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HOTD/ASOIAF: Unbowed Unbent Unbroken
4.21 (45 ratings)
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Saera Targaryen escapes from Old town but instead of traveling to Lys to become a queen of whores she travels to Sunspear to become a different kind of 'queen'.
Daeron Nymeros Martell is our MC as we approach the Dance with dragons. The Heir to Sunspear and the next prince of Dorne who carries the 'cursed blood of the dragons' according to his fellow Dornish.
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It's in the tags but the MC is a Reincarnator
The MC will be strong and borderline to OP for this world and that is just how it will be.
3 planned love interests but might go to 4, no more than that and it is considering how people feel about the situation
Death, expect a lot of death once things start rolling
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For those who don't know, this fanfic will have yuri around chapter 70~80. As the author did the great favor of NOT warning something so simple I'm doing it.
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since it's Pretending Author fanfic be sure that you are going to enjoy reading each chapters with out a doubt and if you haven't read his work go check them out am positive you would love it if you are Game Of Thrones fan
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Well written but its very very very slow. 40 chaps in and the story has barely moved 2 weeks. dropped it.
Another Asoiaf story from this author that I like so much. I'm kind of scared because of the tragedy tag… but let's go. (Google translator)
The story is amazing so far I really hope he pulls a avatar The last Airbender and freezes himself and his dragon until the events of game of thrones that way we get to have fun in both time periods. 😎🙏
Great story, needs a beta though. A lot of run-on sentences. Some of them seem to be on purpose to inflate word count possibly. I could be wrong, if so apologies. Sometimes their is a case of over explaining. Ch 8, when Rhaenyra, Aemma, and Saera are talking about Daella and their childhoods Minor nitpick on my behalf. But saying kids, mom, and dad breaks my suspension of disbelief. Instead of mother, father and children/child. The first read I enjoyed it enough to gloss over it, which tends to happen. The second read I couldn't help but notice. Other than that great story
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at the same time, don't get me wrong, but all children taking science and chemistry classes at the first school can produce (glass,soap,drinks,perfume,paint) if you can't find plants for paint, shouldn't it be difficult to make ink and paper or a pencil ? it can be produced and grown in the greenhouse (coffee, tea, spices, silk, fruit, tobacco, poison,)
I am posting this review after reading 102 chapters, which is the latest chapter now.In all the above aspects, the story deserves a 5 star. The writing quality is so rigorous and stable that i can feel the pain the author has to go thru to weave this level of story.The story itself is sweet and mushy along with steady kingdom building. Not too much water bending prowess thrown around that messes with the story development. Filled with interaction between a loving husband and a sweet wife that are crown princess and a prince.Its a suggestion on my part, the author can ignore if he feels its not suitable. I think it would feel way more dramatic and enjoyable if there are snippets of povs from the current timeline (from 270 AC to later). I know its difficult since you have to take extreme care to match it with the fanfic history. But i think it would be pretty enjoyable, watching the butterfly effect in real time and how the famous characters act and revere the old queen and the hand of the king.
it's a lighthearted story interspersed with lighthearted genocide of the dothraki, but fear not - it only enhances your mood and the read. humorous writing with likeable characters (can be a few too many to keep track of if you're not binge-reading the story) Arguably gets plot slowed down at points with domestic fluff. On the other hand, those scenes are appreciated by many as well. And helps establish the personality of these characters. Always love to catch up on new updates on author's Daenerys/SI and SI/Rhaenyra stories. Great reads that I'd like to see more of.
The story has an interesting idea, but please explain to me why spoil it with stupid magic and Deus ex machina ??? The author, do you really not have a normal Fantasy or are you just writing trash stories?
Pretty great Fanfic not to world breaking or crack-ish story its a little slow-paced but overall is excellent nothing worth complaining about. 7/10 would recommend if i actually let anybody know i read fanfic 😅
Give it a read. MC is a cool guy, his family is nice and the story is just peak. It is definitely worth your time. If Pretending_Author made a P***eon, I would pay.
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A nice concept but unfortunately I didn't quite like the execution so I dropped it at chapter 3. It might have gotten better later on but I wouldn't know.
compare to the last tow novels this one is bland and have no taste at all IDK why. is it because the MC in this novel is not targaryen...... ?
What more can I say, it’s pretending Author, no jon snow fics, all oc’s, solid plot. It’s always a banger.