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Hello everyone, unfortunately there is an unscrupulous translator FanFictionForge / FanFictionPremium / SpaceMate on Webnovel. He takes other people's fanfiction (which has been written and posted for free for a long time), makes a translation through DeepL, and then pretends to be the author in order to make money on it. Thus, he has already stolen more than 25 fanfictions by different authors. The support of Webnovel takes an incredibly long time to respond, so I decided to post my translation of this fanfiction (DeepL + the small edit).
P.S.: I and other authors with whom I managed to talk are not against translations, but only if the translator indicates the real name of the book, indicates the real author's penname and gives a link to the original fanfiction.
P.P.S.: maybe some people have already noticed that some of FanFictionPremium's collections have been deleted on patreon.com. This is due to the fact that he does not specify the real authors.
P.P.P.S.: This translation is made with the permission of the author.
P.P.P.P.S.: I can completely translate the rest of the fanfics from the FanFictionPremium profile and post them for free on Webnovel, but only if the real authors allow me to do so.
Original name: NewDavid (НьюДэвид)
Author: Amdkorn
Boosty: https://boosty.to/amdkorn-ivanivanych
tl.rulate.ru: https://tl.rulate.ru/book/84159
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Our contemporary reborn into David from the Cyberpunk anime.
How will the story change if he doesn't join the Main team? If he's not going to be a lovesick fool about Lucy? if he meets characters known to us from the game and does not die by the beginning of the game canon?
You will find out the answers to all these questions by reading this fanfiction.
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Thanks for posting this, the other author should feel ashamed for asking money, stones, etc for a barely readable translation and not even crediting the author.
The translation is pretty shit he talks about how it wouldn’t be or if people dropped comments he’d fix it he didn’t do shit tho so idk it’s decent enough you’ll just get pulled out every 2 minutes cause he’s misnaming everything
You're a god, man, seriously! This guy, besides translating the fanfic with errors, basically leaves it hostage to the readers. In addition to the bullshit he does every few chapters, sending fake chapters just asking readers to subscribe to the patreon or donate to him.
I enjoyed a lot of this novel. Especially the beginning. However towards the end things spiral out of control, especially the romantic relationships. Ciri and Saul being in love was so forced and abrupt it was weird (not to mention the huge age gap, difference in interests, goals, and character). Same with Victor and Misty and the MC with V. It just got weird and unnecessary, feeling forced instead of natural. Like making the corporate V talk about being a slut who slept around with her bosses in the first meeting with the MC. It was unnecessary and not something brought up in a first meeting with a stranger. It is also clear that the author wanted readers to feel disgust because some other interactions are handled well. The inter dimensional travel and conflict also was poorly done. Leading me to give up before finishing the very end. Introducing magic to cyberpunk was a dangerous gamble that didn’t pay off in my opinion. However. I will say that while the translation is bad, the story is certainly creative and willing to come up with something new which has a strong appeal to it. I unfortunately feel that some of the major narrative choices were ill conceived, and really hurt the overall story.
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Одно из самых велеколепных произведений по киберпанка, ни разу не пожалел что просит данное произведение, большое спасибо автору за этот шедевр и гамму имоций! Ты просто лучший 👍👍👍
Finally someone calling out the guy. He's doing that for weeks. Thx you for that and the better translation 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍