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This book's setting should be American since the characters are American... however..the author writes using Chinese setting ..I mean Chinese way of life like calling people Master Raul.. vegetable king Kelvin and so on is typically Chinese.... author please stop this and make the book more American.. American people are always proud and nosy.. Chinese like to compare between themselves and slander each other...the Mc is also typically Chinese because he seems to fall in love easily and being swayed by the female leads.. anyway the novel is a good one...the grammatical errors are few ..the author should continue with this book..
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Stick to your country when writing novels, don't use a country you practically know nothing about except what you see in movies. China is not USA, don't use your Chinese perspective to generalise US except this I like the book
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Honestly, the title reminds me of NTR, not gonna lie. I’m not a fan of taking someone’s free will even if this is just fiction. The characters are cringey when it comes to love or romance.
alright now this book is ruined. I don't know why authors have to introduce love life in novels with these type of concepts. I think without love it would've been a wonderful novel. the girl is clearly forcing herself on Shawn for no reason at all. Then all that cringey blushing and all it gives me goosebumps. are these authors loners in real life and do not know women I mean they totally show that girls are like cats with curiosity they like to do whatever they want.
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This book is really dumb, the MC gains the ability to just change people's choices on things but we don't actually get to see the choices. The book will talk about how "number 1 is bad and number 3 is the best option" but it never tells you what those options are so it's super frustrating to read
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Another Trash.😒 I dont even know why I am still reading Webnovel Trial Reads😔 ...... .... ...... ........ ................. Another Trash.😒 I dont even know why I am still reading Webnovel Trial Reads😔
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don't expect anything to accurate in America perception just think of it as a foreign country. that isn't the major problem though they added a cost with reward system in the form of choices but somehow completely making the person think completely differently is the cheapest choice. maybe I'll change my thoughts if there comes a time where the mc wants to be hated by someone and couldn't because it's too expensive but until then.
its a cool concept, just dont expect this story to nail down a realistic background. you’ll have a high chance of cringing, :9 be ready for that.
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the intro sounds really interesting!!! using system and choices in urban sounds cool. looking forward for it! i hope its as good as it sounds.
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This book's setting should be American since the characters are American... however..the author writes using Chinese setting ..I mean Chinese way of life like calling people Master Raul.. vegetable king Kelvin and so on is typically Chinese.... author please stop this and make the book more American.. American people are always proud and nosy.. Chinese like to compare between themselves and slander each other...the Mc is also typically Chinese because he seems to fall in love easily and being swayed by the female leads.. anyway the novel is a good one...the grammatical errors are few ..the author should continue with this book..
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Stick to your country when writing novels, don't use a country you practically know nothing about except what you see in movies. China is not USA, don't use your Chinese perspective to generalise US except this I like the book
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Honestly, the title reminds me of NTR, not gonna lie. I’m not a fan of taking someone’s free will even if this is just fiction. The characters are cringey when it comes to love or romance.
alright now this book is ruined. I don't know why authors have to introduce love life in novels with these type of concepts. I think without love it would've been a wonderful novel. the girl is clearly forcing herself on Shawn for no reason at all. Then all that cringey blushing and all it gives me goosebumps. are these authors loners in real life and do not know women I mean they totally show that girls are like cats with curiosity they like to do whatever they want.
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This book is really dumb, the MC gains the ability to just change people's choices on things but we don't actually get to see the choices. The book will talk about how "number 1 is bad and number 3 is the best option" but it never tells you what those options are so it's super frustrating to read
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Another Trash.😒 I dont even know why I am still reading Webnovel Trial Reads😔 ...... .... ...... ........ ................. Another Trash.😒 I dont even know why I am still reading Webnovel Trial Reads😔
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don't expect anything to accurate in America perception just think of it as a foreign country. that isn't the major problem though they added a cost with reward system in the form of choices but somehow completely making the person think completely differently is the cheapest choice. maybe I'll change my thoughts if there comes a time where the mc wants to be hated by someone and couldn't because it's too expensive but until then.
its a cool concept, just dont expect this story to nail down a realistic background. you’ll have a high chance of cringing, :9 be ready for that.
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the intro sounds really interesting!!! using system and choices in urban sounds cool. looking forward for it! i hope its as good as it sounds.
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