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come on man why the hell would stop writing chapter .... the story is really good
The idea is good. However, the writing quality needs to be improved. I am getting an aneurysm from trying to read the broken English.
This was a great Hogwarts fanfic and I really liked reading this as the story progressed it got better in my opinion I only hate how there's no more chapters.
This story has some issue around chapter 1 to 20 and around that area it begining get hard to read thing I have problems with why is he in slytherin if if he no friend in slytherin or he should just Hufflepuff or any other house
Please Upload all the chapters, its already completed novel. ..........,..,.,..,.,.,.,.,,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,...,.,.,.,,.,.,.,...,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,...,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..
this was very creative at the beginning but it becomes drag as it goes on... it's like author is finding reason as to not to let voldemort die.
plot storyline concept all good!!! if you can self edit and have read translated Chinese novels needs native editor.
Painful to read. Translation and grammar are uncomfortable at best. High potential novel with an unfortunate poor quality start.
I have read this story already and I will read it again start of 1st year chapter 8 2nd year chapter 134 3rd year chapter 157 4th year chapter 252 5th year chapter 301 6th year chapter 358 7th year chapter 425 Professor year 1 chapter 462 Professor year 2 chapter 613
Great Book, Would Recommend, Thank u for witing this. When will u update?
I think this novel is pretty good, but it is so poorly translated that it is practically unreadable
The story is good, but the writing is awful. The translation is not correct, it must have come from Google Translate.
I read I read the whole thing. After 10 chaps my mind just go silent mode...then as the chaps progress it just remained without emotions. Not to exaggerate but the ff is idk time consuming if u ask. Worth to read...No. Bing chilling is intense in this one. If you have already mind-bonked by MTL ffs then Congo ..I welcome to hell. If not then newbies stay away. The MC is typical bing-chilling protagonist. He would go jade beauty and stuff. People may go pretty boi and stuff on him. Sometimes I even qstion my sanity well whatever. Many grammatical errors. Low translation quality. If you are brave enough...you can read it few chaps..then leave it. And if you think it's interesting then...I have a doctors number I can share it you. Overall experience: Ok, One time read is applicable. Ps. A quick remainder. Not forcing anyone to read this but try it yourself some few chaps. Not like it, then leave it. Cause your own experience is what matters. Still be warned. Hope you guys have wonderful day👍
I knew it was gonna be bad but when i read the first chapter and seen the "Harry Potter what bad things have you done" i died... Good luck to anyone trying to read it.
Here is the hack that allows me translate this mtl into readable thing in chatGPT. Here are the updated 7 rules of conversion according to the Harry Potter theme (7ROCAHPT): 1. Translate the text from its original language to English and check for any grammatical mistakes. Ensure that the sentences make sense and are in tune with the Harry Potter world. 2. Increase the word count by additionally 300 words by incorporating Harry Potter-related words and themes. 3. Use theme-related words, such as using "trolls" instead of "giants," to ensure the text is in tune with the Harry Potter world. 4. Increase the number of paragraphs, if possible, to make the text more readable and engaging. 5. Change the sentence structure to be in tune with the Harry Potter world theme. 6. Add additional details wherever possible to make emotions and interactions more in tune with the Harry Potter world. 7. Do not omit or delete any kind of information before or after the conversion. .
where can I find the RAWS? I feel like chatgpt will do a better job translating this
Can't really say anything about the world's background as it is based off of Harry Potter and hadn't changed anything about it. One complaint I have to make bloody clear, please fix the fanfic before posting it, it is hard to see what is someone speaking and who is speaking and what someone is doing if you don't properly "" the text.
One might think that this Chinese translation is bad but surprisingly not. Of course it's a lot of mistakes and the story has a lot of mistakes, but if you ignore it, you find that the story holds up, does not have racism and respects as much as possible the original work. The MC is Op but gradually. Although at some point it raised my eyebrow( it can happen to the author to contradict himself) it's pretty acceptable
The story is great and even if it is a Chinese web novel it still is a good fan fiction. The biggest problem of this novel is the translation of the names, it s*cks. You can read it although it is not easy, but the story itself is good.
first stop I love your book we don't get a lot of times where the person doesn't have has magic and then they gain it I will say this I am hoping you make him a gay character we don't get a lot of LGBT fanfiction especially on here most the time the characters are straight and everything I think it'd be really cool for that also I love your writing style also I think it would be really cool for you to make him regard Dumbledore with caution but also that's up to you I will say this I love your book and I will continue reading it hopefully you do not discontinue it there's been a lot of good Fanfictions on here we're either it's a descendant of Grindelwald or it's a serious black type thing so I'm really hoping that you continue love your story think it's really beautiful
It was so much fun, it was easy to understand, I really enjoyed it, I'll be waiting for the next episode. There's nothing else to write about except that this is really good.
come on man why the hell would stop writing chapter .... the story is really good
The idea is good. However, the writing quality needs to be improved. I am getting an aneurysm from trying to read the broken English.
This was a great Hogwarts fanfic and I really liked reading this as the story progressed it got better in my opinion I only hate how there's no more chapters.
This story has some issue around chapter 1 to 20 and around that area it begining get hard to read thing I have problems with why is he in slytherin if if he no friend in slytherin or he should just Hufflepuff or any other house
Please Upload all the chapters, its already completed novel. ..........,..,.,..,.,.,.,.,,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,...,.,.,.,,.,.,.,...,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,...,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..
this was very creative at the beginning but it becomes drag as it goes on... it's like author is finding reason as to not to let voldemort die.
plot storyline concept all good!!! if you can self edit and have read translated Chinese novels needs native editor.
Painful to read. Translation and grammar are uncomfortable at best. High potential novel with an unfortunate poor quality start.
I have read this story already and I will read it again start of 1st year chapter 8 2nd year chapter 134 3rd year chapter 157 4th year chapter 252 5th year chapter 301 6th year chapter 358 7th year chapter 425 Professor year 1 chapter 462 Professor year 2 chapter 613
Great Book, Would Recommend, Thank u for witing this. When will u update?
I think this novel is pretty good, but it is so poorly translated that it is practically unreadable
The story is good, but the writing is awful. The translation is not correct, it must have come from Google Translate.
I read I read the whole thing. After 10 chaps my mind just go silent mode...then as the chaps progress it just remained without emotions. Not to exaggerate but the ff is idk time consuming if u ask. Worth to read...No. Bing chilling is intense in this one. If you have already mind-bonked by MTL ffs then Congo ..I welcome to hell. If not then newbies stay away. The MC is typical bing-chilling protagonist. He would go jade beauty and stuff. People may go pretty boi and stuff on him. Sometimes I even qstion my sanity well whatever. Many grammatical errors. Low translation quality. If you are brave enough...you can read it few chaps..then leave it. And if you think it's interesting then...I have a doctors number I can share it you. Overall experience: Ok, One time read is applicable. Ps. A quick remainder. Not forcing anyone to read this but try it yourself some few chaps. Not like it, then leave it. Cause your own experience is what matters. Still be warned. Hope you guys have wonderful day👍
I knew it was gonna be bad but when i read the first chapter and seen the "Harry Potter what bad things have you done" i died... Good luck to anyone trying to read it.
Here is the hack that allows me translate this mtl into readable thing in chatGPT. Here are the updated 7 rules of conversion according to the Harry Potter theme (7ROCAHPT): 1. Translate the text from its original language to English and check for any grammatical mistakes. Ensure that the sentences make sense and are in tune with the Harry Potter world. 2. Increase the word count by additionally 300 words by incorporating Harry Potter-related words and themes. 3. Use theme-related words, such as using "trolls" instead of "giants," to ensure the text is in tune with the Harry Potter world. 4. Increase the number of paragraphs, if possible, to make the text more readable and engaging. 5. Change the sentence structure to be in tune with the Harry Potter world theme. 6. Add additional details wherever possible to make emotions and interactions more in tune with the Harry Potter world. 7. Do not omit or delete any kind of information before or after the conversion. .
where can I find the RAWS? I feel like chatgpt will do a better job translating this
Can't really say anything about the world's background as it is based off of Harry Potter and hadn't changed anything about it. One complaint I have to make bloody clear, please fix the fanfic before posting it, it is hard to see what is someone speaking and who is speaking and what someone is doing if you don't properly "" the text.
One might think that this Chinese translation is bad but surprisingly not. Of course it's a lot of mistakes and the story has a lot of mistakes, but if you ignore it, you find that the story holds up, does not have racism and respects as much as possible the original work. The MC is Op but gradually. Although at some point it raised my eyebrow( it can happen to the author to contradict himself) it's pretty acceptable
The story is great and even if it is a Chinese web novel it still is a good fan fiction. The biggest problem of this novel is the translation of the names, it s*cks. You can read it although it is not easy, but the story itself is good.
first stop I love your book we don't get a lot of times where the person doesn't have has magic and then they gain it I will say this I am hoping you make him a gay character we don't get a lot of LGBT fanfiction especially on here most the time the characters are straight and everything I think it'd be really cool for that also I love your writing style also I think it would be really cool for you to make him regard Dumbledore with caution but also that's up to you I will say this I love your book and I will continue reading it hopefully you do not discontinue it there's been a lot of good Fanfictions on here we're either it's a descendant of Grindelwald or it's a serious black type thing so I'm really hoping that you continue love your story think it's really beautiful
It was so much fun, it was easy to understand, I really enjoyed it, I'll be waiting for the next episode. There's nothing else to write about except that this is really good.