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He was reach, handsome and most importantly, a successful businessman at the young age of twenty-three. The success didn't make him a good person, He was Spoiled and egoist who was habitual of naming the price for everything.
She was a sweet, simple, well-mannered and righteous person who was always ready to lend a helping hand.
She wasn't any well-known successful figure but she had what it takes to be successful, a strong willpower.
One day he crossed the boundary she had made, and as expected of the righteous heroine– she welcomed him with a tight slap.
Then comes the Ego!
how dare she!
He plotted the Revenge!
He faked to be in love with her, married her, slept with her and the final touch– he divorced her!
But he did one mistake- in the process of faking to be in love, he was not supposed to actually fall for her.
When she was finally gone from his life, he realized his own feelings. He realized how he was used to of her loving gaze, the warmth in her smile and her care for him.
But it was too late. She was gone from his life without leaving any traces.
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Six years later she was back, but she wasn't the same sweet and simple girl anymore, She was the cold-blooded CEO!
His ex wife was now a ruthless queen of business world.
Now she had only one principle in her life "Betray me and I'll destroy you"
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Meeting her for the second time was like a chance to survival for him but she being completely changed, it surely wasn't going to be any simple journey.
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Accompany me in the journey of Lucy Carl and Li Xuan's love and hate relationship.
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What a hidden gem we got here 💕. I enjoy stories with well-executed female leads with strong personalities and this novel have this. Review Proper after reading the latest chapter release, chapter 13. Writing Quality. The narratives are simple and easy to read. The author knows how to use the right to make some scene pact more with emotions. Though there are a few g-errors and some tense mix-ups. You could use Grammarly to help you with polishing your story more. Stability of Updates. Though many would say to update immediately, I prefer quality over quantity. Take your time honing each of your chapters. Story Development. I love the start. We could see how the author emphasizes the ML as being a jerk to our FL. But as the story progresses we could see how the two are growing and developing. Though there is nothing yet that mentions why they divorced. I look forward to knowing that since that would depend if the Male Lead deserves Lucy's forgiveness. Character Design. Story-wise. The characters were greatly portrayed as well especially Lucy. I love her strong persona. And I hope her pain would be healed. She deserves to be happy whatever happened to her. The Male lead, well, my impression of him is still not that build up. He was sorry for the female lead. Yes. He changes. Yes. But I hope this would be more justified as the story progressed. As for the supporting characters, they were already great with distinct characters. Somewhat I am rooting for Lucy and Krish hahaha I don't know why is that 😅. World Background. Well explained. Even it is in a modern CEO set-up there are a lot of things to look out for and fleshed out. Overall after I read so many CEO-type stories, I got fed up with the generic trope with the usual set-up of the ml CEO always been the domineering one. But in this novel that is not the case. Our female lead Lucy is a strong one and I enjoy her attitude a lot. Recommendation? Definitely read this if you're looking for refreshing CEO stories. And I know you would enjoy this. Keep up the great work, author! Added this to my library.
Let me just say that this genre is right up my alley in terms of what I like to read! I can see myself continuing with this one as I love dramatic romance stories! Here are my notes after reading all 15 available chapters: ~I think it would help to check punctuation! Right in the first chapter, I noticed a run-on sentence and an introductory clause without proper punctuation. Specifically, looking at dialogue punctuation would also polish the story more. On the topic of conventions, try to keep your verb tenses consistent, and check capitalization! I can add some comments on the early chapters if you'd like, though I think a lot of these errors would be caught if you quickly ran the draft through a grammar app before publishing. ~I found the opening engaging because you started with dialogue. Great job on capturing my attention right off the bat! (Plus, who doesn't love what's essentially a good enemies-to-lovers set-up?) I do wonder if the plot would have worked better if it started while they were married instead of when they first met...? It seems like those details should have come later, but they also work in the sense of setting up the couple's conflict. It's just jarring to jump from the very beginning to the end of their relationship, though I like how the early parts of their relationship are interspersed throughout the main narrative in later chapters. ~While I really enjoy the description you have, I think your story could benefit from some more! On my computer, almost all the paragraphs are two lines. Alternatively, I think you can combine some of these small paragraphs. Plenty of these sections have similar content to the ones around them. ~I like how the FL isn't unnecessarily mean but sticks up for herself! Great characterization! (She almost reminds me of lakorn characters, and I really like that vibe from her.) At times, she's rather harsh, but it seems as if she was hurt to the point of becoming that way when she corrects/contradicts herself. Originally, I wanted to know more about her emotions, but from chapter 7 onward, I think you do a good job establishing another side to her character (with wonderful descriptions as well). ~I do feel like the ML is weaker next to her. With fewer scenes than Lucy, Li Xuan's cold personality feels less distinct; however, I do think you're on the right track as far as his character development goes. I like seeing how he's the one chasing after his ex-wife rather than the other way around, and I think that's a good way to enhance the plot. ~I also always enjoy seeing the apathy versus hatred idea utilized! I think it helps to develop Li Xuan's feelings toward his ex-wife and vice-versa. ~Lucy's interactions with her niece are lovely! I'm glad you treat Omisha like another character and not the token child who barely talks. In chapter 3, though, I think having two of Lucy's scenes right next to each other is unnecessary (the ones about the shower and eating). While I'm not the best about taking out unnecessary scenes, ask yourself: Does this scene have any relevance to the plot, or does it confuse the main goal? The food scene is good about highlighting the cultural differences, but the scene before is confusing with the shifting perspectives. ~I also love her interactions with Krish and his personality in general! He seems like a fun person. Their banter has some wonderfully humorous lines, which are among the best in the story. ~On top of the other bullet point, I'd also caution you about all the POV shifts within some chapters. They are okay in moderation, but if they switch every few paragraphs, consider if the scene is necessary or can be fleshed out more to create a smoother narrative. ~I mentioned lakorns earlier, but it's ironic how a lot of the story feels like it's based on a television show. (I promise this isn't necessarily a bad thing!) Alongside the short POV shifts, this is especially obvious with the occasional recaps at the beginnings of chapters. It might help to remove these bits. Most readers will probably binge-read chapters like I did and will remember a sentence from right before the end of the previous chapter. (There's no harm in leaving them, though, if that's the intended effect.) ~This is probably going to be my most random comment. I'm not sure if you're aware of this, but while "Moonshine" is theoretically a pretty word, I've always known it to refer to alcohol (usually illegal liquor)! It feels odd being the name of the school. (This is an extremely minor critique, but I thought you might like to know! I've made similar mistakes as well when it comes to certain slang.) ~I found myself taking fewer notes as I read more, so I'd say the flow of the story got better as it went on! Apologies if I wrote too much! This is the genre I'm most familiar with. I look forward to seeing where the story goes, and wonderful job so far! :)
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Well Written!! The way the writer balanced the story with past and present is excellent. The environment and character's emotions are well described. The plot was well-paced and it does keeps you on hook to know more about the couple's past story.
Thank you so much dear author for a very awesome and neatly written piece of entertainment. Please don't forget to update more chapters because I have been eagerly waiting for more updates.
This is amazing, intresting, fantastic, fabulous, fantabulous and awesome story! I have been a big fan of your writing skills since I had a look of the synopsis of your novel. Thank u so much for writing such an interesting novel and inspiring us in so many ways.
This is a wonderful easy read. It's a nice plot where the MCs have role reversal this time. It's utterly cute to read a book where the sweet heroine had gone ice-cold while the cold arrogant CEO thawed his personality to win back the love of his life. Good writing. Some editing needed. Smooth flow. Well described characters. I'm enjoying this and can't wait to finish the book. I want to see how icy Lucy melts under Li Xuan's redemption attempt of owning love this time.
Hello there, So, I might be late for the review but let me tell you, I really enjoyed this story. It felt as if I was watching some Chinese Drama. The strong female lead is just my favourite and then comes our male lead who had great character development throughout the series. From a jerk to a gentleman.👏 Absolutely love it. And the secretary of the FL is so funny and relatable, as well as Krish ( I hope I am writing the right name)when he first appeared I thought he might be a jerk but turns out he is her Best friend. And the cute baby we have here is just so sweet and angel-like, that I just want to protect her!!🤧 As for the writing quality, It was great, I didn't have any problem thought the read. As for the update, I think looking at the quality of the book, updating in 2 days is a wise thing. The world background, was all in China so it was all easy to imagine. The story plot was a common one, an arrogant lead who turns soft for the FL, and the soft FL becomes cold. (I have read 100 of comics like this and I live in India so, the dramas here are mostly in this themes,) but still, your story stands out of all. And yeah I have this in my collection, so I will be waiting for more updates!!! So now the last but not least, Good work Author!! May you get success soon!
Amazing book!! Arrogant Ml and strong Fl. interesting I love Lucy strength and her love for the child. well written with every chapter I crave to know more about their past life. I really recommend this book!
At first you have the must increasable synopses I have ever read in Webnovel, that kind that turn me on to read the whole story. I love the turning point of the main character and being "cold blood". it is a very different start for CEO novel. If your kind of stories (love- hate in relationship) that novel well be you masterpiece. I am looking for more chapters. great book Highly recommended.
A well-written book. the book has all the elements of a good book. I love it and can't wait for more chapters. Best of luck to my fellow dear ARMY author 💜 I am collecting this for my library 👀
To everyone, you'll be sold from the descriptive words the author wrote. And to girls who like this type of genre, you'll be hooked. It's great for the author to be able to say descriptive words. It's hard to do that but the author did so great! : ))))
The synopsis got me right away! I'm not a fan of arrogant ML but I really like how Li Xuan changed for the better😁 The story is so beautiful and I can't wait to see how it will progress! Though they have such a painful and shameful past, I wish them a happy ending as it seems like they still love each other truly😇 Will surely follow up this story!
Great work author, this book is amazing and I love it a lot. I can gladly recommend it to my friends. amazing work dear and keep it up.❤️❤️❤️
It's just the start so I see no much character development in the ML while the FL- I have no words, just that I'm a fan! I have enjoyed reading so far and this book goes directly to my library[img=recommend]
An absolute breath of fresh air in an oversaturated genre.You've got to try this banger of an masterpiece. P.S good job on selecting a nice cover
Okay, I am the first one to drop the review for this awesome book, Yay!! Dear author, I'm loving this book of yours and I'm pretty sure there are other people who love your creation just as much as i do. So, keep going. My best wishes!