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Legit like 3/4 of the reviews are by "ravendxd" loser who only fives 5 stars. No hard feelings but that alone deserves this................................................
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Even some random dojo. Master have a chakra!! I'm sure this muggles is more stronger than Dumbledore 👎👎👎👎👎 what's wrong with this shit. And even Vernon is high lvl boss 👎👎😦 and Mc having too many useless skills gamer your dick! Reading this really makes me annoyed
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Harry Potters cousin is a rapist at age 11. Harry Potters aunt calls him a slut. a slut is a person who jumps bed to bed having sex with everyone on the way. I know his aunt doesnt care much about him in the books but they still let him live in the house. they showed some care toward his well being in the later books. this author has just poisoned the characters
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this a interesting look at Harry Potter/ the gamer. Harry gets the gamer system from Gaia and starts to fight the up hill battle that is his life two years earlier. the story itself is a good look at a 'what if' most of the character's are how they were in the book's but we get some explained. why do Vernon and aunt Petunia hate harry, well Petunia lost three pregnant's all dune to the blood magic that's suppose to protect. why lily not Petunia was a witch? well she was in this time line just a old man (Dumbledore) who thought he know's best got in the way. why is Hermione so competitive her cousin (who get's made a witch in this time line) the only problems are Ron and Dumbledore, Ron's more of a git and racist. Dumbledore more evil and manipulative but what they both do is in the scope of there Character in the books.
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It has so much potential but the translation is utter rubbish. I cant keep reading because the grammar is all over the place that it sometimes portray a very different meaning than what it probably means if translated properly. It also had a few good ideas that would have been amazing to explore. Alas, crap translations are always hard to read. Felt like i lost quite a few brain cells trying to decipher this
Legit like 3/4 of the reviews are by "ravendxd" loser who only fives 5 stars. No hard feelings but that alone deserves this................................................
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Even some random dojo. Master have a chakra!! I'm sure this muggles is more stronger than Dumbledore 👎👎👎👎👎 what's wrong with this shit. And even Vernon is high lvl boss 👎👎😦 and Mc having too many useless skills gamer your dick! Reading this really makes me annoyed
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Fffffffffffffffffffffffffgghhhjjnbbvgguiuytreeddfghjikjnbvvddsaweryuiiiijbvfresdttttyuuuujhhhgggtttttttttgtyhhgffryyhhhggfttuijhhgtt7iihhhcdsww24456789ijhgfrrfhhuiijjhggfdeerttyuuuujhhhgfffrredvhjyy67kvcsdhjiiookhvcdssawwrfcvhujnklpiujnvgtfcfredxswwrygvjiokjhgdewsrthhiino
Ummmmmmm................................................................. WHAT?!............................................................................. WHAT GOING ON HERE?!.....................................................
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Harry Potters cousin is a rapist at age 11. Harry Potters aunt calls him a slut. a slut is a person who jumps bed to bed having sex with everyone on the way. I know his aunt doesnt care much about him in the books but they still let him live in the house. they showed some care toward his well being in the later books. this author has just poisoned the characters
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this a interesting look at Harry Potter/ the gamer. Harry gets the gamer system from Gaia and starts to fight the up hill battle that is his life two years earlier. the story itself is a good look at a 'what if' most of the character's are how they were in the book's but we get some explained. why do Vernon and aunt Petunia hate harry, well Petunia lost three pregnant's all dune to the blood magic that's suppose to protect. why lily not Petunia was a witch? well she was in this time line just a old man (Dumbledore) who thought he know's best got in the way. why is Hermione so competitive her cousin (who get's made a witch in this time line) the only problems are Ron and Dumbledore, Ron's more of a git and racist. Dumbledore more evil and manipulative but what they both do is in the scope of there Character in the books.
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It has so much potential but the translation is utter rubbish. I cant keep reading because the grammar is all over the place that it sometimes portray a very different meaning than what it probably means if translated properly. It also had a few good ideas that would have been amazing to explore. Alas, crap translations are always hard to read. Felt like i lost quite a few brain cells trying to decipher this