It seems to be a good story... there are many questions in my mind.. hope that you can develop something woooooow.. try to describe the character more details.. the back ground of the girls especially..why is she getting so aggressive.. only a ****** thing changes her personality..
It seems to be a good story... there are many questions in my mind.. hope that you can develop something woooooow.. try to describe the character more details.. the back ground of the girls especially..why is she getting so aggressive.. only a ****** thing changes her personality..