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Good Novel to read but a bit short right now. Hope the release will be a bit more maybe. Overall only a 4 Star right now because it is a bit too early to be rated
I don't know why but I'm really excited to see the upcoming chapters. Just reading the synopsis catchesd my interest. This kind of novel is what I'm vouching to read all day long!
That's much beyond my expectations. The hype and actions you will feel in the first few chapters will make you want to keep reading. And when you will read the last chapter, you will be left wondering about the story and would wish for more chapters. UPLOAD MORE CHAPTERS! Yes, that was for you author.
After reading the synopsis and the first three chapters, I can say that it's my lucky day. To stumble upon such interesting book. I really appreciate the way the author put the hook, it gave you the urge to read the next chapter. It was well written, I recommend to everyone who loves reading gangsta things to give it a try. You'll surely be fascinated.
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The premise is interesting and you can write the antagonist character well, my mate. it made me want to support the main character in order to beat them. Keep it up! 👍👍👍
Every chapter was action-packed with great characters to root for and antagonists you would want to scream "death". Well written with great world background and story plot. Every climatic twist would make you binge-read this novel and I highly recommend you do. Looking forward to reading more chapters
The action scene in the first chapter is so cool! I feel like I'm part of the Dungeon's crowd and cheering for Flynn. He's a good fighter and I'm looking for forthcoming character development!
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The story is truly intriguing band it has great plot. I'm also starting to like Flynn. He seems like he would really be an interesting character to read about
5/5 (⌒▽⌒)☆ Good cover, great synopsis, interesting storyline ヽ(*・ω・)ﾉ I personally like how action-packed the first few chapters are! Because of that, the author has successfully brought me into the world he wanted me to imagine. I feel like I am in those scenes as an audience! ( ◕▿◕ ) The way the story is being narrated has originality and in my opinion, this writing style can distinguish the novel from other action-packed novels (*￣▽￣)b Keep uploading chapters and good luck! (〃＾▽＾〃)
Cover: 5/5, The cover edits is really amazing. One glance and I can already tell how much effort went into. Synopsis: 4/5. Although there are some info dumping in the synopsis, I was able to tell what's going on and what the story would be about. Grammar: 5/5. Grammar wise, this novel is so much better than 90% of the novels in here. There aren't any sentences in this novel that would suddenly changed it tenses midway so I'm happy about this. Writing: 4.5/5. Story wise and the writing structure is mesmerizing. I have been thoroughly impressed by author's unique way of storytelling and I can't wait to read more. Overall: 4.8/5. Would I recommend this novel to you? The answer would be yes and you should read it to prove my review right.
Good Novel to read but a bit short right now. Hope the release will be a bit more maybe. Overall only a 4 Star right now because it is a bit too early to be rated
I don't know why but I'm really excited to see the upcoming chapters. Just reading the synopsis catchesd my interest. This kind of novel is what I'm vouching to read all day long!
That's much beyond my expectations. The hype and actions you will feel in the first few chapters will make you want to keep reading. And when you will read the last chapter, you will be left wondering about the story and would wish for more chapters. UPLOAD MORE CHAPTERS! Yes, that was for you author.
After reading the synopsis and the first three chapters, I can say that it's my lucky day. To stumble upon such interesting book. I really appreciate the way the author put the hook, it gave you the urge to read the next chapter. It was well written, I recommend to everyone who loves reading gangsta things to give it a try. You'll surely be fascinated.
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Reveal Spoiler The premise is interesting and you can write the antagonist character well, my mate. it made me want to support the main character in order to beat them. Keep it up! 👍👍👍
Every chapter was action-packed with great characters to root for and antagonists you would want to scream "death". Well written with great world background and story plot. Every climatic twist would make you binge-read this novel and I highly recommend you do. Looking forward to reading more chapters
The action scene in the first chapter is so cool! I feel like I'm part of the Dungeon's crowd and cheering for Flynn. He's a good fighter and I'm looking for forthcoming character development!
Reveal Spoiler The story is truly intriguing band it has great plot. I'm also starting to like Flynn. He seems like he would really be an interesting character to read about
5/5 (⌒▽⌒)☆ Good cover, great synopsis, interesting storyline ヽ(*・ω・)ﾉ I personally like how action-packed the first few chapters are! Because of that, the author has successfully brought me into the world he wanted me to imagine. I feel like I am in those scenes as an audience! ( ◕▿◕ ) The way the story is being narrated has originality and in my opinion, this writing style can distinguish the novel from other action-packed novels (*￣▽￣)b Keep uploading chapters and good luck! (〃＾▽＾〃)
Cover: 5/5, The cover edits is really amazing. One glance and I can already tell how much effort went into. Synopsis: 4/5. Although there are some info dumping in the synopsis, I was able to tell what's going on and what the story would be about. Grammar: 5/5. Grammar wise, this novel is so much better than 90% of the novels in here. There aren't any sentences in this novel that would suddenly changed it tenses midway so I'm happy about this. Writing: 4.5/5. Story wise and the writing structure is mesmerizing. I have been thoroughly impressed by author's unique way of storytelling and I can't wait to read more. Overall: 4.8/5. Would I recommend this novel to you? The answer would be yes and you should read it to prove my review right.