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nonamecodex

As the saying goes.. "The grass is always greener on the other side of the fence". BUT remember, that 'greener grass' belongs to me. anyway here is the usual 'shameless' review. i am currently writing this story. As of now, there is only two chapters for testing the water.. cuzzz you know.. the first time writing and all.. enjoy... Also please be gentle senpai :D

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Arion_Sturmklinge

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Bly999
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has this been dropped as im unable to see it being updated its a shame as the story is really goood 5/5 enyway i need to make it so i can pos

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AsianLadyBoy

GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD!

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zebas8297

Good novel, bad creator............ 1234567890123467801236799 end bad 123579942wu99dkdbsjwehw7fbdkeodnwosnsqhdudneoznfhwizjfbsxisksoznwjidkxow

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kotarou28

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WealthyRaccoon

Not a hp story, effectively a full blown cultivation novel. I think my biggest issue is the clear intention to leave the HP world behind, ascending to a higher realm and what not. This is fine, but if you intended to throw away 90 percent of the HP world there's little reason to use it to begin with, and the narrative and structure of the story would be far better suited by a standard, cut and paste world of cultivation. Finally there's the massive over reliance on mythological figures to flesh out the story, at this point the author has yet to actually create anything, taking a Hindu mythos and forcing it to have aggressive sex with anything it can get it's claws on.

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Pavan1234

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GGMissFortune

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Dark_cloud47

Man, you’ve got guts using Meng Hao as your book cover. ISSTH is one of THE most classic cultivation wuxia novel ever. Do you think this can compare?

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TheFluffyMan

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Mumyum

Sooooooooooooooo....well?...is this novel any good????it seems to have so very many good reviewsπŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”the summary seems to make this story to be interesting😁😁😁😁😁maybe I'll give this a read once I've completed my other stories😘😘😘I am very interested... Ookay😳😳😳

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Teddy_Diaz

Love...i😍😍😍😍t..the story zz so damn good.....πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘the characters are fabulous....😚😚😚😚its not like other novels.....totally love it....😊😊😊😊😊😊...

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Nitrox2

The concept is interesting but the world is too different from the HP universe... It could have been great if you limited the character to only cultivate his soul and his body at his own pace, without interference. Stuff too complicated to understand mean you will lose lots of readers in your description. Simple is best. Improvement can be done on the punctuation. Bring energy in your story (without excess).

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frangky
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Well I think mc to rush for him to update the power. I think it will better to consolidate the realm first and move on to the next one in soul path. Also I think he need to have a knowledge before he is doing with his body. Well I still fine this novel quite good. Good luck

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Sai_Das
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Man this story is actually really interesting and I’m looking forward to reading this. I hope you don’t ruin it by making a massive harem like I see in most fanfics// maybe 2 would be fine? Anyway the writing quality is decent and so far updates are regular, hope you can keep up the pacing. Also is he going to be a condescending prick? That would kind of suck... but great story!

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Florian1990

Till now its pretty interesting. But i hope he will go now in volume 2 more for the magic instead the cultivation path. Author, keep up the good work and release faster. ;-)

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David_Sadam

I very like this story..........................don't drop this ................... ................and more chapter........................................................

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DaoIsLife

Don't drop it don't drop it don't drop it$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$&&$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$&&&&&&&&&$))bridgfifgkdbdufhekrvfjkdrgrjduggirvrudhdoejfvidbrrbrodbdirhfohroffhfoekhdkfjfibrofbdofbfkrjdjdvrjhr i fucking hate 140

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Kurama_is_tsundere

This is a review to encourage the author I haven't read the novel yet but I liked the concept of an immortal ending up in harry potter universe.

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EijiSeishuu

shameless review coming........................ . ................................................................................................................................................

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TianXia

Well, this is a new way of fanfic. Instead of normal reincarnation, this is a western and eastern novel combine together, i have not read it yet, but i will give you a high review for this new fanfic

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BangBangNeo

Nicely written novel tou got there. I just wish your update chapters are steady in the future and not dropping it suddenly. Your story development is steady, not like other half ass fanfiction. The character design and world development is also good. Just don't OP Jake too much, and let this story flow steadily. Good luck!

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nonamecodex

As the saying goes.. "The grass is always greener on the other side of the fence". BUT remember, that 'greener grass' belongs to me. anyway here is the usual 'shameless' review. i am currently writing this story. As of now, there is only two chapters for testing the water.. cuzzz you know.. the first time writing and all.. enjoy... Also please be gentle senpai :D

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Arion_Sturmklinge

sad that it isn t going on gggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg

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Bly999
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has this been dropped as im unable to see it being updated its a shame as the story is really goood 5/5 enyway i need to make it so i can pos

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AsianLadyBoy

GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD!

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zebas8297

Good novel, bad creator............ 1234567890123467801236799 end bad 123579942wu99dkdbsjwehw7fbdkeodnwosnsqhdudneoznfhwizjfbsxisksoznwjidkxow

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WealthyRaccoon

Not a hp story, effectively a full blown cultivation novel. I think my biggest issue is the clear intention to leave the HP world behind, ascending to a higher realm and what not. This is fine, but if you intended to throw away 90 percent of the HP world there's little reason to use it to begin with, and the narrative and structure of the story would be far better suited by a standard, cut and paste world of cultivation. Finally there's the massive over reliance on mythological figures to flesh out the story, at this point the author has yet to actually create anything, taking a Hindu mythos and forcing it to have aggressive sex with anything it can get it's claws on.

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Pavan1234

Good 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

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GGMissFortune

dumbledore has more mana/magic power than a nascent stage cultivator 🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣

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Dark_cloud47

Man, you’ve got guts using Meng Hao as your book cover. ISSTH is one of THE most classic cultivation wuxia novel ever. Do you think this can compare?

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TheFluffyMan

Take my review you great god of an author sama!!!!!! AAAAAATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATA!!!!!!!

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Mumyum

Sooooooooooooooo....well?...is this novel any good????it seems to have so very many good reviewsπŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”the summary seems to make this story to be interesting😁😁😁😁😁maybe I'll give this a read once I've completed my other stories😘😘😘I am very interested... Ookay😳😳😳

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Teddy_Diaz

Love...i😍😍😍😍t..the story zz so damn good.....πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘the characters are fabulous....😚😚😚😚its not like other novels.....totally love it....😊😊😊😊😊😊...

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Nitrox2

The concept is interesting but the world is too different from the HP universe... It could have been great if you limited the character to only cultivate his soul and his body at his own pace, without interference. Stuff too complicated to understand mean you will lose lots of readers in your description. Simple is best. Improvement can be done on the punctuation. Bring energy in your story (without excess).

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frangky
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Well I think mc to rush for him to update the power. I think it will better to consolidate the realm first and move on to the next one in soul path. Also I think he need to have a knowledge before he is doing with his body. Well I still fine this novel quite good. Good luck

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Sai_Das
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Man this story is actually really interesting and I’m looking forward to reading this. I hope you don’t ruin it by making a massive harem like I see in most fanfics// maybe 2 would be fine? Anyway the writing quality is decent and so far updates are regular, hope you can keep up the pacing. Also is he going to be a condescending prick? That would kind of suck... but great story!

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Florian1990

Till now its pretty interesting. But i hope he will go now in volume 2 more for the magic instead the cultivation path. Author, keep up the good work and release faster. ;-)

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Hidase

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David_Sadam

I very like this story..........................don't drop this ................... ................and more chapter........................................................

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DaoIsLife

Don't drop it don't drop it don't drop it$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$&&$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$&&&&&&&&&$))bridgfifgkdbdufhekrvfjkdrgrjduggirvrudhdoejfvidbrrbrodbdirhfohroffhfoekhdkfjfibrofbdofbfkrjdjdvrjhr i fucking hate 140

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EuMsm
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........................................................................................................................Very..interesting........................................................................................................................

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Kurama_is_tsundere

This is a review to encourage the author I haven't read the novel yet but I liked the concept of an immortal ending up in harry potter universe.

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EijiSeishuu

shameless review coming........................ . ................................................................................................................................................

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TianXia

Well, this is a new way of fanfic. Instead of normal reincarnation, this is a western and eastern novel combine together, i have not read it yet, but i will give you a high review for this new fanfic

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BangBangNeo

Nicely written novel tou got there. I just wish your update chapters are steady in the future and not dropping it suddenly. Your story development is steady, not like other half ass fanfiction. The character design and world development is also good. Just don't OP Jake too much, and let this story flow steadily. Good luck!

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