I Am Reborn in the Kingdom: I Will Be the Greatest General

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LordRamcel

this novel gives a different take about the story in which the MC is the leader of shin and piao. story wise and kingdom building wise its pretty decent. right now theres only 13 chapters but it looks promising. I hope this story does not get dropped since most of the kingdom fics in the app theres barely any going past 100 chapters

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Meliodas_Kutlu

To tell the truth I wrote this but if we are to be justified I can say that since I have read more than 500 fan fiction novels this is not enough because I am not a professional I wish If the original author had written that Shin was reborn with a system or just made him both a clever strategist and an instinctive general, I wouldn't have to write this. In the meantime, please experienced writers, please write a nice fanfic kingdom. Have a nice day.

LV 4

kisamecbn

Don’t forget shin is an instinctual type general

It looks good in English, but I think it could be better and longer would be really great. Thanks, my friend I hope you achieve even greater success. (:

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UnenlightenedOne

most of the chapters consist of a training schedule and business plan.some chapter contain same paragraph.it's expanding chicken farm every chapter and that's the half of the chapter.