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LoveJoy

Great! Great! I love how they all felt alive. it's just a pity that you can not explore the filial part of life in this novel as the tag of 'Thrown Bastard' remained it his head and he can not get over it. I just also suggest to make the dialogue more proper it's hard to read it when you don't know where to suddenly stop and you need to read couple back to make some sense to it. Good Job! Thank you! Don't Drop it!

3yr
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blobbombs

this is a great novel. the MC is not an idiot who follows harry around. the plot is great and the MC character is something I've been waiting for, for a very long time. it's also kinda fast paced which is very cool. the only problem is the grammer which is also being fixed with updates on the previous chapters. so I'd say if ur looking for a harry potter fanfic where the MC is smart and not suicidal read this.

3yr
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Desivery

I have read lots of Harry Potter Fanfic, and I think for one that this is good, mostly because of the honesty of the characters and their genuity. The MC has a lot of potential but also a lot of character, problem. But that's the point, he's not perfect but he is an interesting character. I love your Hermione and Walburga. Thank you for those wonderful characters that. This is an incredibly interesting book. I think you should try this if you haven't yet.

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Daniel_Sciacco

Me encantó la historia. Casi todo está muy bien desarrollado e implementado: el desarrollo de los personajes, en contexto mundial, la personalidad del MC, el desarrollo de su poder, etc. Lo único que se podría haber mejorado es el desarrollo del romance, se sentía muy frio, a falta de una mejor palabra, prácticamente no había ninguna calidez en la forma en que los dos hablaban y se relacionaban. Abrazos, besos, eso si, pero le faltó mas emoción, era todo demasiado apagado desde mi punto de vista. La forma en que le pidió ir al baile se sintió totalmente fuera de lugar y de personaje.

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Zero_Rhyme

Это перевод русского фанфика "Шаг Первый. Новый мир". Почему тут не отмечено, что это перевод? Если он украл, то мог бы хотя бы придумать что-нибудь оригинальное, в не тупо оставить и описание, и заголовок такими же. Штальвольф(который он якобы написал) тоже является переводом, но уже другого автора

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GhostDost

Author is definitely Chinese, it's a good story but with poor grammar, the frequent mentioning of disciples instead of students, the heavy Chinese philosophy to guide a little girl like harmaione, author's obsession with harmaione, Neglect of age and year of students, One good thing is author is not flexing about future. Overall a good passtime novel.

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Kumatsume

The mc is a moron, he repeatedly makes mistakes and doesn’t learn from them, he will constantly just do something that makes the reader want to face palm because you can see how it’s going to turn out but the mc doesn’t. Also he has two golden fingers but doesn’t really practice them and rarely uses them.

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DREIMON

Maravillosa historia, está historia me mantuvo muy apegado, me encantó e desarrollado pero senti que e final es algo inadecuado, quizás el echo de que me alla acostumbrado a un final satisfactorio influye en mi opinión En fin, gracias por culminar esta obra

2mth
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ckwendel

4 star review. 4 star review. 4 star review.

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Ayushi_Ather

The story is godd but the English is not that great 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

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pEmKayS
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The book is good. But the characters lack depth. The story sometimes feels bland and unpolished.I recommend reading it if you don't have anything more interesting.

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KingGeorgeUK

A true masterpiece you manged to go so into the theory of Magic and tried to explain it in a scientific and plausible way as well as making it seem magic is more complex than is given in the novels and films

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1Just_Reader

Я доволен , всё было круто и чётинько. Побольше бы таких работ )

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OCspeller

Based on the World of Magic by J.K. Rowling, this fanfic has altered the character and events of the Canon to a very intruiging end. Who would have thought of Hermione as a Healer? Although I am curious what happens to Max once he releases control of his Occlumancy.

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AJ_C
LV 1 Badge

I like the concept of not being involved in the "adventures" with Harry Potter and training and gaining knowledge i would have done the same if I were there but the author forgot that this is fanfic and I am not here to see the MC training. the only thing aside from training that happened is that he killed the Basilisk because he was mind controlled and participated in the goblet of fire because of an idiotic reason like 'fame'.and there is Hermione, who MC says is as powerful as him but is never involved in the plot other than training, she is there just to show that there is an fl who is smart and powerful to go forward with mc.and I am at chapter 227.

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Weston_Evelyn_1998

Was a very good Harry Potter world, this is because it has a main character that focuses on the wold power system aka magic and the different aspects that you don’t see or hear about In the original book or other fan fic. It also doesn’t get raped up in all the relationships and getting all the girls like in others as well. Worth the read although it seems to end abruptly.

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Mandy_Bandy

I feel the story is a bit unfinished for Max and Hermione.

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Shakuni

at start he simp too much on his biological mother that it feel sick 🤢 to read // English is not my first neither second language

6mth
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Tab19
LV 4 Badge

I’m giving this a four, it’s a good novel all things considered, a good read and would recommend it. The first dozens chapters are painful to read and a bit broken but the english becomes much better after those. But I must also say that it is deeply flawed, that it left me with a bitter taste. Many things are left unanswered and or untouched and if I can give this a 4/5 is only because a proper execution would have been a 10/5. The end felt rushed to me, I could make a list of a dozen things I want to know and see happen that have been promised or intended since the very beginning but never happened. The same is true for romance, family relations and socialization in general, swinging from an extreme to the other as if the author didn’t have the courage to go through and commit As I write this I’m wanting to bring the score down to a zero, to say that it sucks, that I wasted my time reading this trash, but the truth is that as bad as it is it still fully deserves a 4 and anything less would be lying

6mth
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YoDarki

se vuelve denso pero es bueno para pasar el tiempo

8mth
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Odyessy91

loved the story thank you for writing it

8mth
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tgygby

amazing. I have no words. the world is well thought out and adds a nice twist to the story

8mth
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lehos_so

A realy taking novel, loved it... leting is craving for more !

9mth
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Nomnom_
LV 13 Badge

A good pot with a strong lead. I like how HPMan used Occlumens to have a cold MC. it's also nice that the romance section wasn't forced.

9mth
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Nour_eldine

A wonderful novel [img=update][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry]

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Kernia

[img=recommend]I liked everything, thank you very much to the author. Inspiration to you. I wish you to write more interesting stories. More health. Desires to write. May all your wishes come true.

9mth
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Sub_Sonicc

Bro wrote up a master piece and decided to dip

9mth
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Kenji_Makoto

Was initially enjoying the story as the characters are quite alive and while the author removes a main character from the trio, he still somewhat understands that he needs to compensate for the missing one to progress the events to its correct flow. However the author has a bad habit of instead of saying one sentence to say whats happening, author proceeds to say an entire paragraph that is often being cryptic or beating around the bush so that makes it extremely annoying

10mth
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omiguh

Can someone tell me when or if the writing improves? I read the first 7 chapters and they were dreadful. I skipped periodically throughout the story and the writing didnt seem to get better even after 200 chapters. I dont want to read too in depth because it would be like spoiling the story. I enjoy the the premise of the story and how the start is laid out but it's like im reading an mtl story and i dont want to put myself through that tbh. Anyway, can someone tell me when the chapters start getting better. Im reading comments about how amazing the writing quality is and just left being flabbergasted since we read different and i only read the mtl version

10mth
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Daniel_Heinrich

i really enjoyed every minute of reading this book.

11mth
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Deathwatch99999

Overall, a great story could have had a better ending, though.

11mth
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Zuzu969
LV 15 Badge

I liked the story a lot. I felt there was some room for other stuff but it all worked out in the end.

11mth
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LimitlessLlamas

Gosh, this book was truly a rollercoaster of storytelling. The ending was amaz8ng and truly captured the essence of the novel! it made me feel content and was truly a masterful ending.

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11mth
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LoveJoy

Great! Great! I love how they all felt alive. it's just a pity that you can not explore the filial part of life in this novel as the tag of 'Thrown Bastard' remained it his head and he can not get over it. I just also suggest to make the dialogue more proper it's hard to read it when you don't know where to suddenly stop and you need to read couple back to make some sense to it. Good Job! Thank you! Don't Drop it!

3yr
View 8 Replies
blobbombs

this is a great novel. the MC is not an idiot who follows harry around. the plot is great and the MC character is something I've been waiting for, for a very long time. it's also kinda fast paced which is very cool. the only problem is the grammer which is also being fixed with updates on the previous chapters. so I'd say if ur looking for a harry potter fanfic where the MC is smart and not suicidal read this.

3yr
View 29 Replies
Desivery

I have read lots of Harry Potter Fanfic, and I think for one that this is good, mostly because of the honesty of the characters and their genuity. The MC has a lot of potential but also a lot of character, problem. But that's the point, he's not perfect but he is an interesting character. I love your Hermione and Walburga. Thank you for those wonderful characters that. This is an incredibly interesting book. I think you should try this if you haven't yet.

3yr
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Daniel_Sciacco

Me encantó la historia. Casi todo está muy bien desarrollado e implementado: el desarrollo de los personajes, en contexto mundial, la personalidad del MC, el desarrollo de su poder, etc. Lo único que se podría haber mejorado es el desarrollo del romance, se sentía muy frio, a falta de una mejor palabra, prácticamente no había ninguna calidez en la forma en que los dos hablaban y se relacionaban. Abrazos, besos, eso si, pero le faltó mas emoción, era todo demasiado apagado desde mi punto de vista. La forma en que le pidió ir al baile se sintió totalmente fuera de lugar y de personaje.

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Zero_Rhyme

Это перевод русского фанфика "Шаг Первый. Новый мир". Почему тут не отмечено, что это перевод? Если он украл, то мог бы хотя бы придумать что-нибудь оригинальное, в не тупо оставить и описание, и заголовок такими же. Штальвольф(который он якобы написал) тоже является переводом, но уже другого автора

7d
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GhostDost

Author is definitely Chinese, it's a good story but with poor grammar, the frequent mentioning of disciples instead of students, the heavy Chinese philosophy to guide a little girl like harmaione, author's obsession with harmaione, Neglect of age and year of students, One good thing is author is not flexing about future. Overall a good passtime novel.

16d
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Kumatsume

The mc is a moron, he repeatedly makes mistakes and doesn’t learn from them, he will constantly just do something that makes the reader want to face palm because you can see how it’s going to turn out but the mc doesn’t. Also he has two golden fingers but doesn’t really practice them and rarely uses them.

1mth
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DREIMON

Maravillosa historia, está historia me mantuvo muy apegado, me encantó e desarrollado pero senti que e final es algo inadecuado, quizás el echo de que me alla acostumbrado a un final satisfactorio influye en mi opinión En fin, gracias por culminar esta obra

2mth
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ckwendel

4 star review. 4 star review. 4 star review.

4mth
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Ayushi_Ather

The story is godd but the English is not that great 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

4mth
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pEmKayS
LV 11 Badge

The book is good. But the characters lack depth. The story sometimes feels bland and unpolished.I recommend reading it if you don't have anything more interesting.

4mth
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KingGeorgeUK

A true masterpiece you manged to go so into the theory of Magic and tried to explain it in a scientific and plausible way as well as making it seem magic is more complex than is given in the novels and films

4mth
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1Just_Reader

Я доволен , всё было круто и чётинько. Побольше бы таких работ )

5mth
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OCspeller

Based on the World of Magic by J.K. Rowling, this fanfic has altered the character and events of the Canon to a very intruiging end. Who would have thought of Hermione as a Healer? Although I am curious what happens to Max once he releases control of his Occlumancy.

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5mth
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AJ_C
LV 1 Badge

I like the concept of not being involved in the "adventures" with Harry Potter and training and gaining knowledge i would have done the same if I were there but the author forgot that this is fanfic and I am not here to see the MC training. the only thing aside from training that happened is that he killed the Basilisk because he was mind controlled and participated in the goblet of fire because of an idiotic reason like 'fame'.and there is Hermione, who MC says is as powerful as him but is never involved in the plot other than training, she is there just to show that there is an fl who is smart and powerful to go forward with mc.and I am at chapter 227.

5mth
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Weston_Evelyn_1998

Was a very good Harry Potter world, this is because it has a main character that focuses on the wold power system aka magic and the different aspects that you don’t see or hear about In the original book or other fan fic. It also doesn’t get raped up in all the relationships and getting all the girls like in others as well. Worth the read although it seems to end abruptly.

5mth
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Mandy_Bandy

I feel the story is a bit unfinished for Max and Hermione.

5mth
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Shakuni

at start he simp too much on his biological mother that it feel sick 🤢 to read // English is not my first neither second language

6mth
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Tab19
LV 4 Badge

I’m giving this a four, it’s a good novel all things considered, a good read and would recommend it. The first dozens chapters are painful to read and a bit broken but the english becomes much better after those. But I must also say that it is deeply flawed, that it left me with a bitter taste. Many things are left unanswered and or untouched and if I can give this a 4/5 is only because a proper execution would have been a 10/5. The end felt rushed to me, I could make a list of a dozen things I want to know and see happen that have been promised or intended since the very beginning but never happened. The same is true for romance, family relations and socialization in general, swinging from an extreme to the other as if the author didn’t have the courage to go through and commit As I write this I’m wanting to bring the score down to a zero, to say that it sucks, that I wasted my time reading this trash, but the truth is that as bad as it is it still fully deserves a 4 and anything less would be lying

6mth
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YoDarki

se vuelve denso pero es bueno para pasar el tiempo

8mth
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Odyessy91

loved the story thank you for writing it

8mth
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tgygby

amazing. I have no words. the world is well thought out and adds a nice twist to the story

8mth
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lehos_so

A realy taking novel, loved it... leting is craving for more !

9mth
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Nomnom_
LV 13 Badge

A good pot with a strong lead. I like how HPMan used Occlumens to have a cold MC. it's also nice that the romance section wasn't forced.

9mth
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Nour_eldine

A wonderful novel [img=update][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry]

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Kernia

[img=recommend]I liked everything, thank you very much to the author. Inspiration to you. I wish you to write more interesting stories. More health. Desires to write. May all your wishes come true.

9mth
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Sub_Sonicc

Bro wrote up a master piece and decided to dip

9mth
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Kenji_Makoto

Was initially enjoying the story as the characters are quite alive and while the author removes a main character from the trio, he still somewhat understands that he needs to compensate for the missing one to progress the events to its correct flow. However the author has a bad habit of instead of saying one sentence to say whats happening, author proceeds to say an entire paragraph that is often being cryptic or beating around the bush so that makes it extremely annoying

10mth
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omiguh

Can someone tell me when or if the writing improves? I read the first 7 chapters and they were dreadful. I skipped periodically throughout the story and the writing didnt seem to get better even after 200 chapters. I dont want to read too in depth because it would be like spoiling the story. I enjoy the the premise of the story and how the start is laid out but it's like im reading an mtl story and i dont want to put myself through that tbh. Anyway, can someone tell me when the chapters start getting better. Im reading comments about how amazing the writing quality is and just left being flabbergasted since we read different and i only read the mtl version

10mth
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Daniel_Heinrich

i really enjoyed every minute of reading this book.

11mth
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Deathwatch99999

Overall, a great story could have had a better ending, though.

11mth
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Zuzu969
LV 15 Badge

I liked the story a lot. I felt there was some room for other stuff but it all worked out in the end.

11mth
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LimitlessLlamas

Gosh, this book was truly a rollercoaster of storytelling. The ending was amaz8ng and truly captured the essence of the novel! it made me feel content and was truly a masterful ending.

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11mth
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