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"Get your hands off me!" she wrestled against my grip, so I held her even tighter.
"Put this on!" I groaned, toiling to keep her in place and wishing again I’d worn the damn gloves. The feel of her warm skin under my arm and palm wasn’t helping my focus. "I'm not taking you home like this!"
"You don't tell me what to do!" she snapped, thrashing to break free of my hold as I fumbled with the cloak in my other hand, trying to drape it over her bare shoulders.
"I'm not going home! Let me go, I said!"
"Did you really think I got you out of there just to let you wander the streets, almost naked, like a lunatic?"
That stopped her.
"What did you call me?!"
"LU-NA-TIC."
"You... You…! Take your hands off me, you insolent brute!" Enraged, she yanked her arm too abruptly and lost her balance. I caught her, wrapped her in the cloak, and threw her over my shoulder.
"PUT ME DOWN!"
She shrieked and flailed, but I ignored her, making my way to the Commander’s house, which, thanks to Braa, was only two streets away. Since the entire population was in the square for the ridiculous festival, no one intervened at the frantic cries of the wild creature.
No wonder in the ten years I've known the Commander, I've never heard that he has a daughter. She must’ve been kept locked away.
Strangely, she suddenly went still and quiet.
Had she grown tired, worried about attracting attention, or finally realized how inappropriate it was to show up at her parents' doorstep in this state? She didn’t seem to care before.
With every step, my anxiety grew—she was limp.
"Hey!"
No answer.
Seriously?! "Hey, you!"
Nothing. A bad feeling crept over me, so I pulled her off my shoulder and into my arms. Her head fell against my chest—unconscious.
"Hey! Hey, you!" I shook her, but she didn’t react. Panic surged through me. Had she fainted? Had I held her too tight?
Lifting her more securely, I sprinted toward the Commander's house.
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ADDICTIVE + stable updates, equals the perfect receipt for me. I hope the author maintains this level, the idea surpasses everything I've read lately.
Gosh, the beginning is so full of angst! 😍 My type of novel! Good work, author! I can't wait to read more!
I felt like a fancy englishman reading the dialogue 10/10, also the storys a bit confusing but I liked the cast
I think this novel has a nice potential, its not the kind I usually spot here but it gets you hooks by a simple setting that revolves around a caste of lively characters
Intriguing start! And I am sold and hooked on the story! The characters are well designed, with pictures backing them! Amazing plot line. I was just browsing and suddenly the cover appeared in the feed. I am always a lover of good covers with beautiful girls, and the synopsis had me hooked. I can't bear when a damsel is in distress! I must embark on the journey to save them! And I must see the end of the story... Amazing!!!
This book is well thought out and well written. It's hard to follow at first, but the character's perspective in between worlds she lives in contrasts with her daily experience. All I can conclude is that this story has good potential! I give this work a 5/5 rating because I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for introducing me to this work of art!
The writing is good and smooth. The story is a bit confusing. The second and third prologues are long and somehow add to my confusion. But when the story begins, things become clearer. The world background needs to be more explained. It is a multi-realm background and should be taken one by one to be understandable for readers. At first, many characters do many things in many places. Try to focus on the MC from the beginning and let her discover the realms by herself. The first prologue is a good start, but if the first chapter began with Luna, maybe it would be simpler and easier because I really had a hard time tracking the story. All the best.
A masterpiece true work of good author are if you looking for some fresh novel.Then this one good.
this is kinda like transmigration but i like it. the idea seems original (yes i like books with original ideas) and any the charcacters iIwould rlly like to discover the two lives an sthe secrets which Luka has with her. Also yes iIlove the Ml his name is kinda hard to pronounce but it's ok there r a lot of strange name for characters in webnovel quinxfeng for example anyways good luck
So far the idea seems interesting. I would like to see the characters a little more developed. Maybe along the way. Her mind being transported overnight to another world and living two alternative lives it's a refreshing concept.
Writing is awesome without putting too much descriptions and good pacing too. Love the novel so far. Keep writing, Author!
A breath of fresh air Idea is interesting and the writing is pretty good!! story flows well with deep lore This novel has some nice characters and potential don't drop it!!
I really like the mc, anI really like the mc, and I just wanna help him. Nice work and very artisitc writing style, thanks for showing us! Deffo reccd! d I just wanna help him. Nice work and very artisitc writing style, thanks for showing us! Deffo reccd!
I love the fresh concept of living in two realities at the same time. It sounds quite fresh and I'm looking forward to more🥰🤗
This story concept has real potential. The idea of living parallel lives in different worlds when sleeping is totally unique. I'm fascinated to see how the medical mystery and dual reality twist play out across realms. Adding romantic elements and suspicious characters was a nice touch too. While parts are still ambiguous, the setup reels you in with its imaginative premise. If the narrative pays off on all its intriguing threads, this could be really memorable sci-fi fantasy. I'm looking forward to finding out more!
For full encouragement, I'm rewarding myself with the highest score, as I am deeply in love with this story and fascinated by all the events in it. I can't wait to get it out of my head and onto this virtual "paper." It's the first story that has compelled me to break out of my shell, and I want to share it with all those for whom it resonates and with all those who will become enthralled by it in the same way I am. Welcome to my fantasy world! I hope you enjoy your time here.
I walked into this book blindly but the world building and characters have me hooked. Can't wait to read more of it!