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Write a reviewSelf indulgent power fantasy for kids and teenagers, not really worth reading unless you have nothing else to do. Characters barely exist, MC is boring and delusional, plot.. what plot? Actually can't find anything good about this story at all.
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You get 5 stars......................................................................................................................................................................
Let's continue, you have a good beginning. In the game of webnovels you write/win or 💀/drop It's joke but continue with your work Many people don't read novels with less than 10 or 20 chapters
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Reveal SpoilerSelf indulgent power fantasy for kids and teenagers, not really worth reading unless you have nothing else to do. Characters barely exist, MC is boring and delusional, plot.. what plot? Actually can't find anything good about this story at all.
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You get 5 stars......................................................................................................................................................................
Let's continue, you have a good beginning. In the game of webnovels you write/win or 💀/drop It's joke but continue with your work Many people don't read novels with less than 10 or 20 chapters
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