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My favorite Harry Potter FF that I’ve read so far. I started reading on RR and came here to comment that it needs to continue on and loose the hiatus tags.
Really well written, Characters are written with thought. i like how the story unfolded my only critique would be to not be so hung up on the mc and his knowledge of future events.
Por favor não deixe cair. É uma historia solida com um MC que não desaponta, forte, inflexível e leal a família. Su escrita também é maravilhosa, mantendo nosso interesse em cada palavra do capitulo
So far I love the story and how it's developed, it's easy to read and well thought out so far but I wished it was updated more often than it is.
This was absolutely amazing and I loved reading it, it has to be one of my absolute favourite reads for fan fictions, I really hope you continue it I’d love to see how wormtail gets his just dessert and would be interested on how things with Nacissa evolve
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Pls don't drop this it is a great and I mean a very fantastic read pls keep making chapters for I think I've found I book I actually would love to see have an ending
I think your story is really good hopefully you update I don't know if you're going to continue to update or not I wanted to say if you go to my thing where it shows like the word the circle thing is with people of commented or something you know like where you want to go usually you can click to that to go to someone's page I have a lot of fanfiction that you might be interested in don't know if you like to read other FanFiction on here if not anyone that goes to my little thing we'll see that I have what I'm reading and what's in my reading list and how you might find something in there that you don't have on your reading list so that's my hope
Write More chapters of black lagoon ff it's great although I didn't read this one since I'm not in Harry Potter all that much. Still great author
its better than other ff found on this app which are new. in terms of character development though mc having trouble controlling his temper due to his magic is kinda disappointing, I hope he learns to keep under control in later part of story.
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Most certainly quite a interesting and intriguing book that has caught my attention got me hooked on reading it even more especially with the MC being the lost son/their of The House Of Black not to mention all the different changes he has done as well his distrust of Dumbledore and what he done to The Malfoy Family look forward to reading more of this book quite intrigued by what will happen next especially during the trial of Peter Pettigrew not to mention overall this book has been quite interesting and intriguing in every way that I can't wait until ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
Uma otima historia... perfeita em tudo .... tem alguns errinho aqui e ali mas blz.... mas oq realmente importa e que a historia tem um ENORME POTENCIAL então por favor poderia continuar a historia.... e eu olhei suas atividades no webnovel e sr.Autor(a) ainda esta ativo... entao por favor continue a historia ... e caso nao for continuar porfavor fale nao gosto de alimentar falsas esperanças
Love it.. love it.. love it 😍😍😍😍 This is one of the best Harry Potter fanfiction i ever read.. can't wait to see next chapter (it's already 1 year.. please update soon author) 😁👍👍👍👍👍😍
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Bro, when will you be back to this history. I like it very much, couse there are so litle one's of a Regulus son. come back bro. . .. ... ....
It’s really a good work, with a great background and rationaly well planned. I love it. I hope author will post soon to give us good surprise. Thanks for this work. 🤟🏻🥰
This is a great story and I couldn’t put it down. I need more. Please update soon. It was fresh and I need a happy ending for Sirius, Harry and Magnus.
Writing quality is acceptable. Plot is chiched and a lot of information is dumped from the first chapter itself, making it a pain to read and remember. A nice attempt.
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Excelente historia la cuenta de una manera que llama mucho la atención de los lectores Me gustó muchísimo espero que el escritor siga este historia porque tiene un contexto diferente a las demás historias que he leído 5 estrellas sigue adelante
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Honestly one of the best novels I've read in quite a while..................................................................................................................
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Is this dropped????????? i've had it in my libary for sooooooo long but still no update. Please just tell me it's dropped or just slow, PLEASE.
Story is great and I am excited to read more but I dont know if this story will be continued???? After months of hiatus there was a chapter 3weeks ago soooo maybe it will?? Idk but lets hope it does lol
My favorite Harry Potter FF that I’ve read so far. I started reading on RR and came here to comment that it needs to continue on and loose the hiatus tags.
Really well written, Characters are written with thought. i like how the story unfolded my only critique would be to not be so hung up on the mc and his knowledge of future events.
Por favor não deixe cair. É uma historia solida com um MC que não desaponta, forte, inflexível e leal a família. Su escrita também é maravilhosa, mantendo nosso interesse em cada palavra do capitulo
So far I love the story and how it's developed, it's easy to read and well thought out so far but I wished it was updated more often than it is.
This was absolutely amazing and I loved reading it, it has to be one of my absolute favourite reads for fan fictions, I really hope you continue it I’d love to see how wormtail gets his just dessert and would be interested on how things with Nacissa evolve
Reveal Spoiler Pls don't drop this it is a great and I mean a very fantastic read pls keep making chapters for I think I've found I book I actually would love to see have an ending
I think your story is really good hopefully you update I don't know if you're going to continue to update or not I wanted to say if you go to my thing where it shows like the word the circle thing is with people of commented or something you know like where you want to go usually you can click to that to go to someone's page I have a lot of fanfiction that you might be interested in don't know if you like to read other FanFiction on here if not anyone that goes to my little thing we'll see that I have what I'm reading and what's in my reading list and how you might find something in there that you don't have on your reading list so that's my hope
Write More chapters of black lagoon ff it's great although I didn't read this one since I'm not in Harry Potter all that much. Still great author
its better than other ff found on this app which are new. in terms of character development though mc having trouble controlling his temper due to his magic is kinda disappointing, I hope he learns to keep under control in later part of story.
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One of the best HP fics on WN.. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Most certainly quite a interesting and intriguing book that has caught my attention got me hooked on reading it even more especially with the MC being the lost son/their of The House Of Black not to mention all the different changes he has done as well his distrust of Dumbledore and what he done to The Malfoy Family look forward to reading more of this book quite intrigued by what will happen next especially during the trial of Peter Pettigrew not to mention overall this book has been quite interesting and intriguing in every way that I can't wait until ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
Uma otima historia... perfeita em tudo .... tem alguns errinho aqui e ali mas blz.... mas oq realmente importa e que a historia tem um ENORME POTENCIAL então por favor poderia continuar a historia.... e eu olhei suas atividades no webnovel e sr.Autor(a) ainda esta ativo... entao por favor continue a historia ... e caso nao for continuar porfavor fale nao gosto de alimentar falsas esperanças
Love it.. love it.. love it 😍😍😍😍 This is one of the best Harry Potter fanfiction i ever read.. can't wait to see next chapter (it's already 1 year.. please update soon author) 😁👍👍👍👍👍😍
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Bro, when will you be back to this history. I like it very much, couse there are so litle one's of a Regulus son. come back bro. . .. ... ....
It’s really a good work, with a great background and rationaly well planned. I love it. I hope author will post soon to give us good surprise. Thanks for this work. 🤟🏻🥰
This is a great story and I couldn’t put it down. I need more. Please update soon. It was fresh and I need a happy ending for Sirius, Harry and Magnus.
Writing quality is acceptable. Plot is chiched and a lot of information is dumped from the first chapter itself, making it a pain to read and remember. A nice attempt.
I need more of this. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Excelente historia la cuenta de una manera que llama mucho la atención de los lectores Me gustó muchísimo espero que el escritor siga este historia porque tiene un contexto diferente a las demás historias que he leído 5 estrellas sigue adelante
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Honestly one of the best novels I've read in quite a while..................................................................................................................
--love the story and mc character----love the story and mc character----love the story and mc character----love the story and mc character----love the story and mc character----love the story and mc character----love the story and mc character----love the story and mc character----love the story and mc character----love the story and mc character----love the story and mc character--
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Is this dropped????????? i've had it in my libary for sooooooo long but still no update. Please just tell me it's dropped or just slow, PLEASE.
Story is great and I am excited to read more but I dont know if this story will be continued???? After months of hiatus there was a chapter 3weeks ago soooo maybe it will?? Idk but lets hope it does lol
Amazing story please update this story soon