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Its a little rushed at first and the guy hides his strength until later, but its good, the guy gets a junior sister and tests her character for 3 years (at least he doesnt instantly trust her) by letting her see small bits and pieces of his secrets, like alchemy or arrays etc After trusting her, he becomes her master/brother type relationship, he teaches her cultivation and what not, its really cute I love the novel, minus a few chapters in the start, the author doesn't know how to time skip very well but i got past it
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Its a little bland for me(own opinion), It felt bland for me because of how many times I have read novels like this. I felt that when I stop reading ill stop forever type of thing that could easily get bored at. Also some part of the chapters I felt I have read before in another novel.
Pretty decent start although there is some confusion with how the sign in system works and I'm not sure if the author or translator are at fault.... but it was entertaining and the sample left off at the perfect spot to make you want mooooor.
Another trash sign in system novel with copy paste plot. I'm tired of read these half a** novels. Give us something interesting and somewhat new in a sense.
Step 1 of being a lazy writer: Read a few cultivation novels. Step 2: Write a cultivation novel copying what you read but change the names of characters and techniques. Change the order that events happen. Step 3: Profit! Cultivation novels are the most unoriginal genre out there. Read 2 or 3 and you have read them all. I actually started falling asleep reading this.
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Nothing deep critics, i have enjoyed it. Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooiooood. Goooooooooooood and Goooooooooiiiiiiokoooooooooooooooooooooooiioiiiioooooood
this novel is a disappointment. it's on the lower levels of sign in novels. wouldn't bother reading it, absolutely no pace control, depth or thoughts. you might find ten of the same type lying around on webnovel.
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Honestly it looks but first we should get those ones before picked up as well. It's hard to enjoy novels like these or even read them because most of them don't get picked...
i hope this one gets picked ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Its a little rushed at first and the guy hides his strength until later, but its good, the guy gets a junior sister and tests her character for 3 years (at least he doesnt instantly trust her) by letting her see small bits and pieces of his secrets, like alchemy or arrays etc After trusting her, he becomes her master/brother type relationship, he teaches her cultivation and what not, its really cute I love the novel, minus a few chapters in the start, the author doesn't know how to time skip very well but i got past it
Reveal Spoiler does anyone have the raw title?........................................................................................ ................... ....
ππππ............... ..........,....................... .................................. . ............................................
aaaaaqweusowkslakmssmeolsowlwpppwlsksksskkslsksowkkwoowlwpplwlapaplamaksnsndnsslspskisoeowpqp0qowo29203837oqmspwrh9d0nr0uwrj0f7ek10shd0sj0wksq
Its a little bland for me(own opinion), It felt bland for me because of how many times I have read novels like this. I felt that when I stop reading ill stop forever type of thing that could easily get bored at. Also some part of the chapters I felt I have read before in another novel.
Pretty decent start although there is some confusion with how the sign in system works and I'm not sure if the author or translator are at fault.... but it was entertaining and the sample left off at the perfect spot to make you want mooooor.
Another trash sign in system novel with copy paste plot. I'm tired of read these half a** novels. Give us something interesting and somewhat new in a sense.
Step 1 of being a lazy writer: Read a few cultivation novels. Step 2: Write a cultivation novel copying what you read but change the names of characters and techniques. Change the order that events happen. Step 3: Profit! Cultivation novels are the most unoriginal genre out there. Read 2 or 3 and you have read them all. I actually started falling asleep reading this.
Keep it up please Nice novel Like it very much Waiting for updates Keep it up please Nice novel Like it very much Waiting for updates
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Nothing deep critics, i have enjoyed it. Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooiooood. Goooooooooooood and Goooooooooiiiiiiokoooooooooooooooooooooooiioiiiioooooood
this novel is a disappointment. it's on the lower levels of sign in novels. wouldn't bother reading it, absolutely no pace control, depth or thoughts. you might find ten of the same type lying around on webnovel.
hope this book is chosen[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Honestly it looks but first we should get those ones before picked up as well. It's hard to enjoy novels like these or even read them because most of them don't get picked...
i hope this one gets picked ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Can't the translator give out the raw links or raw name