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I'm starting out with a five, but may lower it as this continues. Hoping to have a stable update rate. The grammar is well enough especially for it being your fourth tongue. It's fun with him knowing future knowledge along with a magic from Fairy Tail so it'll be interesting to read. Keep it up, I need another long novel to enjoy :P
I maybe a bit bias here in giving a 5 but i like HP fanfics, this one has a whole lot of potential, so i am begging you to A) not prematurely drop this B) not botch it up lol C) Be consistent in your updates as you can (RL makes things hard i understand) D) continue to be awsome Good luck i am rooting for ya
Seems good so far but it's a little too early to tell if the quality will hold, that being said the setup seems good and I like the premise, so good luck I'm looking forward to reading more
I'm starting out with a five, but may lower it as this continues. Hoping to have a stable update rate. The grammar is well enough especially for it being your fourth tongue. It's fun with him knowing future knowledge along with a magic from Fairy Tail so it'll be interesting to read. Keep it up, I need another long novel to enjoy :P
I maybe a bit bias here in giving a 5 but i like HP fanfics, this one has a whole lot of potential, so i am begging you to A) not prematurely drop this B) not botch it up lol C) Be consistent in your updates as you can (RL makes things hard i understand) D) continue to be awsome Good luck i am rooting for ya
Seems good so far but it's a little too early to tell if the quality will hold, that being said the setup seems good and I like the premise, so good luck I'm looking forward to reading more