I will be trying to fix all the mistakes I have put into the story, so yeah hopefully it is better for you and I'm actually working on part two right now and I am close to the middle, so I might actually have enough time to check all of the things and get them all done
note: all right I think I have fixed everything I don't know yet, but anyways, I will not be focusing on the next part so you guys can probably expect it tomorrow maybe and remember I will be consistently giving out new chapters and seeing if I can do better
note: so it will have about 12 episode before we moved into volume 2 a.k.a. season 2 I can't wait for you guys to see how it will end. I think I have it imagined.