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The gender its's quite confusingly. and writing development is really good. then storyline it very neat 👍
The grammer is good enouph to be legible, but is highly annoying to read, and understand properly without needing to go over it a few times. Also the auther can't seem to stick with the gender specified for that character, constantly swiching between male and female pronawns. so overall the interesting begginings of a story but wrighting capabilities could be improved.
Just god it’s horrible…. I like the idea… but your execution is just plain terrible … the grammar is just inexcusable .
The gender its's quite confusingly. and writing development is really good. then storyline it very neat 👍
The grammer is good enouph to be legible, but is highly annoying to read, and understand properly without needing to go over it a few times. Also the auther can't seem to stick with the gender specified for that character, constantly swiching between male and female pronawns. so overall the interesting begginings of a story but wrighting capabilities could be improved.
Just god it’s horrible…. I like the idea… but your execution is just plain terrible … the grammar is just inexcusable .