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I always did need a way outta my life. It was too boring anyway. Just, I never wanted it to be like this. Nothing like this.
Now, I'm a monster... I'm gonna make him pay for that
In a world in which we don't belong,
A battle goes on, two weeks long.
A game of men and demons,
Lives in the balance,
A war wages on,
A mere game to a God.
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The introduction is nice! I just got confused about the description of the character and the surroundings but the plot is clear. I can see what you're trying to show in the first chap! Good job!
The work was great. The prologues happen to be interesting than I thought. The use of words was awesome and the book has great potential, Keep writing I'm sure you would be an awesome author! [img=update]
It had me confused about what to feel... first it was warm and then the next it was depressing... your way with words did a roller coaster to my mind. I also find the starting prologues to be interesting and it keeps me in wonder what more if the story begins in the next chapters. Thanks and Good luck author 🤗
Quite one of a book, I thought it was sad, to me. And not because of the story, but because of the writing. The author gives a very sad and dark tone to the story, which makes me think it was sad. The feeling sad, not the bad one.
From the beginning chapters to the latest chapter had already grabbed my attention. Its background has me hooked. I can not wait to see what he happens next.
From beginning until the latest chapter the book was attention grabbing. The writing style is great, as well... I also love how you make the "author notes" I actually took a look back in the second chapter again 😅😅. I am looking forward to seeing more chapters and seeing where everything goes. Keep it up.
This story is great, I think you have great capability as a writer. I only read the prologue and found no errors. Keep up the good work and I honestly think this book should get more ratings.
Though it's only a prologue but your capacity as a writer is clearly visible❤️ I am sure this will be a potential novel indeed! I liked the start so much! Hope to get more good chapters coming soon 😊 Keep it up❤️❤️
A promising start: you can feel the terror right at the start, and I loved the genre-aware buddy who made sure that the protagonist didn't have an unfortunate encounter with Truck-kun a little too soon!
Okay, this got me interesting from the start but you have your potential as a writer and you have this title impactful! Your story has this kind of confusion and thriller combined with that mystery of love or realism in it. It's really good actually! I have only one suggestion to keep the readers immense to your story. That is to give them a brief overview of what the novel is about. Your synopsis is kinda like a quote from the MC or a villain. Write two sentences with a wonderful premise in it so that it may click the readers in. I also write in that way back then, but I am saying this what I have learned. (Please, don't hate me). Lovelots, author!
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