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The first chapters have a few spelling mistakes and a little bad writing but it gets better(I hope) as I get used to this writing thing, as it is my first time writing a story.
The chapters are in the process of being a edited by an editor so the mistakes in the first chapter's should soon disappear and make the book more readable. This will also be the reason for when you will be seeing a lot of coments at the end of chapter but a little to no paragraph comments since the whole chapter is being replace by a new one in its place causing the paragraph comments to dissapear.Thanks.
Based on the stars I gave, I'm going to assume that it's pretty obvious that I like this book a lot, so to make it short, but hopefully helpful, I will mainly stick to pointing out cons (to many pros). For one, the characters are all very well made and everyone has an actual life in there and not just "MC is great", but then you have Rina, who in my opinion is the most engaging character even rivaling Aron, but she has almost no "screen time", lets call it (I am reading it on a phone so screen time it is). Another thing, is that while it is #kingdombuilding, I'm not sure I like how we went from 1. Family 2. Work 3. System, to a weird priority setup of 1. Work 2. Kingdom 3. System/Family. And it really irks me, because the story is nice and all, but while I didn't quite like Arons parents as characters for how passive they were (because they are normal humans and therfore can't suddenly lead a ministry/nation or whatever) they are still nice. However, when Rina or (sorry I don't want to spoil) the Xor'vac 'addition' came into view, the story was already so focused on being #kingdombuilding that they have almost no presence. Almost every time we see Rina with Aron in those later chapters is when she tries and sometimes even FAILS to drag Aron away from work. The fact that it makes this relationship look shaky makes it even worse. Now, I know I've been ranting, but those are basically just two and probably only major cons I see in this book. Otherwise it's great. I write this review in this way, because I like reading very much and often I can read anything as long as it doesn't push my buttons too much, but most review are either just bad or talk about good points only so maybe this will help someone looking for a good read more than just some flowery.
I can’t believe how terrible this book’s first chapter is. Some of the dumbest crap I have read, and even dumber that someone thought this was how you hook readers into a story.
This author clearly improve is writing quality during the first volume. Don’t know if he got an editor or he just improve by experience. The begin of the story feels a bit childish, but soon becomes better. First time I read I really enjoy the way he uses real names, but I feel it didint age well becouse of that. Also the story lost me on the villain arc, really badly design. There is a bunch of room for improvement, but if you ask me if the story is good overall I would say yes, and most importantly if you ask me about the author I would say he is talented enough to do a better novel to sit on top of webnovels.
Started reading this again from the start. Getting close to chapter 300, but the protagonist is still a major coward that hides his tech. It gets so boring having to read shit like "It looks like a normal gun, but it isn't". "Looks like a normal car, but it isn't", looks like a normal submarine, jet fighter or private jet... but it isn't!". Jesus Christ, he's so focused on hiding and being a coward that I'm losing my mind in sheer annoyance. Is it really that hard for an author to create an honest protagonist that isn't ruled by paranoia and fear? Why is spineless always the default go-to nature when designing a character... I really enjoy the type of novel this is, with a system and super tech. The only huge downside is the protagonist's cowardly nature, which removes the enjoyment factor you're supposed to get. He doesn't help the world by providing technological advancements. He only helps himself, and releases slightly better crap to the rest of the world. He doesn't stand up for himself openly when bullied. He just cowardly schemes behind the scenes. Overall, it just feels like it has such an enormous potential, but it's ruined by a spineless shit protagonist that has a hard-on for hiding and doing "behind the scenes" scheming. I really don't know if I can continue reading. Almost 300 chapters in and he's still a bitch. And now he started wasting time on women too, which adds absolutely nothing to the novel. I feel like he's not going to grow any balls at this rate, which makes me think that I'm just wasting my time trying to reach that point. It may never happen.
Writing Quality: 🌟(1/5) Story Development: 🌟🌟(2/5) Update Stability: 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟(5/5) World Background: 🌟(1/5) The grammar and spelling could really do some work. At first it wasn't really that noticeable but later on it went up from a few mistakes to the inability to read. The story is so bad the MC has to do military training even though he has a technology system. Also the MC is extremely stupid at points and is starting to get annoying. You do get a few points for the Sun Tzu shout outs.
This is just so damn "Perfect" man, After 'The_legendary_mechanic' this was 1st novel where every aspect is just so Damn Perfect if not better than any. Best part is system is not just some BS 'out of thin air' to make MC superpowerful, I mean it does make him powerful but "It have justification of its origin" which is rare very very rare like as rare as America having Black president man. As an Engineer myself I also loved how details of "Future High technology's " workings are given. I mean Just from that you can say howmuch hard work and dedication is put in this. I will 999999999% recommend it even if its your 1st time in this genre or webnovels. FOR AUTHOR; I REALLY REALLY LOVED YOUR WORK MAN. I HAVE NOT READ ANY OTHER OF YOURS BUT THIS ONE MADE ME WANT TO LOOK FOR THEM. AND CREATING ENTIRELY NEW COUNTRIES FOR YOUR NOVEL AND MAKING IT SEEM SO DAMN ORIGINAL WAS COOL IDEA MAN THAT JUST MADE IT MORE REAL. I HAVE REALLY LOT ....LIKE LOT TO SAY. BUT I SHOULD END IT..SO I AM GONNA JUST SAY... BIG FAN MAN. RESPECT🤝
Why tf is this rated high and have so many views? It has Chinese novel elements like scummy tactics from administration while being based in the US ...
This novel is very entertaining, if you want to be entertained. The plot and the twist can be said to be almost natural in the journey of the MC and his AI to master all the advanced tech they will need to maintain their advantage. As for the mispelling, they are forgivable.I've seen books worse in spelling and grammar that you will end up discarding the book out of confusion when reading. Kudos to the author and ediitor! Please continue to entertain us.
I starting to read modern Urban CN so this novel got me interested. To bad it was sucks. The story even worse than Strongest abandon son..
man it's been months since I've been stocking the chapters here well I only got 500+ chapters unlock in both accounts gonna re read this again man
Compared to its Asian counterparts in theme...its subpar ...sorry to say..being honest.. it just reaches a stage where you say you can eat a bite again because its not giving u any satisfaction but just filling u up...I usually read up to 50 chapters before I can pronounce judgments...but for books that can't even entice me to reach up there...its just...just... thanks for writing though...hope you evolve better..
Super histoire, les personnages sont attachant et leur développement intéressant. Continue comme ça [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
hello, Can you review this book----------------------------------------------------------------THE PART OF NO RETURN : FIRST HUMAN EMPIRE------------------------------ Please
Just to say idk who its on but yall should be careful on some mistakes, nothing major so far but mars is a roman god and ares is a greek god
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Till Chapter 447. The novel with too much logic and an advanced system suddenly seems to have become stupid. I mean there are too many illogical parts. Like if you can create so many things, then how difficult is it to plant sensors all over major cities and transportation that can check bomb-like substances ? If you can check distant space and know aliens are coming then how difficult is it to capture hidden rats and hidden bombs storage in the very planet you live in by just scanning it? I am saying all this because it's not a simple wish fulfilment novel as far as I read with all the realistic elements. So seeing this plot when there are too many super ai makes it question their intelligence. And it's not like they don't have knowledge of past wars and how soldiers worked at that time to hide so this also doesn't make sense.
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started out good but that magic bs shit ruined it. I was okay with it at first if he was the only one with the magic but I dropped when I saw that his little brother apparently can see the "golden blood"
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[SPOILER] A mc with an advanced army technically wins a war against the whole world united against him, but when he gets even more advanced he is basically hopeless against a very destituted and useless villain which should have been removed of the face of the planet in seconds. Dude controls everything in the world, has super complex intelligence AIs yet he is unaware of simple rebel/terrorist activities. They somehow manage to attack thousands of locations at the same time without any of the AIs seeing something weird (same AIs that managed to detect an alien spaceship heading towards Earth without its light even reaching them yet). The plots are very forced and even though it was a good read until chapter 400, it just became stupid at that point.
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mc is just emotional teenager. who just fallen in love the first woman. also all those tools that will make great ruler made him just a emotional melodramatic drama king. romance is there for those you lot the see, a cumbersome addition.
It’s cool to see how this story evolved from a guy trying to run a company to being the emperor of earth. I am very excited to see where this story goes. Hope the author doesn’t give up. That would be real shame. But that doesn’t seem likely. Just read it. I think it’s really worth it.
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It was a good read until alien threat came and MC wanted to unite the whole earth, started a war and became emperor. It was pure torture and irritating to read. After the sanction against Eden, the more you read the more the quality of the story drops.
Great novel with lots of technology, a bit of face-slapping, business, governance & interesting world building. I am really enjoying the read and really hope that the author perseveres and finishes this!
Author's shameless review here. well give it a read and tell me your opinion I will write another review after we reach about 30 chapters. Thanks.
The first chapters have a few spelling mistakes and a little bad writing but it gets better(I hope) as I get used to this writing thing, as it is my first time writing a story.
The chapters are in the process of being a edited by an editor so the mistakes in the first chapter's should soon disappear and make the book more readable. This will also be the reason for when you will be seeing a lot of coments at the end of chapter but a little to no paragraph comments since the whole chapter is being replace by a new one in its place causing the paragraph comments to dissapear.Thanks.
Based on the stars I gave, I'm going to assume that it's pretty obvious that I like this book a lot, so to make it short, but hopefully helpful, I will mainly stick to pointing out cons (to many pros). For one, the characters are all very well made and everyone has an actual life in there and not just "MC is great", but then you have Rina, who in my opinion is the most engaging character even rivaling Aron, but she has almost no "screen time", lets call it (I am reading it on a phone so screen time it is). Another thing, is that while it is #kingdombuilding, I'm not sure I like how we went from 1. Family 2. Work 3. System, to a weird priority setup of 1. Work 2. Kingdom 3. System/Family. And it really irks me, because the story is nice and all, but while I didn't quite like Arons parents as characters for how passive they were (because they are normal humans and therfore can't suddenly lead a ministry/nation or whatever) they are still nice. However, when Rina or (sorry I don't want to spoil) the Xor'vac 'addition' came into view, the story was already so focused on being #kingdombuilding that they have almost no presence. Almost every time we see Rina with Aron in those later chapters is when she tries and sometimes even FAILS to drag Aron away from work. The fact that it makes this relationship look shaky makes it even worse. Now, I know I've been ranting, but those are basically just two and probably only major cons I see in this book. Otherwise it's great. I write this review in this way, because I like reading very much and often I can read anything as long as it doesn't push my buttons too much, but most review are either just bad or talk about good points only so maybe this will help someone looking for a good read more than just some flowery.
I can’t believe how terrible this book’s first chapter is. Some of the dumbest crap I have read, and even dumber that someone thought this was how you hook readers into a story.
This author clearly improve is writing quality during the first volume. Don’t know if he got an editor or he just improve by experience. The begin of the story feels a bit childish, but soon becomes better. First time I read I really enjoy the way he uses real names, but I feel it didint age well becouse of that. Also the story lost me on the villain arc, really badly design. There is a bunch of room for improvement, but if you ask me if the story is good overall I would say yes, and most importantly if you ask me about the author I would say he is talented enough to do a better novel to sit on top of webnovels.
Started reading this again from the start. Getting close to chapter 300, but the protagonist is still a major coward that hides his tech. It gets so boring having to read shit like "It looks like a normal gun, but it isn't". "Looks like a normal car, but it isn't", looks like a normal submarine, jet fighter or private jet... but it isn't!". Jesus Christ, he's so focused on hiding and being a coward that I'm losing my mind in sheer annoyance. Is it really that hard for an author to create an honest protagonist that isn't ruled by paranoia and fear? Why is spineless always the default go-to nature when designing a character... I really enjoy the type of novel this is, with a system and super tech. The only huge downside is the protagonist's cowardly nature, which removes the enjoyment factor you're supposed to get. He doesn't help the world by providing technological advancements. He only helps himself, and releases slightly better crap to the rest of the world. He doesn't stand up for himself openly when bullied. He just cowardly schemes behind the scenes. Overall, it just feels like it has such an enormous potential, but it's ruined by a spineless shit protagonist that has a hard-on for hiding and doing "behind the scenes" scheming. I really don't know if I can continue reading. Almost 300 chapters in and he's still a bitch. And now he started wasting time on women too, which adds absolutely nothing to the novel. I feel like he's not going to grow any balls at this rate, which makes me think that I'm just wasting my time trying to reach that point. It may never happen.
Writing Quality: 🌟(1/5) Story Development: 🌟🌟(2/5) Update Stability: 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟(5/5) World Background: 🌟(1/5) The grammar and spelling could really do some work. At first it wasn't really that noticeable but later on it went up from a few mistakes to the inability to read. The story is so bad the MC has to do military training even though he has a technology system. Also the MC is extremely stupid at points and is starting to get annoying. You do get a few points for the Sun Tzu shout outs.
This is just so damn "Perfect" man, After 'The_legendary_mechanic' this was 1st novel where every aspect is just so Damn Perfect if not better than any. Best part is system is not just some BS 'out of thin air' to make MC superpowerful, I mean it does make him powerful but "It have justification of its origin" which is rare very very rare like as rare as America having Black president man. As an Engineer myself I also loved how details of "Future High technology's " workings are given. I mean Just from that you can say howmuch hard work and dedication is put in this. I will 999999999% recommend it even if its your 1st time in this genre or webnovels. FOR AUTHOR; I REALLY REALLY LOVED YOUR WORK MAN. I HAVE NOT READ ANY OTHER OF YOURS BUT THIS ONE MADE ME WANT TO LOOK FOR THEM. AND CREATING ENTIRELY NEW COUNTRIES FOR YOUR NOVEL AND MAKING IT SEEM SO DAMN ORIGINAL WAS COOL IDEA MAN THAT JUST MADE IT MORE REAL. I HAVE REALLY LOT ....LIKE LOT TO SAY. BUT I SHOULD END IT..SO I AM GONNA JUST SAY... BIG FAN MAN. RESPECT🤝
Why tf is this rated high and have so many views? It has Chinese novel elements like scummy tactics from administration while being based in the US ...
This novel is very entertaining, if you want to be entertained. The plot and the twist can be said to be almost natural in the journey of the MC and his AI to master all the advanced tech they will need to maintain their advantage. As for the mispelling, they are forgivable.I've seen books worse in spelling and grammar that you will end up discarding the book out of confusion when reading. Kudos to the author and ediitor! Please continue to entertain us.
I starting to read modern Urban CN so this novel got me interested. To bad it was sucks. The story even worse than Strongest abandon son..
man it's been months since I've been stocking the chapters here well I only got 500+ chapters unlock in both accounts gonna re read this again man
Compared to its Asian counterparts in theme...its subpar ...sorry to say..being honest.. it just reaches a stage where you say you can eat a bite again because its not giving u any satisfaction but just filling u up...I usually read up to 50 chapters before I can pronounce judgments...but for books that can't even entice me to reach up there...its just...just... thanks for writing though...hope you evolve better..
Super histoire, les personnages sont attachant et leur développement intéressant. Continue comme ça [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
hello, Can you review this book----------------------------------------------------------------THE PART OF NO RETURN : FIRST HUMAN EMPIRE------------------------------ Please
Just to say idk who its on but yall should be careful on some mistakes, nothing major so far but mars is a roman god and ares is a greek god
Reveal Spoiler Till Chapter 447. The novel with too much logic and an advanced system suddenly seems to have become stupid. I mean there are too many illogical parts. Like if you can create so many things, then how difficult is it to plant sensors all over major cities and transportation that can check bomb-like substances ? If you can check distant space and know aliens are coming then how difficult is it to capture hidden rats and hidden bombs storage in the very planet you live in by just scanning it? I am saying all this because it's not a simple wish fulfilment novel as far as I read with all the realistic elements. So seeing this plot when there are too many super ai makes it question their intelligence. And it's not like they don't have knowledge of past wars and how soldiers worked at that time to hide so this also doesn't make sense.
Reveal Spoiler started out good but that magic bs shit ruined it. I was okay with it at first if he was the only one with the magic but I dropped when I saw that his little brother apparently can see the "golden blood"
Reveal Spoiler ...,.......,...................,..............................................................................................................
Reveal Spoiler [SPOILER] A mc with an advanced army technically wins a war against the whole world united against him, but when he gets even more advanced he is basically hopeless against a very destituted and useless villain which should have been removed of the face of the planet in seconds. Dude controls everything in the world, has super complex intelligence AIs yet he is unaware of simple rebel/terrorist activities. They somehow manage to attack thousands of locations at the same time without any of the AIs seeing something weird (same AIs that managed to detect an alien spaceship heading towards Earth without its light even reaching them yet). The plots are very forced and even though it was a good read until chapter 400, it just became stupid at that point.
Reveal Spoiler mc is just emotional teenager. who just fallen in love the first woman. also all those tools that will make great ruler made him just a emotional melodramatic drama king. romance is there for those you lot the see, a cumbersome addition.
It’s cool to see how this story evolved from a guy trying to run a company to being the emperor of earth. I am very excited to see where this story goes. Hope the author doesn’t give up. That would be real shame. But that doesn’t seem likely. Just read it. I think it’s really worth it.
Reveal Spoiler It was a good read until alien threat came and MC wanted to unite the whole earth, started a war and became emperor. It was pure torture and irritating to read. After the sanction against Eden, the more you read the more the quality of the story drops.
Great novel with lots of technology, a bit of face-slapping, business, governance & interesting world building. I am really enjoying the read and really hope that the author perseveres and finishes this!
Author's shameless review here. well give it a read and tell me your opinion I will write another review after we reach about 30 chapters. Thanks.