male lead y se lo ponga donde quiere she is lovely. Creo que los personajes son muy lindos, tienen una buena estructura y son muy llevaderos, me gusta que no sea una historia que solo sea de manita sudada como decimos por acá. La heroína es muy agradable y aunque a pasado por malos momentos en su vida pasada, no deja de ser un ser agradable y que se deja llevar bien con los demás. Amo al hermano menor es un encanto y es muy lindo, me gusta que la historia presente más de una preferencia sexual y que sea capas de mostrarla sin ningún problema y es muy agradable al describirla.
I kind of like the concept but I saw the last update of this book was 3 month ago so, is this book complete or dropped?????? Can any kind hearted parson please tell me??????
A worth spending time story....written in a very nice way...good job author... Live ur work...awsome story plot..every character is explained in detail..it felt like we a ourselves those characters... Stories should be like this with detail. Description
Me encanta 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
I read you from Peru, please continue with the novel. I love it and I know that this is a hobby for you, you also have a life, but I demand you with a lot of violence 🤣
Oh god how long do I have 2 wait for the next chapter to update I really like the story especially new female lead with male lead to gather love them both a lot and his cute little brother with his wife hoping for happy ending
Well its entertaining as well as very puzzling... i mean the world background is unique as it is... and also the past present is jumbled.. and i have a headache sorting it out...pls.. edit
Amazing story !! Love love love 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
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I really tried my best to read this because I loved the plot and the main characters. But unfortunately I could only make it to chapter 50 because the storyline was too messy in my opinion. A lot of detail that I personally think was all over the place that made continuing to read hard. The author introduces different continent each with different species, different types of beasts (sacred, divine, mutation, demon, monsters, etc), armaments, cultivation levels, and different planets, etc, which made it hard to follow along and understand. I truly love our reckless, dumb, shameless MC and the other characters... but I don’t think I can continue on. Best of luck to those who continue on!
OK I dropped this after chapter 50. I should dropped this earlier. Lot of unnecessary information, messy timeline, and plot. The author few times mixed up "she" and "he", which made me question few things. "Now XY character have a husband or a wife?? " I was skipping chapters because of the lot of unnecessary information while the characters didn't do anything and the story was not moving at all. The author jumping between past and present, confusing sometimes the readers. No hate, but this story just not my cup of tea although I read lot of transmigration and reincarnation novels, this is just a no for me.
Author when are you coming back?? Honestly i wish you'd update at least once a month is okay......author we miss you plz do come back and i love the characters and the story development. Hope to hear from you soon dear Author😄😄
Amazing story. Love the tranmigration female lead theme. Especially main character fluffy romance. But why must they gain their memory it givesbaeayvall the mystery oh well love the different pov anyway.
Is a great story write by an ******* author! I totally recommend it. The main characters are so funny and I like the way they interacted with each other. Only bémol is the fact that the updates are not stable enough.
Well...I don't know what to say other than this story is a grammatical nightmare. It's just...sigh. The premise is beautiful and I guess you can ignore the errors if you like it enough but...well. You really should work on your pronouns in particular. Just to clarify, for a woman is used /she/ and for a male /he/. Always. No exchange between the two can occour. Not only that, you also fill the chapters with unneeded info, throwing up facts left and right, making it a boring read. Is the reason why I only gave you 3 stars for world background. It's not that you did not develop it, it's just that...you didn't really fit it very well in the story. You should try to integrate your info more with the flow of the story, revealing smaller bits in more points. There is no need to dump everything on the readers at once, it only stops the flow and few people will read those added parts anyway (like i did) which is a pity. Aside from those points it's a beautiful story, I liked it. You probably should just think more about editing your chapters rather than postin them quicker, really. Anyway, I hope I didn't offend you with my comments and that instead they could be of some help to improve your writing style.
The story and characters are great! BUT the grammar is a big OOF!! You need to get an editor or hire a new one because there are a ton of errors that ruin the flow of the story. Work hard and don't give up!
This is pretty good Well, it has a swallow title, but so far, I love author`s way of story telling, and I love this novel power couple, and I love how the story develop so far. This novel`s rating is too low, and I think it deserve some more higher rating For all the newbie reader, I recommend this novel, because despite the slow story development, and the slow romance, this novel has a quite solid foundation. Happy reading, and have a nice day
I like reading this... the only problem I have is the spelling errors and the wrong pronouns used to describe the genders at times, he became she and etc. But I like where this story is going! Please update soon! 😁😁😁
I really love how the FL and her system interact with eachother and also the development of the plot was totally unexpected. I'm looking forward for more updates and more shameless interaction with the ML and FL.😍😍😍
The best of this book are the characters, the mc is as cool as the cliche ml, but with the sweet attitude of a girl, a not so foolish personality and yet the strong determination of a woman who knows what she wants. Every character has a deep background of personality after their character until now (except the villian half sister but we still don't know much about her). The story development has interesting twist thanks to the world background as if telling us the book the mc read in her past life is not as simple and romantic as it made itself look; pain of betrayal and lots of regret are heavy in the hearts of the ones who reencarnated back in time so is a mush of different characters trying to change the future and fixing their errors and the mc is in the middle of all of this, trying to help her familily and have a happy life.
I really love love love love love love love love love love love it 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕 but please update more chapters ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ and thank you and love you 💕💕💕
Incluso después de haber leído está historia hasta hace ya más de un año no puedo imaginarme el como el autor hubiera desarrollado la historia teniendo a tantos personajes principales.
Very disappointed. Got past the info dump only to find further disappointment. Writing style is all over the place leading to confusion. The only reason this isn’t high on the list of “oh hell no” is bc the story didn’t manage to hold my attention long enough for it to really sink in. Good idea but execution was terrible.
Por favor no dejen caer está novela, más capitulos completos por favor ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Story is good, just need someone to edit the grammar. The only problem is when explaining every new thing it’s very long and I just end up reading a little of the necessary information and skip through the rest. The other problem is when explaining things it ruins the flow of the story it is up to such as when a character show up with a new weapon, the story is flowing then that whole chapter is just a full on description of the grade, type of material and other thing that are just being unnecessarily introduced at the wrong time. Well that my rant.
I need more Please come back We are waiting for you Pleaseeeeeee And thank you 😘😘😘😘😘😘 I want to read more We need more ; I want a happy ending
I liked the concept that they gave to the novel, it is regularly put to OFL as if it disappeared from the plot and then replaced by mc, but in this case they gave it another body, besides that most of the main characters managed to recover their memories , which will help them avoid their tragedies and give a better development to the story.
Reveal Spoiler More please.. 🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅More please.. 🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅More please.. 🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅🐅
😍😚😙😘♠♥♣Love the character, the system not so much. The question is thou why is she acting so naive, she was an older woman with a child when she died.
Best..😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘🤗🤗🤗😘😘🤗🤗😘🤗🤗😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
Me encanta, la heroína es muy badass me gusta que tome al male lead y se lo ponga donde quiere she is lovely. Creo que los personajes son muy lindos, tienen una buena estructura y son muy llevaderos, me gusta que no sea una historia que solo sea de manita sudada como decimos por acá. La heroína es muy agradable y aunque a pasado por malos momentos en su vida pasada, no deja de ser un ser agradable y que se deja llevar bien con los demás. Amo al hermano menor es un encanto y es muy lindo, me gusta que la historia presente más de una preferencia sexual y que sea capas de mostrarla sin ningún problema y es muy agradable al describirla.
I kind of like the concept but I saw the last update of this book was 3 month ago so, is this book complete or dropped?????? Can any kind hearted parson please tell me??????
A worth spending time story....written in a very nice way...good job author... Live ur work...awsome story plot..every character is explained in detail..it felt like we a ourselves those characters... Stories should be like this with detail. Description
Me encanta 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
I read you from Peru, please continue with the novel. I love it and I know that this is a hobby for you, you also have a life, but I demand you with a lot of violence 🤣
Oh god how long do I have 2 wait for the next chapter to update I really like the story especially new female lead with male lead to gather love them both a lot and his cute little brother with his wife hoping for happy ending
Well its entertaining as well as very puzzling... i mean the world background is unique as it is... and also the past present is jumbled.. and i have a headache sorting it out...pls.. edit
Amazing story !! Love love love 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
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I really tried my best to read this because I loved the plot and the main characters. But unfortunately I could only make it to chapter 50 because the storyline was too messy in my opinion. A lot of detail that I personally think was all over the place that made continuing to read hard. The author introduces different continent each with different species, different types of beasts (sacred, divine, mutation, demon, monsters, etc), armaments, cultivation levels, and different planets, etc, which made it hard to follow along and understand. I truly love our reckless, dumb, shameless MC and the other characters... but I don’t think I can continue on. Best of luck to those who continue on!
OK I dropped this after chapter 50. I should dropped this earlier. Lot of unnecessary information, messy timeline, and plot. The author few times mixed up "she" and "he", which made me question few things. "Now XY character have a husband or a wife?? " I was skipping chapters because of the lot of unnecessary information while the characters didn't do anything and the story was not moving at all. The author jumping between past and present, confusing sometimes the readers. No hate, but this story just not my cup of tea although I read lot of transmigration and reincarnation novels, this is just a no for me.
Author when are you coming back?? Honestly i wish you'd update at least once a month is okay......author we miss you plz do come back and i love the characters and the story development. Hope to hear from you soon dear Author😄😄
Amazing story. Love the tranmigration female lead theme. Especially main character fluffy romance. But why must they gain their memory it givesbaeayvall the mystery oh well love the different pov anyway.
Is a great story write by an ******* author! I totally recommend it. The main characters are so funny and I like the way they interacted with each other. Only bémol is the fact that the updates are not stable enough.
Well...I don't know what to say other than this story is a grammatical nightmare. It's just...sigh. The premise is beautiful and I guess you can ignore the errors if you like it enough but...well. You really should work on your pronouns in particular. Just to clarify, for a woman is used /she/ and for a male /he/. Always. No exchange between the two can occour. Not only that, you also fill the chapters with unneeded info, throwing up facts left and right, making it a boring read. Is the reason why I only gave you 3 stars for world background. It's not that you did not develop it, it's just that...you didn't really fit it very well in the story. You should try to integrate your info more with the flow of the story, revealing smaller bits in more points. There is no need to dump everything on the readers at once, it only stops the flow and few people will read those added parts anyway (like i did) which is a pity. Aside from those points it's a beautiful story, I liked it. You probably should just think more about editing your chapters rather than postin them quicker, really. Anyway, I hope I didn't offend you with my comments and that instead they could be of some help to improve your writing style.
The story and characters are great! BUT the grammar is a big OOF!! You need to get an editor or hire a new one because there are a ton of errors that ruin the flow of the story. Work hard and don't give up!
This is pretty good Well, it has a swallow title, but so far, I love author`s way of story telling, and I love this novel power couple, and I love how the story develop so far. This novel`s rating is too low, and I think it deserve some more higher rating For all the newbie reader, I recommend this novel, because despite the slow story development, and the slow romance, this novel has a quite solid foundation. Happy reading, and have a nice day
I like reading this... the only problem I have is the spelling errors and the wrong pronouns used to describe the genders at times, he became she and etc. But I like where this story is going! Please update soon! 😁😁😁
I really love how the FL and her system interact with eachother and also the development of the plot was totally unexpected. I'm looking forward for more updates and more shameless interaction with the ML and FL.😍😍😍
The best of this book are the characters, the mc is as cool as the cliche ml, but with the sweet attitude of a girl, a not so foolish personality and yet the strong determination of a woman who knows what she wants. Every character has a deep background of personality after their character until now (except the villian half sister but we still don't know much about her). The story development has interesting twist thanks to the world background as if telling us the book the mc read in her past life is not as simple and romantic as it made itself look; pain of betrayal and lots of regret are heavy in the hearts of the ones who reencarnated back in time so is a mush of different characters trying to change the future and fixing their errors and the mc is in the middle of all of this, trying to help her familily and have a happy life.
I really love love love love love love love love love love love it 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕 but please update more chapters ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ and thank you and love you 💕💕💕