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Hello, I am the Author. I not only wrote this to give me five stars but to thank you for reading. If you want to improve your reading experience you can read the comments where I will be leaving images to give you an idea or any feedback. And please. If you like the story, add it to your library, vote and comment on it. Thanks for reading~.
The writing/story needs more Explanations and context, the characters are okay, but the story pace is pretty slow, and the story itself is very generic... Please change your writing, and add more Explanations and Contexts, idc if english isn't your first or native language, people can improve, so you can do it too, author :)
WQ : 3s :As far as 20 chapters go, It's pretty bad, it's hard to read, though near the 20 chapter mark it was getting better, and I hope it gets better. SD : 4s : It's a pretty good pace, not too slow and not so fast , enjoyable to say the least. CD : 4s : It's good, like, it's better than most . US : 5s : Based off of the dates, I can say it's pretty stable WB : 4s : I haven't explored much, since 20 chapters is not that of a long one, so all I can give is 4 star, and it was pretty good for an earlier chapter. So overall review is 4s. All right, that's my honest review, it was a good ride author, goodluck with the story.
I really like the book. at first you may find the chapter are short even some grammatical mistake but as you see the development of author alongside their character. You have to be patient ☺️😹. I love the development of the book and how Mc got quickly used to change too. Give it a try☺️☺️
The writing is quite well for a non-English speaker and is easy to read. The writing is really good if you’re able to fill in the words yourself. The biggest problem is the grammar issues, it’s difficult to understand if the author is explaining something or if someone is speaking half the time and you will need to re-read a few paragraphs. This does become less of a problem as the novel has progressed. The novel is written in first person which is both a different uniqueness but also sometimes confusing when the POV is changed between the early chapters. For these reasons alone are why I deducted any points. The updates seem to be quite consistent, and you can tell the author has gotten more comfortable as the series has progressed, a lot of the early chapters were quite short and were increased as the series has developed. It’s a very interesting story and unique characters will draw you in as long as you’re able to get past a lot of the earlier mistakes.
Second review. I will say that since the second volume everything has become cooler, Adad's personality is being defined and also the lack of action in the last chapters is being rewarded. I think if you make it through 20 chapters you can enjoy this read. I look forward to seeing how it develops.
The novel is good, I hope to see the progress in the relationship between Adad and Emilia......................... .....................................................
A really good read and highly recommended. But I have not given the five stars because of these things. 1. I think the Author is not a native English speaker but it is readable and personally it doesn't bother me. 2. The first few chapters are really very short, maybe less than 1000 words. The rest is good, I just hope he continues with a good job.
very nice ...............................................................................................................................................................................
The author has a picture to portray through their words. And they do that well enough for the reader to understand the theme of it. The world created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline.
What i like about this story is the descriptions that it brings up, the rich history and the fillers, but at the same time it gets a big long and loses me a bit. Other than that, i enjoyed the main characters struggle and his adventures. Keep it up
good story, I like kingdom building and similar types of stories. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The book is great; your writing quality and style are simple and self-explanatory. The plot is also simple to understand and the world-building was incorporated smartly. in general, I am yet to find any fault with the novel; of course, it is not my mission to find any. nice one, keep it up...
The characters in your novel are quite impressive, my friend. How did you do it. ...... I hope their relationship can have a happy ending somehow. :) Nice romance novel. Get work and countinue written.
The starting chapters are a little short and the world building could be improved further. The grammar is not very good but it is readable and I who also doesn't speak English as my first language can understand your struggles. The novel is good and I recommend others reading it and giving it a shot :)
This is an interesting story and good world development along with the characters, there are a few grammar issues but the author keeps on growing along side with the story. I highly recommend this [img=recommend]
A very nice and addicting book, I'm quite impressed by the author's method of writing. I'll recommend this book to those who love this kind of book and author please keep writing and don't stop.
The first chapters are very short, but the last ones are normal, give it a chance. (Translator) .....................................................................
I write through an interpreter. Hi, and when you post your new novel, it's just not on the profile page, and I wish you good luck in your new works.
Hi, it's me again. Just to say that if you are interested I have already posted a list of characters with their respective images. Give it a check. Pd: Contains Spoilers