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I Have Become a Capable Servant for the Villain
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In a twist of fate, Elena transmigrates into the novel she once read. Embracing her new identity as Seraphine, a young slave designated to be a side character, she will be killed by her master, the villain of the story. However, She is not alone. She comes with a special Ai assistant named Alice who could help her change her future and overcome all her struggles.
Seraphine must also come to terms with the unexpected twists that the story has taken, both as a result of her actions and the unknown surprises awaiting her.
The world is set in a medieval to renaissance era with magics and inconsistent technologies. All rolled up into one adventure, from slice-of-life moments to comedy, fantasy, romance, action, and Academy. I hope anyone reading this has fun and enjoys the journey!
If you are worried that the main character might remain a servant and be weak, rest assured that she will gradually grow stronger and attain a higher status in the future!
The story's early part focuses on the character's relationship development, but it slowly gets more detailed and reveals the world's secret. Since I'm not too fond of lore dumps, and I am pretty sure you don't like it.
Publication date 2/7/2023
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I've read all the chapters out at this point (38 or so) all in one sitting, and after reading I felt compelled to leave a review! I have to say that it's very very rare to find novels that stand out on Webnovel, not because they're bad but because a lot of tropes and cliches are overused. In the midst of all that, this story is definitely a breath of fresh air! It still has familiar elements like transmigration and a system, but the story has a unique take that I personally haven't read elsewhere. It's refreshing to read about the MC growing because of her own hard work rather than gaining levels through a system. To top it off, the MC is one of the best I've read in recent times. She's likeable, intelligent, and cautious. One of the things I hate the most is when female characters are suddenly incompetent for the sake of plot, and thankfully that never happens here. All in all, I would genuinely recommend this novel to anyone who enjoys transmigration stories with a strong female mc and cute romance!
The story is written excellently. Character description, plot, development. Everything is amazing. The story is getting me hooked, definitely coming back when there are more chapters.
The story goes by very nicely. It's also rare to see a good female MC. Author also does a really good job at describing the changes in MC's relationships with the other characters.
I low-key hated it. Definitely as far from my preferences as it could get. Even so, it objectively deserves close to 5 stars, something that surprised even me. The writing was excellent and the premise unique, to say the least. ) There are a few sparse punctuation issues, but other than that, gramamr is good. The prologue could use a bit of a rework, and will hurt your retention quite a bit at this pace. I'm not sure I have any concrete advice, but it doesn't feel important until you read chapter 2. Almost hypocritical of me, I know. But yes, prologue is only good in retrospect. When reading it, it seems bland. For your chapters, I think you need to either do 1,2k x 2 daily releases, or 1,5k single releases to qualify for their extra income. Should consider adjusting accordingly in the future. In conclusion, it's a great novel for those who enjoy this category. If you're into that, it's an excellent find. Good luck.
[img=recommend][img=recommend]Perfectly written .....The character got me all crazy...honestly recommend it[img=recommend]
So far I'm loving it. You are truly working hard and that is what makes this one hundred times better. Hope to see more of it and I enjoy mc. Despite the title scared me a bit.💜🤍💜
This is a good novel I'd recommend this to anyone who intend on reading. The grammar is good and consistent and the plot us good! Keep it up author!
This story is very interesting to say the very least. I was pleasantly surprised reading this and enjoying it considering how its my first Webnovel series to read.
I admit, I was truly impressed by the female lead. The way she carries herself and they way she handles situations with ease is what kept me here all the time. I was surprised about detail and vividness of every characters present in your story. The plot has a moderate pace, not too fast and not too slow, unlike me, which I am very well aware of😌. The first thing I liked in your story was how the butler despite being from a noble background and despite looking down on slaves, is impressed by the eloquence of the female lead. It is like, although he despises the poor, he won't go as far as to deliberately go over to cause trouble for them. All the best for her future journey and I hope she is always able to accept different types of siruations calmly by analyzing them over and over again, to gain special or hidden insights. Also, the AI, if only it could have a personality of its own. How I would love to be her system and help her in reasoning mysteries😍. Thank you so much for hard work. Your work is a masterpiece😎😎..
This genre is not my cup of tea, but the author made it so the story is engaging either way (which caught me off guard)! The thing I enjoyed the most was the development of the relationship of the man characters, which was very unique and fun to witness. Overall, it was a really fun read! Keep it up!
This book is an expertly woven tapestry of compelling narrative and vibrant characterization. Each chapter pulls you deeper into the story, making it hard to put down. The plot unfolds with a delicate blend of suspense and insightful revelations, offering a depth that is both satisfying and thought-provoking. Its characters are well-rounded, their motivations complex yet relatable, making their arcs feel personal and deeply impactful. The author's eloquent prose is also worthy of note, painting vivid images and evoking a wide range of emotions. The ending brings a satisfactory resolution that leaves a lasting impression. Overall, this book isn't just a read, but a journey that fully warrants its 5-star rating.
Good story, only problem is the short chapters, but I have no right to complain since I am also guilty of this. I also like the female mc since I don't read a lot fmc stories, so this was quite enjoyable, hope to see more from the author.
Chapter status: 5 I geek into these types of transmigration stories and I won't lie to you I loved reading each chapter your writing style is able to keep me hooked and I loved how some parts of your story are completely original or I probably haven't seen these types of plots as often but I can say that this novel is a really good read Keep up the great work author!
The author perform grammar perfectly and the plot is quite interesting. I’m very addicted in this novel now. If you are new to Isekai style, this will fit for you.
This is my early review for the book. Once I read the latest chapter, I will replace this review with a new one.So far, the story is interesting to read. We got a female protagonist that are not like the usual protagonist in the same type of genre. Usually in another book, it always start cliche like the ML suddenly fall in love with the protagonist. But this one is different, we got protagonist with system. The romance won't appear to early and there's a lot of things possible route to make an unexpected.Based on the early information, it seem there will be two ML in the story.People who read a lot FL webtoon definitely would enjoy this type of story. As it easy to picture the situation in the story. Overall, this book is worth the time. Just make sure to slowly read the book when you have time.🍀
The flow is immersive even with few grammar errors that aren't major. I really like female leads in Isekai tropes. Even after I realize some references from the work, the concept makes it original. Though there are some moments I question about the plot holes, they can easily be taped with restrictions/limitations. The MC not being overpowered is just right, since it will lead to countless conflicts and plot possibilities.
System and transmigration is popular among male lead novels and is rarely used with female lead novels. The author did an excellent job adapting those two themes to match a female audience. The author stated that English isn’t their first language, but honestly, this author possess exceptional English prowess. There were little to no grammar errors and the word plays throughout were phenomenal. If you’re a fan of system and transmigration novels, then I highly recommend this novel. It’s quite underrated so I hope it gets the recognition it deserves in the future. Keep up the good work author! And don’t give up on this novel! 🫶
It is a teen novel, feels like. The deep explanations are worth mentioning, seems intriguing also the names of the characters are really cool, so, I like the writing style and the character development both.....Best Wishes!
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