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HIS ENCHANTED LOVER

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Author: zigginah

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At twenty years old she had thought that now her life had just begun.

Her childhood had been everything but good. It could have been worse but she couldn't complain about it. What was she supposed to do?

The moment her life began other things arose and she had no clue whatsoever on what to believe. Her life had been a lie all along and no matter how much she tried to make sense of who she was she couldn't.

She was lost at sea with all the kids she had been told. She did not know who to believe anymore.

She never knew that she had as much power as she had or that people were going to see her as a threat.

All she over wanted was to be somewhere that she belonged but the more that she knew people the more she realized that she did not belong anywhere.

Could she blame them for hating her though?

She did not choose to be who she was and there was nothing she could do about it.

As she turned into her wolf form she saw a figure approaching her and she was ready to pounce until she smelled his scent.

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trumpet_creeper01

Its absolutely good. The first person pov is well written and didn't feel awkward later on. Did a good job on conveying the depression, self-doubt and anxiety of FL. The story has so much potential. I'd like to read future chapters.

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Mel_Aniv

The first-person narration is smooth like butter. I can flow in the wind by just reading it. Story quality is gold and there's still much to offer. All in all, a good read for me [img=recommend] The pacing is fine and the grammar is readable. Kudos for a job well done [img=update]

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Dentist1

it is a well made but rookie book,story is good,characters are also good but I think there are some where you can change words and review for another time.

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Mercy_Godwin76

It's refreshing to see good writing on this platform. Your story is effortlessly wonderful and unique in it own way and how it progresses is just so smooth.

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Eva_Smith_0875

I love werewolf stories, especially Alpha's stories. I am a big fan of your story no doubt. I like your story too much because your story has a strong plot.

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Miss_Asriya

The plot is great, and the writing style is amazing. Author write this in a way that readers will not be confused and that is a plus! Still need an editing at the grammar parts tho. But overall, if you like fantasy romance novels, this is highly recommended. Great job author, keep it up! Waiting for more chapters.

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SpicyChickenWriter

The author does really well writing the FL's depression and anxiety. Also, there's really good character design and l felt bad that the FL had such a bad relationship with her mom. Usually l don't read these kinds of werewolf books primarily because of cliches and terrible writing but this book is different. I can confidently say that l will definitely be reading this more and everyone else should too!

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Aescwine

Usually, I don't read novels with female leads but this one piqued my interest. I am looking forward to how this story unfolds. Best of luck for the future, author! This one has potential.

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Scientist_113

Love the novel. The author's choice of words are perfect. Update is regular. You should check out the book. Truly perfect. This is a masterpiece in the making.

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Victor_Muya

I really loved it and enjoyed it each and every chapter kept on begging me for more. And the most interesting thing about it it's that it actually relates with the real world

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Missy_Castillo

Not into werewolf's kind of stories but will definitely give this book a chance. I actually love the minimal depressing tone of the story although I get confused sometimes with some of the sentences but its manageable. You can use online free grammar checking tools to help you with the minimal grammar mistakes, this is the advice I get from a co-webnovel author I chatted with online. Keep it up!

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DaoistNotAvilable

The inner conflicts and dilemma of the character is well portrayed. I like the dark tone of your writing, it is quite different. The story is developing well and has a lot of potential. Good job :)

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So, I think reviews only show the number of stars, not the decimals, I just want to preface this with the true rating I gave: 3.8. Very close to 4.0. If you enjoy romance novels with "bedroom scenes", then you should definitely check this novel out. I won't spoil anything but will say that you won't have to wait for hundreds of chapters like some books. I tend to like romance books without that, but if the story is good enough (and this one seems like it will have a great plot), I will read it anyway. For the most part, this book is easy to read. The chapters seem a little disjointed, causing me to be confused at times. In example, I thought the first chapter was a dream because of some statements in the second, but that is not the case. Grammatical errors aren't too bad, but they do make it more difficult to understand sometimes. I do love the author's tone. The FL is interesting and different. I can appreciate that, but I'm not sure she's all that likeable. At least, not yet. Maybe there's development on the way. Her personality makes for some interesting drama!

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Mugi_Nicholas

Srltory is amzing. The characters and the ployltbis amazingm Will add it to my library and will be waiting for updates from you. Will definitely recommend

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Surbhi_mithil

The writing style of the author is a little bit off and the rest of the story is awesome, I can author has potential. Keep it up author Recommended for others :)

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Dissociation

Not a bad story, staying away from regular cliches or pulling them off well. Characters are developing smoothly and the story seems to have a thought out path. It needs an editor or a proof read though, seen some errors, things that don't read well, and some random tense changing in a few spots. Other than that, worth a read if you like Love-Triangle type stories!

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_Shantel

Am loving the story so far. So curious to know what secret they are hiding from her. Will it ruin things with Enzo ,am so curious hoping for another update today. Amazing art. I love the new characters that you have introduced

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Nyamao

Amazing book writer. The story is well crafted ,it's a unique idea. The characters are well constructed and I love the way you have elaborated their behaviours. Keira is my favourite . The story is amazing overall,few mistakes work on them . Adding it to my library. Would love to read more of your work.

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0Mashroom

in all the story is kind intresting out from the cliché stories that i have read with this kind of setting, the writing needs some work gotta have to fix those gramar of yours, usage of past tense or present tense it is also the same mistake i made long when writing, the chapters are kind of short to day the least.

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YARI_RGOKY

Different kind of novel not the cliche werewolf storylines,structured novel,characters done to perfection.Updates steady all in all a masterpiece one not to be missed.

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