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WebTalk

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venom_hunt_041199

it clearly needs more character development and the plot is reverting to your same old style. it is also so 2013. your story design and romantic ventures are good for bit style play, but completely fails from the propective of story-side novel view. I used to like your stories very much but now I find them going through the same old cliques. girls falling for the fake bravado act of protags and protags screwing friends gf's by some hypocritical moral superiority. and most importantly haircuts does change a person's look but not his personality and others perspective( one of your main cliques, it does help a persons own self-esteem though). also stop trying to make the protag a pariah when he is some loser who got lucky by getting a system and feels like he is losing out by getting a girlfriend. I mean it is harem story but try to develop each character's story so that they won't feel like empty text.

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FAP_Master_

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Dr_Chad

First to review deserves more likes I always follow this formula.. Akikan=5*

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CamlEnvy

I can't say much about the FF since it only has 3 chapters, but it was an interesting start. Now, if the MC follows the path of his last 4/5 FF's, we already know that it will be a shitty read and as we have already been warned that we will have him traveling to other worlds, if he follows the last FF I will change everything to one star. I really like the author Akikan, I read all his stories, but in recent years his writing has been falling a lot, I hope this is the return to cool stories to read and not just about NSFW and an idiotic MC who thinks with D **K. I really like you Akikan, change for the better soon.

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vitaminC

over all it’s basic fanfiction where loser dude with past life memories and he don’t know what to do about his new life, so the author gave him a system then telling him to chase one girl or all the heroine, and I’ve no clue why the girls suddenly become so clingy, what’s good from this is the update stability

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NunuXD

Akikan is not disappoint! A solid 5 Stars! Just hope that he don't turn this novel into a cheating guilty trip like his mineta novel [img=update][img=update]

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Psan

Akinan new novel eh? Our new protagonist will steal all the girls. The funny part is reading how he does it[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]

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Sahil_SA

I don't need to think too much and read the story first to rate this book~ why..? Because obviously!! This is Akikan novel!!! 😍5 star from me 🌟

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ArdaPendragon

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Brothers

Don't ask why I rated it a 5 star and if you have a problem with it let's fight! By the way, will this also be crossover fan fiction? And where are the tags?

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DetectiveHarem

i believe this fanfiction is much better than "Ultimate being from the tokonosu City" Even when there are only 7 chapters I'm already deeply, falling and hopelessly ensnared by this fanfiction. i hope you can update this fanfiction more like 2 chapters per day in my humble opinion.

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

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RavielIvansia

Semua buku akikan pasti saya kasih bintang 5👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Keist

Hopefully the story is not boring. Character development is really needed to build emotions if this story goes into the drama genre. For now, I will give 5 stars, if it is satisfactory as far as Akikan updates then I will not change this. Umu~

LV 4

Ireallylikereading

im making this review 5 stars as soon as he goes for kei or chika, preferably kei since theres too much chika without any kei for some reason. kei is a great character filled with potential but people keep ignoring her, heck i have only seen one fanfic where they go for kei and that was indirectly literally just an accidental charm.

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Golden_dragoon

I like it, have a meme.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Lucien_Daybreak

A new book!!!!!!!!!!!! Auto 5* !!!!!!!!!!

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Zaelum

Again, nice fanfic! I would love if this fanfic has Yokai elements on it. Kanokon, Tsugumomo, Monogatari Series, there is a lot you can milk. And please no other worlds!! The other fanfic is MORE than enought. Anyway, good job.

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MASTER

Honestly, I really enjoyed your novel, "Start by Becoming a Mangaka," with the songs you referenced and the scenarios you created. However, most of your other novels seemed to be of somewhat lower quality in comparison. I wonder if you'll ever be able to create a novel like that one again; I would be very grateful if you did.