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got to 12. then a bomb of OC and OP enemies. went very weird. seemed good till then. vvvvbvvvvvvvvv vvvvbvvvvvvvvv vvvvbvvvvvvvvv bbvbbbbbbbbbbbb
Was good until chapter 10, then some weird stuff happens. But it's your story Author so write what you want, just isn't my kind of story.
What I have to say would have been to much for the comments So hear it is. For the MC being to op it all depends on how you want it to end, either in naruto’s era with a few chapters of happy ever after(introducing kids, there personalities, mothers……etc). While maybe some multiverse travel to bleach universe like it was implied. Or Do your own version of Baruto era which maybe harder to write, while multiversing to many universes just doesn’t fit this novel. It would be better to start a new novel or risk lowering the quality of this one. Just as a reminder I love this novel and everything I said is just my opinion Write Whatever You Want!!!!
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I love it even though the pace is too fast, but the dlc characters debut kinda throw me off. I can't read it, sorry. I hope you can foreshadow it better and not "surprise madafaka" us. Til next time
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Such a good story! Congratulations, keep writing! The world is yours Joao132135................................................ ............................
Great story, loved every chapter (and I'm not even a fan of Naruto). I'm glad to see the author's dedication to improving what was asked for in each review. [img=recommend]
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the writing is weird the dialogues are too short the characters' relationships are too forced and there are a lot of things the original characters wouldn't do
dropped at chapter 10 im not fan of many transmigrator running around aside from the mc dropped at chapter 10 im not fan of many transmigrator running around aside from the mc dropped at chapter 10 im not fan of many transmigrator running around aside from the mc dropped at chapter 10 im not fan of many transmigrator running around aside from the mc
I loved it, in chapter 9 it had 4.5 stars, but having other transmigrants, I dropped it in chapter 10 (- 2.5 stars) ................................................
Two things mc revealed everything to kurama And i decided to drop cause im legitimately sick Of swords i have read I dont even know how many fics like almost 2k or maybe more and its ridiculous how many fics use them im think around 70-80% use it
-> the grammar could be better, but it's readable. story development is rushed and lacks detail. if you want the naruto story with a lot of comedy, little detail and little depth in the plot, this is for you.
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It's a really great story and I want Moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrreeeeeeeee. Thanks for the story author and pls don't drop it
This looks like it’s going to be amazing, please keep up the hard work!👍👍👍🤩🤩🤩🤩👍👍🤩🤩👍🤩🤩🤩🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩🤩😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😃😃😃😃😃😄😄😄😄😁😁😁😁😆😆😆😆😆😁😁😄😄😃😃😀😀😄😁
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got to 12. then a bomb of OC and OP enemies. went very weird. seemed good till then. vvvvbvvvvvvvvv vvvvbvvvvvvvvv vvvvbvvvvvvvvv bbvbbbbbbbbbbbb
Was good until chapter 10, then some weird stuff happens. But it's your story Author so write what you want, just isn't my kind of story.
What I have to say would have been to much for the comments So hear it is. For the MC being to op it all depends on how you want it to end, either in naruto’s era with a few chapters of happy ever after(introducing kids, there personalities, mothers……etc). While maybe some multiverse travel to bleach universe like it was implied. Or Do your own version of Baruto era which maybe harder to write, while multiversing to many universes just doesn’t fit this novel. It would be better to start a new novel or risk lowering the quality of this one. Just as a reminder I love this novel and everything I said is just my opinion Write Whatever You Want!!!!
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Reveal Spoiler I love it even though the pace is too fast, but the dlc characters debut kinda throw me off. I can't read it, sorry. I hope you can foreshadow it better and not "surprise madafaka" us. Til next time
I WANT MORE MORE MORE MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE
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Reveal Spoiler Such a good story! Congratulations, keep writing! The world is yours Joao132135................................................ ............................
Great story, loved every chapter (and I'm not even a fan of Naruto). I'm glad to see the author's dedication to improving what was asked for in each review. [img=recommend]
Good novel . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
the writing is weird the dialogues are too short the characters' relationships are too forced and there are a lot of things the original characters wouldn't do
dropped at chapter 10 im not fan of many transmigrator running around aside from the mc dropped at chapter 10 im not fan of many transmigrator running around aside from the mc dropped at chapter 10 im not fan of many transmigrator running around aside from the mc dropped at chapter 10 im not fan of many transmigrator running around aside from the mc
I loved it, in chapter 9 it had 4.5 stars, but having other transmigrants, I dropped it in chapter 10 (- 2.5 stars) ................................................
Two things mc revealed everything to kurama And i decided to drop cause im legitimately sick Of swords i have read I dont even know how many fics like almost 2k or maybe more and its ridiculous how many fics use them im think around 70-80% use it
-> the grammar could be better, but it's readable. story development is rushed and lacks detail. if you want the naruto story with a lot of comedy, little detail and little depth in the plot, this is for you.
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Reveal Spoiler It's a really great story and I want Moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrreeeeeeeee. Thanks for the story author and pls don't drop it
This looks like it’s going to be amazing, please keep up the hard work!👍👍👍🤩🤩🤩🤩👍👍🤩🤩👍🤩🤩🤩🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩🤩😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😃😃😃😃😃😄😄😄😄😁😁😁😁😆😆😆😆😆😁😁😄😄😃😃😀😀😄😁
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