I am that male friend in the harem story

LV 4

venom_hunt_041199

it clearly needs more character development and the plot is reverting to your same old style. it is also so 2013. your story design and romantic ventures are good for bit style play, but completely fails from the propective of story-side novel view. I used to like your stories very much but now I find them going through the same old cliques. girls falling for the fake bravado act of protags and protags screwing friends gf's by some hypocritical moral superiority. and most importantly haircuts does change a person's look but not his personality and others perspective( one of your main cliques, it does help a persons own self-esteem though). also stop trying to make the protag a pariah when he is some loser who got lucky by getting a system and feels like he is losing out by getting a girlfriend. I mean it is harem story but try to develop each character's story so that they won't feel like empty text.

LV 4

WebTalk

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FAP_Master_

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LV 2

vitaminC

over all it’s basic fanfiction where loser dude with past life memories and he don’t know what to do about his new life, so the author gave him a system then telling him to chase one girl or all the heroine, and I’ve no clue why the girls suddenly become so clingy, what’s good from this is the update stability

LV 13

Dr_Chad

First to review deserves more likes I always follow this formula.. Akikan=5*

LV 4

CamlEnvy

I can't say much about the FF since it only has 3 chapters, but it was an interesting start. Now, if the MC follows the path of his last 4/5 FF's, we already know that it will be a shitty read and as we have already been warned that we will have him traveling to other worlds, if he follows the last FF I will change everything to one star. I really like the author Akikan, I read all his stories, but in recent years his writing has been falling a lot, I hope this is the return to cool stories to read and not just about NSFW and an idiotic MC who thinks with D **K. I really like you Akikan, change for the better soon.

LV 4

Garland

If you have ever read any works done by the author then this one is pretty much the same. The mc, the writing and pretty much the whole concept of the story is the same. The MC is always fake and somehow it gains him some girls. Heck, sometimes the whole story completely becomes opposite to what the Title is such as with "Riser Phenex isn't a villain" and "MHA: Living as Mineta is hard". Same old character with the same old story that i don't believe that the author will ever change or improve on. The whole concept of him being the male friend in a harem story would could have been interesting but it is immediately pushed away and turn into the same story. Like really, this gets 5 stars.

LV 4

BrazillianFox

To be honest, it's the same story as the author's other fics,It's kind of annoying that women just throw themselves at MC, not to mention how he keeps saying something like 'I'm a gentleman',he won a reward for conquering a girl, but even if he won and simply lives in this world as Ishigami, no,he literally says he's only going to stay for 10 years and change the world (which isn't mentioned once that he can),To be honest, there have been so many ridiculous things here that it's not worth reading if you have a bit of critical sense.If you search for 10 minutes you will find something in the same style with a much better plot.

LV 2

Naigelton

i kinda lost intrest in the story , im at chapter 33. He got a Girlfreind and he is fixing himself up whats more to read about ? .. i mean i could understand if this was an harem story but it seems its not ? so again whats there to read about ? are we just waiting for the drama thats going to happend when all the girls who are intrested in him gets to know he got a girlfreind and thats it ? a slice of life for 10 years in that world .. its kinda bland honestly.... i mean it already feel like im just reading the after scenes of a finished manga right now there is nothing more to do or to discover in that world or in this scenario ? ... so yeah i gave it a low score cause its just so bland... nothing really happends mc is your typical japanese protoganist .. writing is ok, story itself is going nowhere really and its slow and bland its not really good or bad it just is ...

LV 12

NunuXD

Akikan is not disappoint! A solid 5 Stars! Just hope that he don't turn this novel into a cheating guilty trip like his mineta novel [img=update][img=update]

LV 5

Psan

Akinan new novel eh? Our new protagonist will steal all the girls. The funny part is reading how he does it[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]

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ArdaPendragon

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LV 4

Ireallylikereading

im making this review 5 stars as soon as he goes for kei or chika, preferably kei since theres too much chika without any kei for some reason. kei is a great character filled with potential but people keep ignoring her, heck i have only seen one fanfic where they go for kei and that was indirectly literally just an accidental charm.

LV 3

Student_2730

normal akikan novel the beginning is alright but mc is mid

LV 4

Bob_Uchiha_XD

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LV 2

Sahil_SA

I don't need to think too much and read the story first to rate this book~ why..? Because obviously!! This is Akikan novel!!! 😍5 star from me 🌟

LV 2

Thebestofall

I'm not a big fan of this story to tell the truth... it's still well written. On the other hand, I don't know why I feel that I would love to see a Severus Snape Fic written by this author in Snape days as a teenager and with all the problems that entails, I imagine the SI in this character written by this author and it practically comes to mind a very interesting read🤔🫣👌👍🏽

LV 13

I_Love_Hina

less than 200 power stones? Bro fell off...

LV 13

Kono_Dio_na

i usually enjoy akikan's works. but when the mc doesn't really change from previous works, it will be boring, isn't it? the author just changed the names of the mc, not the actual character. girls will flock without any logical reason. and there's no character development, but downgrade instead.

LV 4

Keist

Hopefully the story is not boring. Character development is really needed to build emotions if this story goes into the drama genre. For now, I will give 5 stars, if it is satisfactory as far as Akikan updates then I will not change this. Umu~