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Haven't read the story yet but W author for putting it on the fan fiction section so it's free for everyone you a real one and i hope the best for you and the translation.
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read until 150 in mtl,stopped cus mtl was getting painful. but other than that the novel is great and the translation is also great. so i am just waiting for it to get to 200 or so, just so i can binge read it
A good start, unfortunately too few chapters to get a definitive idea, if I had nothing else to read I think I'd fall into MTL's Demonic Dao. Courage translator, please try to increase your translation speed.
I did read this story up to 552 and can tell it is good one up to certain point. Confrontation between MC from the book and his creator with his villain subordinate done well. Villain is not too OP, intrigue is still there and it strong enough that you can't help but worry for MC. Because he have plot armor protection. There is somewhat grow of a villain who became a lot more likeable and dicent. There are a lot less cliche over all and the ons that there done nicely and don't cause irritation. So for large part of a story it's all about interaction between Villain and Ancestor, grow of a villain as cultivator and as a person. As well as confrontation between teachers when they take temporary take over bodies of their disciples. All of the above is best part of this story. ATTENTION SPOILERS!!! After 350+ chapter MC of this story and Author of created world resurrects. The way it was done the scene, it's really good, despite reading with translation. But after that point story become your typical cultivation story and likeable MC, who is from our world, becomes typical cultivation story main character who can fight couple of huge realms above his class. With typical behaviour for such characters. Really disappointing. Don't get me wrong story is good enough that I was willing to suffer mechanical translation just to read more and don't wait for quality translation. But it's quality start to drop after 350 chapters. So if you are looking for somewhat unique and not your typical cultivation story with interesting main character, it lasts only up to that point.
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I read it on mtlnovel, it's completed their. Interaction between the original MC and our MC is unique , despite taking all the opportunities of the original MC , our MC is never at an absolute advantage since the heaven is helping the original MC even by sacrificing its power. Even though the original MC is always suppressed by our MC it mostly by using tricks. Even though our MC has system (origin of which are not explained even till the end) it's not OP . The ending is not good (at least for me) , some things are not clearly explained , one character was forgotten in the last (Ning girl) to make sure its stays non harem. Despite it's flaws, if we just go by this books ability to keep the reader interested then it's a solid 5/5 , i was not able to control myself after reading the initial chapters here and read it on mtl . Overall, not a masterpiece but still a good read .
Obligated 5-star review here following the traditions of Webnovel. I read this on webnovel from a translator but he had only 40 chapters and I quite like the story. The mtl was below my understanding, so here it is...Tell me how you liked the translation. This novel's power grading is seriously messed up. Sometimes it's written something else and sometimes something else...
Haven't read the story yet but W author for putting it on the fan fiction section so it's free for everyone you a real one and i hope the best for you and the translation.
Thanks ...................ejisjfkeiqksmfnfnalqpslxmdnmskwpwlebgngmvlwowiehnfdlpwwlwknfkspqpqlxm .................................dhjwlacmjdalalalms
read until 150 in mtl,stopped cus mtl was getting painful. but other than that the novel is great and the translation is also great. so i am just waiting for it to get to 200 or so, just so i can binge read it
A good start, unfortunately too few chapters to get a definitive idea, if I had nothing else to read I think I'd fall into MTL's Demonic Dao. Courage translator, please try to increase your translation speed.
I did read this story up to 552 and can tell it is good one up to certain point. Confrontation between MC from the book and his creator with his villain subordinate done well. Villain is not too OP, intrigue is still there and it strong enough that you can't help but worry for MC. Because he have plot armor protection. There is somewhat grow of a villain who became a lot more likeable and dicent. There are a lot less cliche over all and the ons that there done nicely and don't cause irritation. So for large part of a story it's all about interaction between Villain and Ancestor, grow of a villain as cultivator and as a person. As well as confrontation between teachers when they take temporary take over bodies of their disciples. All of the above is best part of this story. ATTENTION SPOILERS!!! After 350+ chapter MC of this story and Author of created world resurrects. The way it was done the scene, it's really good, despite reading with translation. But after that point story become your typical cultivation story and likeable MC, who is from our world, becomes typical cultivation story main character who can fight couple of huge realms above his class. With typical behaviour for such characters. Really disappointing. Don't get me wrong story is good enough that I was willing to suffer mechanical translation just to read more and don't wait for quality translation. But it's quality start to drop after 350 chapters. So if you are looking for somewhat unique and not your typical cultivation story with interesting main character, it lasts only up to that point.
Reveal Spoiler I read it on mtlnovel, it's completed their. Interaction between the original MC and our MC is unique , despite taking all the opportunities of the original MC , our MC is never at an absolute advantage since the heaven is helping the original MC even by sacrificing its power. Even though the original MC is always suppressed by our MC it mostly by using tricks. Even though our MC has system (origin of which are not explained even till the end) it's not OP . The ending is not good (at least for me) , some things are not clearly explained , one character was forgotten in the last (Ning girl) to make sure its stays non harem. Despite it's flaws, if we just go by this books ability to keep the reader interested then it's a solid 5/5 , i was not able to control myself after reading the initial chapters here and read it on mtl . Overall, not a masterpiece but still a good read .
Obligated 5-star review here following the traditions of Webnovel. I read this on webnovel from a translator but he had only 40 chapters and I quite like the story. The mtl was below my understanding, so here it is...Tell me how you liked the translation. This novel's power grading is seriously messed up. Sometimes it's written something else and sometimes something else...